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Time's Treasure

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Time's Treasure

debjunk

695 Reviews   |   695 Ratings, 0 Likes, 265 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 174,630 Words 50 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Original Character

What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.

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Chapters (46)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Epilogue


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9/10

serpantstongue

i like how this has turned out! this was a funny chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  I think Petunia will like it eventually too. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  I think Petunia will like it eventually too. 

0/10

baseballbabe122

gah! Verrnon is such an ass! Having Dudley at hogwarts will definitely be interesting to see, too! I like that little twist :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He is, and he always will be.  Petunia is better off without him.  And Dudley will give Harry someone else to talk to now and then.  Thanks!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He is, and he always will be.  Petunia is better off without him.  And Dudley will give Harry someone else to talk to now and then.  Thanks!

0/10

rhiannon113

I both really love your alternate reality, and am completely unsettled by it! I absolutely love that Harry has people who love him. I'm really anxious to see where it will go from here.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It is a bit odd, isn't it?  This even's out Harry's upbringing a little bit.  He's still treated like garbage from Vernon, but Petunia cares about him and he knows it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It is a bit odd, isn't it?  This even's out Harry's upbringing a little bit.  He's still treated like garbage from Vernon, but Petunia cares about him and he knows it.

0/10

Terab

Great chapter!  I love how things are so different for Harry now that Petunia has magic.  It'll be fun to see what happens with Severus once he meets the younger Hermione and how his relationship with Harry will be different (or will it?).

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, his relationship will be different with Harry, and that will start with the next chapter.  I think that Harry's upbringing shaped his ability to basically like and accept everyone, unless they were rotten to him.  So, although he has it a bit better, Vernon was still his terrible self and he was neglected a bit from him.  But Petunia made up for a lot of it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, his relationship will be different with Harry, and that will start with the next chapter.  I think that Harry's upbringing shaped his ability to basically like and accept everyone, unless they were rotten to him.  So, although he has it a bit better, Vernon was still his terrible self and he was neglected a bit from him.  But Petunia made up for a lot of it.

10/10

Muggline

Now that's interesting - Dudley at Hogwarts! Pity that he can't be in Slytherin because of his Muggle heritage...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yeah.  Can you see him being best friends with Draco?  Maybe he'd be the one to kill Dumbledore!

Response from Muggline (Reviewer)

yes, but will Draco be in Slytherin? I thought Lucius was a reformed soul, too...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The boy still has a snooty mother.  And he's a pureblood Malfoy.  "Slytherin!" screams the sorting hat.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yeah.  Can you see him being best friends with Draco?  Maybe he'd be the one to kill Dumbledore!

Response from Muggline (Reviewer)

yes, but will Draco be in Slytherin? I thought Lucius was a reformed soul, too...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The boy still has a snooty mother.  And he's a pureblood Malfoy.  "Slytherin!" screams the sorting hat.

0/10

cmwinters

Heh.  I love Petunia as the one who demonstrates magic late in life.  I'm gonna make it Vernon, myself.  That makes Dudley a Squib, you know!  Bwahahaha!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That's a possibility!  The lead in to Hogwarts is next and it's in the queue. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That's a possibility!  The lead in to Hogwarts is next and it's in the queue. 

10/10

magicmuggle

I just love this story.... I always look for ther update in my email inbox!! Maybe you could update more often?? lol. Well done you should be proud of this work.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Aww, thanks.  The next chapter is in the queue and just needs validation.  So, I'm getting better! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Aww, thanks.  The next chapter is in the queue and just needs validation.  So, I'm getting better! 

0/10

serpantstongue

Sevvie no go! See me now! how adorable! i'm really loving this story and it is a shame that Severus couldnt have been more of a father figure to harry, not even send him notes or things like that, but i suppose that messes with the time stream too much doesnt it? good chapter! petunias little secret was great i always wondered even in the canon why she couldnt have latent, almost squib-like abilities, it seemed to me that she was always jealous and maybe her powers did come to late. oh well. i love the back-tracking the time that severus has had to spend without hermione. i wonder if he ever goes to check on her?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

In a way, it would have been really nice if Severus could have been a father figure to Harry.  But it would have been way too risky.  It could have uncovered his spy work, threatened Harry's life, and a whole lot of other things.  He will try to re-establish that link when Harry gets to Hogwarts.  That's all I'm sayin' on that.Petunia was always jealous, so she hid her jealousy by making Lily's (and Harry's) magic out as something horrid.  I don't think Severus did check on Hermione, although, he probably wanted to.  I think it will be hard enough having her as a student, knowing what their relationship will become.  But he's a big boy, he can handle it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

In a way, it would have been really nice if Severus could have been a father figure to Harry.  But it would have been way too risky.  It could have uncovered his spy work, threatened Harry's life, and a whole lot of other things.  He will try to re-establish that link when Harry gets to Hogwarts.  That's all I'm sayin' on that.Petunia was always jealous, so she hid her jealousy by making Lily's (and Harry's) magic out as something horrid.  I don't think Severus did check on Hermione, although, he probably wanted to.  I think it will be hard enough having her as a student, knowing what their relationship will become.  But he's a big boy, he can handle it.

