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Reviews for Iambic Pentameter
|TeaOli (Signed )||1: Iambic Pentameter|
|Sweet. Sexy. FUNNY!!! |
I ed getting a look at the life they've built together.
Love, love, love, love, love!!!
|Pure, sheer delight! Love the mayhem that can't help be caused when George is left to his own devices + babysitting+ Potions brewing + a red ball! The result: Mayhem & Poetry! Brilliant!|
|Fishy (Signed )||1: Iambic Pentameter|
As usual, I'm confused! *since this is a one shot and everthing is here, I must conclude that I'm truly a dunce and going senile* But never the less, I enjoyed it!
No idea how the potion worked or didn't work, but it was funny none the less - and creative!
Author's Response: Thanks Fishy,
Yes, the potion compells those in the immediate area to speak, think--any type of communication--in rhyme. (Even the narrator, apparently. LOL!)
Fishy's response: So what happened to the house - the explosion?
Author's Response: Oh, it probably didn't go beyond his work room--according to Angelina this has happened before. I imagine George is going to be sleeping on the divan for quite some time.
Fishy's response: Oooh, I had thought the whole house was up in ruins, burning down around their ears! *told you I am often confused in your yarns - I must learn your code! *
|*snerk* Oh, that's cute. He better make enough from that potion to buy her something nice.|
Author's Response: I think he got her a bigger ball.
|That was ADORABLE! I love it!|
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
|MsTree (Signed )||1: Iambic Pentameter|
|For a story so short,|
It has much mirth,
I had to snort;
'Cause this has much worth!
Thanks for the laugh. ^_^
Author's Response: LOL. Good one.
|Elou (Signed )||1: Iambic Pentameter|
Thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you, for reading.
|Pyttan (Signed )||1: Iambic Pentameter|
|Yes, indeed he won the bet. This was a lovely and well written little piece. I love it when authors writes stories that is about something outside the most trodden parts of fandom. Thank you for posting.
I would give you some stars too, but I'm not able too, since I'm using a mobile. Sorry about that.|
Author's Response: That's okay, Pyttan. Thanks for reading.
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