A Constant Battle

Chapter 1 of 1

i lust snape

Another poem I have written.

Poetry/Prose Poetry: Free Form 104 Words 1 Chapter Complete

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A constant battle

rages in my head

between life

and death

Happiness and hate

Joy and sorrow

It’s slowly becoming

more unbearable

I’ve fallen so far

time and time again

and learned nothing

I’m so impure

I will let you down

I will make you hurt

What have I become?

Everyone I know

goes away in the end

or maybe I’m going away

you could have it all

Just help me end this

I will let you down

I will make you hurt

If I could start again

A million miles away

I would save myself

I would find away

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2 Reviews | 5.0/10 Average

10/10

Wow... this is exactly how I'm feeling right now...Great poem...

0/10

Were you listening to "hurt" by Johnny Cash or NIN when you wrote this? like half of it sounds like it came outta the song. I like the poem tho.

Response from i lust snape (Author of I've Fallen So Far)

no i actually wasn't listening to that song. my friend read the poem and said it sounded like it and made me listen to it