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|HBAR (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
|Boy am I glad I didn't start this until it was finished! It is rare to see a story where Dumbledore does good things. What a great original idea in what happened to Hermione and Sirius. I'm just glad it didn't really happen. I enjoyed this story very much.|
LOL, I cried through writing it as well...and wanted to kill Harry
Glad you enjoyed.
|2010/02/11 - 20:41|
|HermioneWeasley1972 (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
|YAY! Now you have to write their story, you know that right?|
LOL, I'll think about it
glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the review
|2010/02/11 - 15:56|
|Sampdoria (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
I still love this story. It is one of those who first makes me cry sad tears, then smile and shed some tears of joy. I am quite sure I will do so all over again in the future when I read it again one day. It is amazing
Author's Response: thank you, I'm delighted it pulled emotions from you, it means it worked:)
|2010/02/11 - 12:51|
|sandlapper (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
|I have never been a fan of HG/SB, I prefer HG/SS, but something told me to read this one...I am SO glad that I did. It was refreshing to finally see Harry brought to task for his meddling in Hermione's life. I always thought his character was so quick to act before he thought (canon and fanon) so I loved the way you handled him. This time he got to see what havoc he created by opening mouth and inserting foot...|
Again, wonderfully done...I will be checking out anything you post in future!! Even if it isn't my fave pairing!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review
I have a real weakness for SB, and normally post first on Grangerenchanted...there are a couple of shorts and a very long one there
sandlapper's response: Don't get me wrong, even though I am a sucker for SS, I quite like SB too, especially Gary Oldman as SB!! I just don't see Hermione falling for him. Of course, I can't believe she ended up with the Weasel in canon either. I guess it is because I identify with Hermione in that I was always the swot that had no girlfriends myself. I was one of the guys and they treated me that way. When the rest of the girls in my class were getting up at the crack of dawn to get made up for school I was worrying whether I had all my homework done. Needless to say, I was a late bloomer and the bad boys were the first place I looked!! That being said, I really did enjoy your writing and I will be looking you up on GE to see what else will catch my attention. And I like Ginny with Sirius. I think even as young as she is, she would be able to handle him as well as Molly ever handled her boys!!!
Author's Response: LOl, sounds very familiar..at 19 I was running around with the Kent Angels, tring to keep out of mischief ...and failing, I was the swot at school, as well...and still haven't learned how to do the girlfriend thing:) clothes keep you warm and make-up is for holidays and high days....but the sight of a leather jacket, jeans and long hair still has me trying to remember where I left my morals...
I even married a bad boy, who turned out to be an amazing husband...and has been for 18 years (near enough)
I can't stand the thought of the hyper intelligent Hermione stuck with momma's boy Ron
I love SS as well, Alan Rickman's voice should be X rated..
|2010/02/11 - 12:08|
|blue artemis (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
|I'm so glad he got the second chance. The first chapter was so sad. |
Author's Response: thank you, glad it worked for you
|2010/02/11 - 10:12|
|ClayPotter (Signed )||2: Chapter 2|
|Fascinating. I love time-line stories. I grew up watching Star Trek and really enjoy AU and time-turner type stuff.|
Especially when they end happily. :)
Author's Response: I have loved star trek since the 1960s..my first FF was star trek:) and that was before computers...
glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review
|2010/02/11 - 08:53|
|esmelle (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|Wow, what a moving chapter, a real "tear-jerker". How tragic that Sirius didn't confront Hermione rather than taking matters into his own hands. |
Author's Response: because he was an idiot man who tried to do the right thing....
the back of their heads is designed for frying pans when they do it..
but there is another chapter to come
|2010/02/06 - 12:14|
|MsTree (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|Is this finished? It was really good and made me cry. I love when a story can actually make me feel some kind of emotion. ^_^|
Author's Response: thank you, no..not finished yet
there is one more chapter to go...
|2010/02/05 - 18:11|
|HermioneWeasley1972 (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|Aww that was so sad! Very well written!|
Author's Response: thank you, i was tempted to leave it there, but my muse sulked and insisted on a second chapter...
hope you enjoy it
|2010/02/05 - 16:59|
|maryperk (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|*waves at vara*|
Author's Response: waves back...
can't hide from you can I?
maryperk's response: Nope. I'm lurking everywhere, and if I'm not I'm sure you'll show me where I should be.
|2010/02/05 - 13:54|
|gurlimargrethe (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|This was a beatifull read. I understand there are more chapters, so maybe there is a happy end? Well miracels can happen, at least in fiction|
there is just one more chapter, and I shouldn't say...but kill off Sirius, who could do an awful thing like that:)
thanks for taking the time to review
|2010/02/05 - 12:32|
|Sampdoria (Signed )||1: Chapter 1|
|You know, I have read this story at GE (twice:-)), and I know how it ends, but still my tears fall like rain while reading this chapter. It is so wonderfully written, I can feel Hermiones pain and suffering and her broken heart and spirit straigth from the screen of my pc. |
You are a marvellous author!!!
Author's Response: thank you, I am always amazed when words move me...and it is a real compliment to think that my words move someone else.
glad it is re-readable and thank you for leaving a review
|2010/02/05 - 11:32|
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