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Time's Treasure

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Time's Treasure

debjunk

695 Reviews   |   695 Ratings, 0 Likes, 265 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 174,630 Words 50 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Original Character

What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.

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Chapters (46)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Epilogue


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kimjo2

i couldn't resist...i read the entire story at ff.net.  but i'm enjoying this second time.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks for keeping up with the reviews.  I'm eager to see your reactions to everything. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks for keeping up with the reviews.  I'm eager to see your reactions to everything. 

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rhiannon113

I hope they become a great, soppy couple...holding hands, matching sweaters the whole bit. Okay, maybe not, but a nice lemony-romance would be wonderful. As always, thanks!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yeah, Hermione is going to start wearing all black and Severus is going to get a perm so his hair is as frizzy as Hermione's.Who can stop true love?  Especially in a fanfic romance?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yeah, Hermione is going to start wearing all black and Severus is going to get a perm so his hair is as frizzy as Hermione's.Who can stop true love?  Especially in a fanfic romance?

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sunny33

Talk about confused, poor kids!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lol!  They really are confused, between Hermione's mixed messages and Severus just wanting to have her, things should be interesting for a while.  That is, if they survive the Death Eaters.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lol!  They really are confused, between Hermione's mixed messages and Severus just wanting to have her, things should be interesting for a while.  That is, if they survive the Death Eaters.

10/10

Arachnae

I love it! Write more please?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  I will.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  I will.

10/10

blue artemis

I don't hate you.  I'm sorry she pushed him away, though.  But I like that he was willing to maintain the friendship. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She's quite freaked out about what the future will bring. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She's quite freaked out about what the future will bring. 

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kimbee73

Another cliff hanger!AHHHH Great job!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I know.  Soooo frustrating!  I will post again soon.  Thanks.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I know.  Soooo frustrating!  I will post again soon.  Thanks.

10/10

sinbad

Well, I loved the chapter, but, I hated the cliff-hanger!  I hope you will be able to update soon! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yup, cliffhangers are really annoying.  I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yup, cliffhangers are really annoying.  I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.

10/10

snivellusgirl

argh! I want them to kiss, but then what does that do to the future??!  So frustrating!  And Narcissa and her HORRIBLE future husband can just sod off! Hopefully he's one of the death eaters that just popped up and Hermione's going to teach him a thing or two! Great chapter!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Having Lucius there would be a nice plot twist, but it's not to be.  He and Narcissa are pretty horrible.  I think Hermione is feeling the same way you are about that kiss!  We'll just have to see what the future brings, right?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Having Lucius there would be a nice plot twist, but it's not to be.  He and Narcissa are pretty horrible.  I think Hermione is feeling the same way you are about that kiss!  We'll just have to see what the future brings, right?

10/10

Muggline

I realize that Hermione is in a huge dilemma. I have read too many time turner fics where they fall in love, Hermione suddenly disappears and Severus becomes a Death Eater because a) he expects Voldemort to be able to find her b) he is so hurt that he becomes the dark character we know c) some other reason related to Hermione's disappearance. Please tell me that this will be different...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

This will defintely be different.  If, by some odd chance, Severus becomes a Death Eater, it will not be because he is pining away after Hermione.  I believe he's learned his lesson from Hermione's description of her past.  Like Voldemort would find a Mudblood for him anyway!  That makes no sense!  The other options do, though.  But that's not the direction we'll be going in.  Thanks!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

This will defintely be different.  If, by some odd chance, Severus becomes a Death Eater, it will not be because he is pining away after Hermione.  I believe he's learned his lesson from Hermione's description of her past.  Like Voldemort would find a Mudblood for him anyway!  That makes no sense!  The other options do, though.  But that's not the direction we'll be going in.  Thanks!!

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kimjo2

yay this story!  i loved this story so much i am reading it on FF.net so i'm ahead!  thanks so much for shaing this lovely story with me.                                       

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Cheater!  That's okay, I understand.  I find it hard to wait for updates myself. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Cheater!  That's okay, I understand.  I find it hard to wait for updates myself. 

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kimjo2

great update!  love this story and i think she's handling sev just right!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  The next chapter is in the queue.

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serpantstongue

I think she could be doing some damage either way. If she keeps up a fake relationship with him it will turn into a real one, but sooner or later she'll have to go back to her own time and how will her leaving affect Severus? But if she doesnt go with some sort of a relationship with him he could feel as if she scorned his advances and really turn out bad. Dumbledore makes me soooo mad! He's so biased for his Gryffindors that he ignores poor Sev being bullied and teased. I hope Hermione puts him in his place in future chapters!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think I agree with you.  Either way, there will be hurt feelings.  She will need to think carefully about what she does. Dumbledore is annoying.  He makes it look like he's caring, but he just cares about his outcomes and not what happens to his puppets.  Hermione will eventually give him a piece of her mind about some of his actions.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think I agree with you.  Either way, there will be hurt feelings.  She will need to think carefully about what she does. Dumbledore is annoying.  He makes it look like he's caring, but he just cares about his outcomes and not what happens to his puppets.  Hermione will eventually give him a piece of her mind about some of his actions.

10/10

decmeadow

Oooo I can't wait for Hogsmeade!  More please!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There will be some interesting developments at Hogsmeade.  Thanks so much for reviewing for every chapter.  I appreciate hearing what you have to say as you go along.  Many people don't bother to review when they're cathching up. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There will be some interesting developments at Hogsmeade.  Thanks so much for reviewing for every chapter.  I appreciate hearing what you have to say as you go along.  Many people don't bother to review when they're cathching up. 

