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Rose of the West (Signed )2: Part 2 of 2
Beautiful.  Whatever sort of friendship they go on to have, they've developed a sort of brotherhood between them by allowing themselves to share what they had in common and move from there to the things that are different.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! I was originally going to write a slash story, by the boys decided they wanted to become friends first. It turned out much better like that in the end, I think.
2010/10/10 - 21:55

MsTree (Signed )2: Part 2 of 2
Le sigh. I enjoyed this journey of discovery with Longbottom and Malfoy. I hope you will continue their friendship in later stories as they mature and marry and have children. It's a beautiful and well written piece of work. Thank you. ^_^

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it! Neville/Draco is one of my favourite pairings, so I will be writting more of them in the future when the muse strikes again. Thank you for your lovely comment.
2010/10/10 - 19:16

moiramountain (Signed )2: Part 2 of 2
It appears I have the honor of being the first to review here at Part 2.  This is a profoundly moving, and beautifully rendered depiction of these two young men.  I am so pleased that you have given Draco his humanity and in so doing, allowed Severus to also have his remembered.  And Neville is simply a treausre.  This goes into Favorites as we speak !!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I'm so glad you liked it. My Draco is very very human for all his faults. And Neville is my kind of hero.
2010/10/10 - 17:13

Rose of the West (Signed )1: Part 1 of 2
Beautiful story.  The progression is lovely as both boys receive healing and find a way to move from the battles into the time afterwards.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. This story is definitely about moving forward and making your peace with the past.
2010/09/28 - 13:56


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