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HARRY POTTER FANFICTION > Hogwarts Castle

Characters: Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape
Genre(s): Poetry/Prose
Warnings: **DH SPOILERS**
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Loneliness
by Alcina vom Steinsberg
K+ (PG)


Disclaimer: The Potterverse and its characters are the intellectual property of J.K. Rowling. I'm just borrowing them for a short while and promise to give them back unharmed.

A/N: This is my first tentative step into writing in English. I've no idea whether this works at all for native speakers or does work at all. Please let me know what you think!

I wrote this as a drabble, but it seems to be more of a poem. Whatever.

Oops, completely forgot: Many thanks to Chemistress and chivalric for helping me with some mistakes. Many thanks, too, go to whithehound for her very helpful suggestions!



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Loneliness


His eyes follow her,
as she walks in the grounds,
unreachable.
Up in his tower,
his office;
the one he never wanted.


Sadness


He leans his forehead against
the icy pane, closes his eyes.
Why?


Emptiness


He feels so cold,
abandoned,
empty.

There's no way
he can make her understand
he has no right to even try,
it's too dangerous.

He chose this path, willingly,
there was no other way.

He touches his coat
right over his heart
as if he could feel its emptiness
as if he could stop its aching
with a simple touch.

She could, though.






Loneliness by Alcina vom Steinsberg

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