0/10

Antigone

I'm glad Petunia got a second chance in the story. Hopefully Harry remembers Severus, although you really can't retain that much from any age under 3. I'm looking forward to hearing how Petunia's new found powers will affect the future as we know it. Keep up the great writing!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, it is really hard to remember stuff at that age.  You'll see if and what Harry remembers when he gets to Hogwarts.Although we love to hate the Dursleys, a little part of me always wondered 'what if?' with Petunia.  So, here's my answer to that question.  Lol. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, it is really hard to remember stuff at that age.  You'll see if and what Harry remembers when he gets to Hogwarts.Although we love to hate the Dursleys, a little part of me always wondered 'what if?' with Petunia.  So, here's my answer to that question.  Lol. 

0/10

kimjo2

i love your version of petunia.  the idea of her and severus dueling is a surreal vision!  thanks so much for the update and i look forward to the next one.  kiss kiss hug hug

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Dueling and not trying to really kill one another is wierd too!  Who would have thought these two could ever spend more than a few minutes in a room, let alone weekly meetings. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Dueling and not trying to really kill one another is wierd too!  Who would have thought these two could ever spend more than a few minutes in a room, let alone weekly meetings. 

10/10

BrenaMarie

OMG What an awesome change!  I loved how you made Petunia Human!  I mean a witch in a good way!  This is so awesome!  And baby Harry is funny!  Very very cool.  I can't wait for more!!!  Cheers!  ~Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think it will help Harry immensely to have an ally in his home growing up.  Of course, with Vernon, there's only so much she can do.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think it will help Harry immensely to have an ally in his home growing up.  Of course, with Vernon, there's only so much she can do.

10/10

BrenaMarie

Oh No!  I was totally worried when he was on a "date"!  Crap!  I knew he'd get lonely!!!  Great Chapter. And I love how nicely you're moving the years along.  No dragging here!  Cheers!  ~Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He is lonely.  Poor guy.  But his heart is Hermione's and he knew that before he asked Toni out.  The man's not a hermit.  But it doesn't look like he'll be trying to date again for a while.  Hopefully you won't feel it drags as we get into the Harry years.  There's a bit that goes on there.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He is lonely.  Poor guy.  But his heart is Hermione's and he knew that before he asked Toni out.  The man's not a hermit.  But it doesn't look like he'll be trying to date again for a while.  Hopefully you won't feel it drags as we get into the Harry years.  There's a bit that goes on there.

10/10

JTBJAB

Awww... that's the first version of Harry that I've ever liked! Lol!I look forward to your next chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hah, hah!  We'll see how you like him in the next chapter.  Lol.  It's too bad he can't stay a toddler forever, eh?

Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)

I guess that I'll just have to cherish my memory of him here :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hah, hah!  We'll see how you like him in the next chapter.  Lol.  It's too bad he can't stay a toddler forever, eh?

Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)

I guess that I'll just have to cherish my memory of him here :D

0/10

baseballbabe122

... For a second there I was afraid something was going to develope between Sev and petunia. I was so ready to persuade you in a different direction. ;) harry's 11 th birthday means... Hermione? Yes?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Eew, Eeww, eew!  I'm cracking up, yet disgusted all the same.  Eeew!!!How horrible would THAT be?!  I'm into changes, but not ones that send people to their toilets to vomit!  EEEW!Okay, I've calmed down.  Besides, she's a married woman and, believe it or not, loves her nasty husband.Harry's 11th birthday does mean Hermione, but not in the next chapter,  you'll have to wait just a teensy bit longer.  He goes to Hogwarts in Chapter 21.

Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)

Ahah... Thank god for petunia and her commitment to vernon!

Wow. :) anywho, can't wait to see how harry has changed. It just felt so weird that Severus was being so fatherly/nice to harry. It's always hate/anger that's written. It's odd, yet right for the story.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Eew, Eeww, eew!  I'm cracking up, yet disgusted all the same.  Eeew!!!How horrible would THAT be?!  I'm into changes, but not ones that send people to their toilets to vomit!  EEEW!Okay, I've calmed down.  Besides, she's a married woman and, believe it or not, loves her nasty husband.Harry's 11th birthday does mean Hermione, but not in the next chapter,  you'll have to wait just a teensy bit longer.  He goes to Hogwarts in Chapter 21.

Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)

Ahah... Thank god for petunia and her commitment to vernon!

