Mrs. Snape
Chapter 1 of 2
StefdarlinSeverus is a little anxious for their wedding night to begin.
ReviewedA/N: First part of the challenge by Sunny33: Write a drabble 500 words or less about Severus and Hermione's wedding night. Must be good smut, no bad words can be used.
My thanks to Sempra for all she does.
Part One: Mrs. Snape
They were just inside the door of their hotel suite, and their naked bodies were pressed against it. Once inside, Severus had Vanished their clothes and leaned into her, murmuring the two words he had ached to say to her in such an intimate setting.
“Mrs. Snape…” he said the two words he had been longing to say for more than a year.
Hermione closed her eyes when the purr of his voice next to her ear caused goose-flesh to travel over her arms and heat to well within her. Severus had a power over her as no other before, and he was finally hers.
“Mmm, say it again… You have no idea what those two words do to me,” she told him breathlessly.
A sultry smile came to Severus’ lips, and he spoke again, his hot breath caressing the shell of her ear, “Mrs. Snape.”
Tenderly, his mouth slid down her neck, nipping and kissing in its wake. His arms wound around her, pulling her close, and she succumbed to his touch. Her head fell back, and she gasped when his tongue drew circles around each supple breast. Her hips arched forward instinctively, seeking the feel of his evident desire, pressed against her thigh.
“Severus, please… make our union complete . . . now!” she demanded, no longer able to wait.
“Mrs. Snape,” he said again. They seemed to be the only two words he knew at the moment while his mouth continued its steady path down her body.
He continued, whispering Mrs. Snape like a mantra, and when he reached the zenith of her thighs, his words halted as he paused for a taste. His tongue tortured her in ways no other man had and left her wanting more. Her hands rested on his head, causing him to apply more pressure, and she cried out when she felt his hot breath lap at her core.
Slowly, he rose, his black gaze meeting her brown one and a slow, seductive smile curved his lips. With deft hands, he wrapped her legs around his waist.
“Mrs. Snape,” he murmured as he finally filled the desperate need burning within her.
With each brush of his body against hers, he brought her closer and closer to the point of no return. His lips found hers, and his tongue mimicked the movements of their bodies against the hard door. Soon, their bodies were covered with sweat as they consummated their joining. And when their bodies tensed, they tumbled over into bliss.
After a steadying moment, Hermione raised her head and said possessively, “My husband.”
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19 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
That was perfect, Stef!! Excellent smut, and oh so sweet! Hard to believe body parts weren't mentioned - you definitely proved that a story can be quite erotic without them! Well done!!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks! I had to put a bandaid on my back button though, the poor thing. lol.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks! I had to put a bandaid on my back button though, the poor thing. lol.
Oh, jolly good, I say! :)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Heh, heh. Somehow, I think Severus would love to be roused this way, don't you? 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Heh, heh. Somehow, I think Severus would love to be roused this way, don't you? 
Well done, Stef!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thank you, Sunny. This has me looking forward to Saturday nights. 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thank you, Sunny. This has me looking forward to Saturday nights. 
I can't think of a better way to finish for ss/hg finish(i'm one) . Thank you
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am very glad you liked it, thank you. 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am very glad you liked it, thank you. 
Hmm I have never known two plus two to equal one, but you have definately made it work.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Math wasn't always a strong suit.
But I am glad you liked it. Thank you. =o)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Math wasn't always a strong suit.
But I am glad you liked it. Thank you. =o)
Lovely story!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am so happy that you liked it, thanks.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am so happy that you liked it, thanks.
Nicely done.~Lotm
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Thank you.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thank you.
That's such a lovely way to wake up.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Mmmm, I agree. Lovely...
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Mmmm, I agree. Lovely...
That's very good smut indeed. 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks for your review. Good, good.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks for your review. Good, good.
This is really lovely. /M
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Wow! I am not an SSHG shipper but this was really well written, very tasteful you could even say.All of which means the smut part is in my head!
Heh. Cool.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Tee hee! Thanks, Di. I love the evil grin, ha ha. Oh, and I am still looking for the perfect lemon tree, just for you. ~~Stef 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Tee hee! Thanks, Di. I love the evil grin, ha ha. Oh, and I am still looking for the perfect lemon tree, just for you. ~~Stef 
now that absoultely qualifies as "good smut". Yummy.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
YAY! I was hoping so. I missed the discussion about good smut and bad smut. Thanks for your review.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
YAY! I was hoping so. I missed the discussion about good smut and bad smut. Thanks for your review.
lovely chapter beautiful actually you write really well
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks, Arabella. I was very nervous, as this is my first SSHG story/challenge. 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks, Arabella. I was very nervous, as this is my first SSHG story/challenge. 
I wish he would say that to me only Mrs. Rickman. This is brilliant
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Ooohh, I simply adore Mr. Rickman, and his voice sends chills all over. Thanks so much for your review, I am glad you liked it.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Ooohh, I simply adore Mr. Rickman, and his voice sends chills all over. Thanks so much for your review, I am glad you liked it.
NIce ending and a lovely way to wake someone up.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I agree, and thank you. 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I agree, and thank you. 
Oh, the wedding night. agaisnt a door. huummm
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Oh! But that was just the beginning. *snerk*
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Oh! But that was just the beginning. *snerk*
Sweet, sweet smut, and you did a wonderful job of meeting Sunny33's prompt... no body parts mentioned.BUT, you did, with a masterful use of words, convey all manner of body parts doing what they do so well. *clap clap clap*Beth
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
*Smirk* Thank you! Your review has me blushing here.
I am glad you liked it.
Such bliss and nary a bad word to be found. Well done, Stef!Beth
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Aww, thanks, Beth. This was very challenging. =o)
absolutely delightful (and hot!) thanks so much
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
And thank you for the lovely review. I am glad you found it so.
Stef 