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Mystery/Suspense Romance Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 33,260 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

After hiding for five years, Severus Snape is found and convicted of Dumbledore's murder. His punishment is way beyond anything ever thought of before. Can Hermione help restore what Severus has lost?

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

Nessa

That was a lovely ending to a great story. Enjoyed this immensely. Feel free to write another lol

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Okay, I will!  Thank you,

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Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

Yay!!

10/10

Sampdoria

Wonderful last chapter, absolutely wonderful! The added punishment to Umbrigde and Lestrange were brilliant, and fitting:-))Severus have my complete symphaty with regards to Dumbledore ruining his well planned proposal, if Albus knew, and still found that he had the rigth to say something, he should be denied lemondrops for the rest of his life, not to mention not be invited to the wedding or ever be forgiven. The important part were ofcourse that he did propose, Hermione said yes (finally:-)) and I got my happy ending:-))

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Hmmm... no lemon drops.  I think that's a fitting punishment, actually.  Yay for happy endings!  I love them too.

10/10

rosered

Umbridge and Lestrange as cellmates was deliciously devious of you!  I'm glad they got to see first hand how it felt to be 'hollowed out'.  Idiots!I'm ecstatic that Severus and Hermione's relationship is deepening.  They have been through so much together; they are entitled to a little Happily Ever After.  I love how Hermione drew Severus out of himself enough to propose to her.  This has been such a pleasure to read over the last months!  Thank you so much Mystery Author!  <3

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thank YOU!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I enjoyed 'giving it' to Umbridge and Lestrange.  They definitely deserve it.

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite sweet.  I really enjoyed the end of that.

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Thank you.  I'm glad that you did.

10/10

mistress brewster

Interesting punishment for the criminals, but cat plates? She's be in heaven despite her imprisonment! Sure, it'll be bad for her cell mate .... Very romantic ending! ;)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yeah, maybe Umbridge gets the good part of that, huh?  But it's worth it to see Lestrange go crazy.

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sinbad

Aw, how sweet!  Poor Severus had his thunder stolen from him by Albus, but it still was a romantic proposal.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Oh, good.  Severus is glad it worked out too.

10/10

makaem

Lovely.

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Thank you.

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sunny33

Lovely proposal! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks!

10/10

gabi1791

Aww, how sweet!!! Thank you very much for this beautiful story!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thank you, gabi!

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RhiannonAvon

Snape off to rescue Albus...hopefully he hasn't remained addled being a statue on a bed for a few years.  I hope both Umbridge and Lestrange get their just desserts and Snape and Hermione live "happily ever after".  ;-)  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Hopefully, they'll accomplish all of that! 

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RhiannonAvon

Clever trick, to remind Umbridge not to double cross them.  Although you might insult the Wicked Witch of the West, I think Umbridge would definitely look more pig-like than she.  Look forward to seeing what happens next.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I did feel a tad badly for the Wicked Witch of the West here.  But, you know, I couldn't help myself.

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RhiannonAvon

Restoration works, Hermione ends up with Snape, they discover the identity of the accomplice, a good couple of hours.  Hopefully the plan doesn't backfire and result in Snape getting thrown back in jail.  Wonder how Umbridge is going to contact Lestrange, if I remember right he does all the contacting...hmmm, guess I better keep reading.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Lestrange has done the contacting before, but he's told her he can always be reached by owl.

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RhiannonAvon

At least they've figured out the curse, so now they have a general way to figure out how to rescue Snape, hope its sooner rather than later.  The legilimency was a good idea, too bad it didn't work.  Maybe they'll find something to tide them over until they can fully reverse the spell.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Hermione won't give up, and she'll work overtime until he's free.

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RhiannonAvon

I like Harry's "I'd thought you'd catch on rather quickly", made me laugh.  You'd think Hermione Granger, brightest witch of her age would have figured that out as soon as Harry said it, not sit and have to think about it for a few minutes.  Looking forward to reading the rest, since I've fallen behind in my reading.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

LOL.  So true.  She's so worried about Severus and how to get him back, I think it took her a minute to think outside the box on that one.

10/10

rosered

Fantastic chapter.  omgosh!  I hope Severus makes it back with Albus quickly.  I don't like that he went by himself.  Too many things could go wrong, and no one else knows where Lestrange lives to quickly send Severus help if necessary.  I'm looking forward to the next part!  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Lots of people have said that!  We'll have to see just how dangerous his trek will be.  I'm sure it won't be a total cakewalk.

10/10

rosered

Wow, that trip to the Ministry was over the top.  Loved the altering of the plate!  Arthur's words of support were very nice to hear as well.  At least Severus knows that there are people other than Harry and Hermione that care about his well being.  Can't wait to see where Harry ends up.  Great chapter.  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I've always felt Arthur to be a level-headed guy.  He would see the injustice in what they've done to Severus, and not be afraid to say something.  Here, kitty, kitty, kitty...

10/10

rosered

Yippee, success at last!  I'm doing cartwheels! I'm really enjoying Severus and Hermione's reunion.  Love the kisses, touches and declarations. Umbridge and Lestrange won't know what hit them when Severus is done with them.  Great chapter.  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

It took a bit, but they're finally together and know each other's thoughts.  Watch out Umbridge and Lestrange!

10/10

rosered

Great chapter!  It's good that Severus is going to pursue a relationship with Hermione when they reanimate him.  He's been alone for far too long.  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

He definitely has, and this experience has shown him he can't wait for her to come to him.

10/10

rosered

Thank goodness they found a spell to start testing.  I have my fingers crossed!  It's frustrating watching Hermione berate herself for having feelings toward Severus when he is enjoying the attention that she is giving him so much.  Great chapter!  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Well, she doesn't know that!

10/10

rosered

Thank goodness Severus pulled himself back from the darkness he was feeling.  He would have missed Hermione's kiss and caress.  Harry's questions about  Hermione feelings toward Severus were to be expected.  She must know on some level that Harry is just looking out for her.  Great chapter!  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

She definitely understands where Harry is coming from.  She's kicking herself even for having feelings for Severus when she feels he'd never return them.

10/10

rosered

This is so heartbreaking.  :( 

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I know.  It's really hard to see him like this.

10/10

rosered

How awful!  I hope they find Albus quickly.  At least Harry and Hermione realize that something suspicious is going on.  Great chapter!  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

They do, and they'll stop at nothing until they get to the bottom of it.

10/10

rosered

Umbridge is so vendictive.  Drugging the Wizengamot into submission is pure evil.  I don't see this ending well at all.  I hate her!  I'm glad that Hermione got Severus to open up about the guilt and shame he has been carrying around with him for so long.  Great chapter.  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Umbridge really will go to any means to get what she wants.

10/10

rosered

Umbridge is some piece of work.  She would be slimeball enough to meet with a stranger to discuss such an awful method of punishment.  Ugh!I'm glad that Severus and Hermione have relaxed around each other a little bit more.  I love their inner dialogue!  Great chapter.  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Umbridge only sees revenge.  She doesn't care where that revenge comes from.As for Hermione and Severus... they're warming up to one another.

10/10

rosered

I can only imagine the anxiety and frustration Severus has felt being essentially alone for the last five years searching for Albus to clear things up.   Great beginning!  :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

You're right.  He feels very guilty for Albus' disappearance.

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