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| kimjo2 (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| horrid, indeed! but entirely in character. well done and smoochies |
| 2010/08/26 - 15:37 |
| tenoh27 (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| A well-crafted and exciting story. The characterisations of HG and SS are also very commendable. Looking forward to the development of the HGSS relationship and the resolution of the plot. Thank you very much for sharing this story with us. |
| 2010/08/25 - 03:36 |
| aurora borealis (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| He shares in their adventure and then takes points from them? Horrid, horrid man indeed - and perfectly in character. I love the way you are writing Snape! I'm glad to see Hermione is standing up to him. I am also enjoying the humor - there are some really funny lines in this chapter. |
| 2010/08/24 - 21:25 |
| littleone17 (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| A horrid, horrid man indeed. Wonderful chapter again. I love poor Hermione's attempts at being sneaky. She's not awful, but she needs some practice, maybe Snape can help with that. Very much looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2010/08/22 - 01:05 |
| MsTree (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| Niiiice! ^_^ |
| 2010/08/21 - 13:50 |
| ClayPotter (Signed ) | 6: Progress |
| Boy, she was lucky Snape was strong enough to catch her. And after that gallant feat of acrobatics, he must have felt it his just reward to take house points. Cruel, cold, and very low, but also very Snape. |
| 2010/08/20 - 22:04 |
| littleone17 (Signed ) | 5: In Which a Fish is Caught |
| Hmm. Intreguing story. Where is Snape going to be going with all this information. Is Hermione's trust going to last? Quite interesting so far, very much looking forward to further chapters. Excellent job with the personalities and thought processes of your characters. |
| 2010/08/18 - 13:00 |
| SpSt (Signed ) | 5: In Which a Fish is Caught |
| This story is fantastic! I can't wait for an update! Really clever premise! |
| 2010/08/08 - 15:48 |
| aurora borealis (Signed ) | 5: In Which a Fish is Caught |
| Really enjoying this! The characterizations are good, and you have added some nice twists. |
| 2010/08/04 - 13:34 |
| kittyperry (Signed ) | 5: In Which a Fish is Caught |
| Cool. I liked the way Severus got Hermione to suggest he teach her legilemency. Very Slytherinesque. |
| 2010/08/04 - 09:43 |
| ClayPotter (Signed ) | 5: In Which a Fish is Caught |
| I have read many stories of the last couple of years of the HP series from various POVs and with different twists. I even wrote one myself. This one is fascinating. SS is very much in character, as is HG. I am enjoying this twist and I look forward to more. It will be very interesting to see his internal struggle as he decides what to tell her of his promise to kill Dumbledore and how that will affect their relationship. Great job. |
| 2010/08/04 - 09:18 |
| kimjo2 (Signed ) | 4: A Partnership Begins |
| wonderful update. thanks so much |
| 2010/06/28 - 13:34 |
| snapify52 (Signed ) | 4: A Partnership Begins |
| Wow. What a mysterious character this Severus Snape is. I can't wait to read more. I really like your characters and am just intrigued as hell. |
| 2010/06/15 - 20:13 |
| snapify52 (Signed ) | 1: Hermione |
| Okay, I'm hooked. And thoroughly. Great first chapter -- thanks for writing and sharing! |
| 2010/06/15 - 19:41 |
| maria (Signed ) | 4: A Partnership Begins |
| Well done! This is coming along very nicely. Great in-character dialogue! |
| 2010/06/13 - 20:15 |
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