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kimbee73

I love the way this relationship is playing out. I don't think they should persue it now but maybe in the future?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks.  Just how soon in the future? 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks.  Just how soon in the future? 

10/10

decmeadow

Oh the paradox!  Snape taught Granger who teaches Severus who will one day teach Hermione...O_OHaha, awesome.  Next chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Ow, you're making my head hurt!  Not like it hasn't while writing this whole thing!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Ow, you're making my head hurt!  Not like it hasn't while writing this whole thing!

10/10

decmeadow

Yay Severus!Off to the next!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It's a bit of a relief, isn't it?

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It's a bit of a relief, isn't it?

10/10

decmeadow

LOL!  When I read "Professor Granger, you’re my hero," all I could think of was Cameron from Ferris Bueller's Day Off.It was his voice instead of Severus's in my head when that was said and I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard.  Love it.  On to the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, that's hilarious! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, that's hilarious! 

10/10

decmeadow

I certainly don't see the romance coming for awhile, if you're worried.  It's obvious that Hermione and Severus were friends in her time with the way she acts, and it's plain to see Severus and his walls (even if Hermione thinks that all of them are gone, some are already built).  Looking for to the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

They were friends, which makes Hermione open up to him more in this time.  He's not quite so jaded, either, so that helps.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

They were friends, which makes Hermione open up to him more in this time.  He's not quite so jaded, either, so that helps.

10/10

decmeadow

I like the camaraderie between Hermione and Severus.  Surprisingly enough, I really don't see either of them as OOC at this point.  So way to go!I'll say more when I read the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I tried to keep them in character, especially for the beginning, when they're just getting to know one another.  Now, the future, that's a different story.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I tried to keep them in character, especially for the beginning, when they're just getting to know one another.  Now, the future, that's a different story.

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decmeadow

I've just fallen on this story today, and I must say, I like how it's going.  I've always thought Lucius was an opportunist by nature, so why couldn't something like this happen?I'm off to the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lucius is definitely an opportunist in any timeline, I think.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lucius is definitely an opportunist in any timeline, I think.

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cmwinters

" Do you think Hermione is being stupid or smart about her relationship with Severus? Let your opinion be known! "Actually, I think she's being completley foolish.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

But will she ever come to that conclusion is the real question!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Eventually. Probably.  I hope.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

But will she ever come to that conclusion is the real question!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Eventually. Probably.  I hope.

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sunny33

Interesting parallels between her real life as a student where Severus is the teacher, and the time spent as a teacher when he is the younger student.  She is behaving perhaps as she would have liked him to have behaved as a teacher.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I believe you're right.  She is a fair minded person, therefore is also a fairminded teacher.  She would have loved to have the same respect from Severus in his older self.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I believe you're right.  She is a fair minded person, therefore is also a fairminded teacher.  She would have loved to have the same respect from Severus in his older self.

10/10

jade2099

The covert relationship Hermione has with Severus is a good one.  I think the open relationship of them being a "couple" is not wise.  Hermione is playing a professor (albeit a professor's assistant) during this timeline.  I would think that any relationship between a figure of authority and a student would be frowned upon.

Not that I have a problem with SSHG that way as many stories do have that theme.  From a plot perspective I would expect it to be more covert - and I think this line will backfire on Hermione with Lucius if she's not careful.  After all...what better reason for Lucius to hate "Mudbloods" than to have a "Mudblood" continually think she's too good for him?  :)

That being said, I love this story and the direction you're taking it.  I think this young Severus is what any outcast would become if someone offered friendship.  Well written! Looking forward to the next update.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  She's really trying with Lucius, but he seems to really push her buttons with his constant flirting!  She will need to get to the point where that doesn't bother her, or she will turn him away, like you said.Covert is good, and Hermione doesn't want any 'problems' with the future timeline.  But she is attracted to him as he is to her.  That can only be ignored for so long.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  She's really trying with Lucius, but he seems to really push her buttons with his constant flirting!  She will need to get to the point where that doesn't bother her, or she will turn him away, like you said.Covert is good, and Hermione doesn't want any 'problems' with the future timeline.  But she is attracted to him as he is to her.  That can only be ignored for so long.

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Muggline

Thank you very much for another insightful chapter. It made me imagine what it would be like if Hermione got back to her time and found out that James and Severus had somehow gotten over their hatred...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That would be an interesting turn of events, wouldn't it!  There's so many possibilities now.  You'll have to wait and see what happens.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That would be an interesting turn of events, wouldn't it!  There's so many possibilities now.  You'll have to wait and see what happens.

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baseballbabe122

:) Very pleasant little story you've got going on here.  I had the same worries as Hermione, what would happen when she is 'born' if she were to stay in the past? If she goes  back to the future...will Severus have changed too much? Will he have found someone else b/c of his changed personality?  There definitely is a lot to think about.  Either way I sense a goooood story coming soon!  Keep up the good work!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

All of those thoughts plague Hermione, especially the one's about Severus.  She is very fearful of starting anything with him at this point because of the uncertainty of the future.  I'm glad you're having fun with the story.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

All of those thoughts plague Hermione, especially the one's about Severus.  She is very fearful of starting anything with him at this point because of the uncertainty of the future.  I'm glad you're having fun with the story.

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