Wow. :) anywho, can't wait to see how harry has changed. It just felt so weird that Severus was being so fatherly/nice to harry. It's always hate/anger that's written. It's odd, yet right for the story.

0/10

sunny33

Now that's a unique and interesting idea.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you.  I strive to be unique!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you.  I strive to be unique!

10/10

sinbad

It was so nice to see this softer side of Severus, and also of Petunia.  Perhaps their lives will be better for it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I believe that they will be.  When your outlook on life changes, that invariably changes your life. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I believe that they will be.  When your outlook on life changes, that invariably changes your life. 

10/10

Muggline

Okay... many surprising changes and a really interesting twist to the story.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  It's funny what just a little, tiny trip back in time can do!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  It's funny what just a little, tiny trip back in time can do!

10/10

jade2099

I've been reading from the start - and normally I save a review for the end - but this chapter was too good not to comment on.  I loved this twist!  It will be interesting to see what the effect of all of this will be on Harry.  I've seen stories that where Harry is loved prior to coming to Hogwarts he turns into a right prat.  I like this softer Severus and you've even managed to make Petunia likeable. :)  Well done!  I look forward to your next update! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you very much!  I think it's possible for Harry to become a prat, definitely.  Especially given the way Dudley was treated in his youth and the outcome of that.  But, you'll have to see in the next chapter just how much of a jerk, or not, Harry will become.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you very much!  I think it's possible for Harry to become a prat, definitely.  Especially given the way Dudley was treated in his youth and the outcome of that.  But, you'll have to see in the next chapter just how much of a jerk, or not, Harry will become.

0/10

rhiannon113

OMG! That is so what I was hoping for in Canon!! I loved reading it. Though I am wrong-footed by a less than evil Petunia, it was really nice. And Harry as a toodler is wonderful. Hope for more soon..

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Well, cool.  I'm glad that appealed to you.  Yes, it's kind of hard to wrap your mind around a nice Petunia, but we all have the opportunity to change our wicked ways.  It's just whether we take that opportunity or not.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Well, cool.  I'm glad that appealed to you.  Yes, it's kind of hard to wrap your mind around a nice Petunia, but we all have the opportunity to change our wicked ways.  It's just whether we take that opportunity or not.

10/10

geomancer

I liked this. Petunia or anyone else for that matter would be better people if they were treated with more kindness and patience from those who should know better. Thanks for giving her that opportunity.Fun story by the way!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think too, there needs to be a desire for change on the person's part.  Petunia showed a desire.  (Who would have thought,) and therefore, suceeded very well.  I always thought she was the lesser of the two evil Dursley parents.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think too, there needs to be a desire for change on the person's part.  Petunia showed a desire.  (Who would have thought,) and therefore, suceeded very well.  I always thought she was the lesser of the two evil Dursley parents.

0/10

sunny33

That's a great idea, not skipping the intervening years!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks, I thought it would give the story some depth.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks, I thought it would give the story some depth.

10/10

JTBJAB

Oooh update again please! I'm impatient to see what changes have happened... and of course for Hermione to reappear!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The update is in the queue.  Hermione won't reappear until it's time for her to, but we will see 'student' Hermione in a couple of chapters.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The update is in the queue.  Hermione won't reappear until it's time for her to, but we will see 'student' Hermione in a couple of chapters.

0/10

serpantstongue

i'm so glad that you decided to not try to flash-back severus' time. i cant wait to see what severus says to dear ol tuney!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Flash backs would be so inadequate.  Everything that snowballs from Hermione's trip is just too much to cover in a flashback.  Tuney will be her obnoxious self.  The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Flash backs would be so inadequate.  Everything that snowballs from Hermione's trip is just too much to cover in a flashback.  Tuney will be her obnoxious self.  The next chapter is in the queue.

0/10

Antigone

I'm glad you are following Severus through his time waiting for Hermione, and I'm sort of expecting him to run into her... like in muggle london, when she is a little toddler, or someting cute but not to creepy

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I don't think he'll run into her before Hogwarts, although that would be quite interesting.  But he will spend a bit of time with her as a student.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I don't think he'll run into her before Hogwarts, although that would be quite interesting.  But he will spend a bit of time with her as a student.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, this is so fun. I was shocked that you had Sirius as the traitor - I just can't see that, even with Hermione having had changed things. Looking forward to reading what esle you have planned/changed.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sirius really isn't the traitor, but at this point in time, everyone thinks he is.  Hermione didn't mention this little tidbit of information to Severus, so he is as in the dark as everyone else.I prefer the rat to remain the rat.  He doesn't really deserve redemption. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

 Ok!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sirius really isn't the traitor, but at this point in time, everyone thinks he is.  Hermione didn't mention this little tidbit of information to Severus, so he is as in the dark as everyone else.I prefer the rat to remain the rat.  He doesn't really deserve redemption. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

 Ok!

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