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| Amita (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
Good portrait of an aristocrat caught in a shopping mob - and a philandering one at that. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! This was my first attempt at fanfic. Glad someone picked up on the philandering part :) |
| 2010/02/07 - 21:19 |
| blue artemis (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| That was adorable. Very Lucius. Author's Response: Wow! Thankyou for the review. |
| 2010/02/07 - 21:03 |
| Rose of the West (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| Brilliant, dear! His internal voice sounds just like him, and the general tone of the story is just as elegant as he is. You have a good ear and eye for these things. Author's Response: Thankyou very much for the review. I tried really hard to get Lucius' voice and thoughts right, so I'm glad you think I succeeded. |
| 2010/02/07 - 12:56 |
| sevibaby (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| If Lucius thought Christmas Eve shopping was bad, wait until he goes out post Christmas. Poor Lucius. Author's Response: Mmm... if post-Christmas sales everywhere else in the world are the same as post-Christmas sales in Australia, Lucius is in for a nasty shock. |
| 2010/02/07 - 09:38 |
| morgaine_dulac (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| £4670? Holy cripes! That's true love, haha. LOVED your description of the Muggle babies and teens!! Author's Response: Yep true love... and being a very very wealthy Malfoy, probably just a minor expense (unless the Aurors did take all his money post-Voldemort). Re: describing Muggle babies and teens - it was fun to write them as I see them sometimes (working in a cafe means you see a LOT of humanity walking past). Thankyou very much for the review! |
| 2010/02/07 - 09:35 |
| mikimoto (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| I had no idea about these products before reading your story and after visiting the link you gave, all I can think is that these products are WAY OVERPRICED. Thanks for enlightening me. Author's Response: Yep - they certainly are. And people still keep buying them... at least over here in Australia. It seems to be mostly about the status + cost though (which is probably half the reason Narcissa was interested in them in my fanfic), although the beads and things are quite pretty. Thanks for your comments |
| 2010/02/07 - 09:15 |
| KingPhilipsWench (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
Well done! Heh. Selfridges. I probably would have hexed the baby anyway.  Author's Response: Well I thought about hexing the baby, but the story was looking pretty shaky at that point so I thought I'd better move right along. Next time tho, any baby that drools or sicks all over Lucius's shoulder isn't going to be so lucky! Author's Response: Thankyou very much for the review :D |
| 2010/02/07 - 04:08 |
| sunny33 (Signed ) | 1: one-shot |
| He's never heard of the New Year sales, has he? ;) Author's Response: Obviously not! There may be a sequel to this somewhere down the track... Author's Response: Thankyou very much for the review, too! |
| 2010/02/07 - 03:25 |
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