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Malfoy Manor The Mutual Deal
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The Mutual Deal

1: Helping Each Other

2: Help From Harry

3: Pretending to Care

4: Truly Wanting to Know You

5: Defending Our Relationship

6: Dangerous Decisions

7: Back to Reality

8: Home for the Holidays

9: A Christmas Surprise

10: The First of Many

11: Meet the Malfoys

The Mutual Deal

Southern_Witch_69

182 Reviews   |   182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 212 Favorites )

Humor Romance Malfoy Manor 47,266 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger

Hermione and Draco pretend to be dating in order to dodge realtionships with Ron and Pansy. Will they truly develop feelings for each other?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Helping Each Other

Chapter 2: Help From Harry

Chapter 3: Pretending to Care

Chapter 4: Truly Wanting to Know You

Chapter 5: Defending Our Relationship

Chapter 6: Dangerous Decisions

Chapter 7: Back to Reality

Chapter 8: Home for the Holidays

Chapter 9: A Christmas Surprise

Chapter 10: The First of Many

Chapter 11: Meet the Malfoys


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for The Mutual Deal

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8/10

chyara

i loved this story!  beautiful ending.  I guess Draco's son could end up marrying one of ron's kids.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

 LOL Too right!

8/10

iheartedison

w0w!! I'm loving your story..you're a great writer =) and her first seems so sweet..and Draco was just yummy =P but so considerate ^^

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thanks for reading. I like my fluffy stuff at times. :)

0/10

Arachnae

Tee-hee *blush* Well done. More?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thank you!

0/10

KiraAlexia

Aww.. Draco was so sweet...CAn't wait to see what happens next

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thank you. I really liked their... you know... bonding, too. :)

10/10

pickles

disagree christy no evil cliffie here..

great chapter.  first time was wonderful.. too bad most men can't read a ravishing novel...  would make the first time interesting...

Wink 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Hugs. Thank you. I, too, wish that some would read "our" types of books.

10/10

MagicAlly

Those books should definately be compulsorary reading for men.  Wonderful chapter and as hot and romantic as I hoped.  Brilliant writing SW69, thanks.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thanks, Ally. I do appreciate all the feedback.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

...It ended too soon.  Update faster!(please)~Lotm

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thanks for reading. I always have too many projects going on. hehe

0/10

ancientgirl

Aww, I want one.  Actually no, I'll take his daddy.Great chapter.  So I wonder, does Lucius really think Hermione is preggers?  Or was he just suggesting it to get her parents to pressure them?More!  I need to know these things.  Plus I need a bit more Lucius.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

LOL Thank you so much. He's suggesting it only, sly bloke.

10/10

Lutrica

Wonderful !!! More please?????

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

thanks!

10/10

notsosaintly

I told you Lucius was up to something. Now ... what I want to know is how fast you are going to update 'cuz I'm not a patient girl where Malfoys are concerned.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

haha! Well, here you are, my dear. All nice and caught up! Hope you like the next. Lucius is quite smooth and coerced the Grangers to being his partners in "crime"

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

Can you believe it?  Hahaha... I plan on getting to the next chapter after I catch up on the queue.  Wink

10/10

notsosaintly

I ment to rate it... here you go. *smooch*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

~snicker~spies on NSS's rating....

0/10

notsosaintly

Oops ... you naughty girl. Had me falling into the fantasy of Draco laying her down on the bed and ... well, fantasy interrupted.

I think Lucius has something up his sleeve that even Draco doesn't realize.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Lucius definitely has something planned. :)

10/10

MagicAlly

Wow that was fast paced.  Great chapter.  I think a book like that should be compulsorary reading for all men.  Looking forward to the next one.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thanks! Hope you like what I have planned. hehe

10/10

pickles

When will we find out what is in that note?  Is the note still on the counter top?  Will her parents have her locked away?

I could see Draco getting Potter and Weasley to help rescue his damsel in distress- lol

Waiting for more.  Thank you for a wonderful update. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Her mother will mention it in the next chapter. She'd placed the letter in her pocket. xoxo

10/10

magicmistress

Great chapter.  I love the line at the beginning about not having brushed his teeth, too funny.  Kind of makes you wonder if Lucius did not imply that Hermione being pregnant would be the only reason that he can think of that Draco would be adamant about wanting to marry her.  Someone, as Lucius believes, so far below his station.  Make me think that although Lucius may love his wife he has never really love someone just because rather than because they grew on him and did not annoy him.  Very sad when you think about it.  I really enjoy the idea that Draco wants to make Hermione's first time like something that she fantasized about while reading a story.  And like Christy, I look forward to reading about the wedding and more importantly the wedding night.  B

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

You have guessed correctly. Lucius' letter's info will be given to us in the next chapter. Quite sly, that man. :) Hope you enjoy.

0/10

fyiagcg

lovely as always

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

thanks, dear! Looking forward to your next. Teehee (we're such groupies...)

0/10

janis

Can't wait to read more!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thanks. I hope you like what's next.

10/10

June W

Drat!  I don't like having to wait to find out what Lucius wrote to the Grangers - something big enough to make two Muggle dentists insist their only child get married immediately to a boy they never met before.  I can't imagine!!  Write faster, please!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Sorry about that! Muahahaha... Jane Granger will give us the gist of it! I think he made things seem worse than they truly are. :)

0/10

ancientgirl

LOL, holy crap.  Why do I feel like Hermione's parents are just trying to call her bluff or something.  But, either way they're getting married at some point so why not now.I do wonder though, how will Lucius feel when he finds out his son has already been married.  And by MUGGLES!Oh boy, do I see a Lucius tantrum ahead?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Lucius has his own agenda. I'm thinking the Muggles are playing into his hands. LOL... We'll have lots of Lucy Love in the next one (after the current). Hope you enjoy!

10/10

Lutrica

Ms Southern you are wonderfully gifted as a writer and I love this story. I have read it and reread it and I have even managed to get people who dont like fanfiction to read it because it is so perfect. Please keep up the great writing!!! Laughing

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Wow! Now, that is an honor. Thank you very much! I am so happy that you are truly enjoying this.

0/10

KiraAlexia

Great Story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next bit.

10/10

hpwylie

Oh, another brilliant fic!!  I'm not usually a Draco/Hermione kind of gal... preferring the Byron-esque Snape... but, this is wonderful!  (I especially loved Hermione smacking Lavender - that was awesome!)  I can't wait to read the next chapter!Kim

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

I with you on that type of Snape! Hope you continue to enjoy!

10/10

pickles

Malfoy's sounds interesting.  Are they going to put the girl through the ringer?  Is Draco hoping to stay at the Grangers... 

Will Mione be showing him Muggle things - condom? or is it still too soon?  probably too soon. oh well.  

Will the be visiting the Burrow?

Is the gift a ring? necklace? or a leash?  oops sorry about that.

Waiting for more.

Patty 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

No, I don't think I had a condom in here. LOL... I didn't start editing that one yet, but they will be "shagging" in the next one. Hehe! The Malfoys do want her to join their family, but it's not for the normal reasons. It's all about appearance. You'll see.

0/10

KiraAlexia

I really enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to what Harry & Ron's reaction is to the marriage.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

Thank you very much. I'm happy you like it. We'll get their reactions in the next chapter. hahaha!!

10/10

fyiagcg

what a nice chapter! and it was longer than the other ones have been. that doesnt mean that it was long enough, but enjoyable all the same. I look forward to more (and more and more) from you, dear southern!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)

I'm happy you liked it. :)

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