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|mick42 (Signed )||1:|
|Very enjoyable reading, and a lot to think about.|
Thanks for an encouraging review. I almost didn't post this story because the drama is subdued.
|2016/06/19 - 07:25|
|nagandsev (Signed )||1:|
|Thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot (of course, I wish there was more!)!|
Love the introduction of the multi-tasking Molly and Severus, and the potential quest(s) to be explored, and the contrast and dynamics of the multiple point of views, in particular Severus and Ginny's visit with the Lovegoods and the witches' exchanges on clothing as the wizards observe and discuss topography and strategics; the Meercat observes all and protects, in spite of Sev's allergic reaction to him. Love the duplicity and commentary about duplicity, Angel and/or Devil, and the multiple laws of existence interwoven throughout.
Severus' alteration of a bit of the Gettysburg Address had me giggling and grinning, along with all of the other humourous layers and observations--as always, I love the flow and mixture of different techniques and poetry--it always makes for an incredible, uniques reading experience--insightful and inspiring! Thank you!
Thanks for a perceptive review. There are reversals and dualities in many of the scenes and characters. It may be hard to distinguish between Devils and Angels, and Hermione may not be the only competent witch who has trouble finding a companion. The loss of a cherished powder compact should not go unlamented.
|2016/06/18 - 05:19|
The Patronus skin was created especially for The Petulant Poetess by TarahFae.