Know-it-All and the Traitor

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Drama Romance General Free of THAT Challenge 1,513 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Once upon a time, there was a girl who made a promise to the man she loved …. A fairy tale with a moral; a story of how Severus Snape survived Nagini’s bite.

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Chapter 1: Know-it-All and the Traitor

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10/10

Tallis37

Fantastic! It is rather poetic without the use of the word 'that'. A difficult task I imagine!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Know-it-All and the Traitor)

Turns out, if I write in a certain way, I do not use 'that' too much. But I did do a search/find and did rewrite about five areas when I was through. ;)

10/10

Past

take that JKR :) loved this piece, much better ending then the original

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Know-it-All and the Traitor)

Heck, in my opinion, anything is better than the original!

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