Consequences of Meddling with Time
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Variety Challenge first runner up. Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidentally alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
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Hooboy! Hermione is going to be one powerful witch when she turns seventeen. I hope she is able to learn to control her magic. The thought of what could happen if she doesn't is frightening- draining her magical core would be horrid.Perhaps talking with Professor McGonagall could help her understand better how to cope with the Surge. Speaking of understanding things, could you help me understand the difference between the Bloom and the Allure. I'm a little confused about when each happens and how they are connected.Thank you for this truly cool chapter. I very happy that Severus is working one-on-one with Hermione again.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, she's powerful and so is Harry. oops. Yes, she will eventually learn how, and yes, It would be horrible to drain your core - but recoverable if she did. Severus recovered. Hummm possibly, but Minerva is really swamped right now running the school with Albus ailing and missing so much... you'll see. Girl's Bloom. They get this innerglow(and heightened pheromone levels) and it attracts the males. This attraction reaction - that's what the Allure is, what the guys feel when they are around a girl who is Blooming - they find the girl suddenly alluring. It's also called the Attraction, the boys/males being attracted to the girls, feeling an Allure toward her. Does that help? You are most welcome for the chapter, brayer. I have one of P-TB and S-WP in queue, and then I'll post one of CoMWT again. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, she's powerful and so is Harry. oops. Yes, she will eventually learn how, and yes, It would be horrible to drain your core - but recoverable if she did. Severus recovered. Hummm possibly, but Minerva is really swamped right now running the school with Albus ailing and missing so much... you'll see. Girl's Bloom. They get this innerglow(and heightened pheromone levels) and it attracts the males. This attraction reaction - that's what the Allure is, what the guys feel when they are around a girl who is Blooming - they find the girl suddenly alluring. It's also called the Attraction, the boys/males being attracted to the girls, feeling an Allure toward her. Does that help? You are most welcome for the chapter, brayer. I have one of P-TB and S-WP in queue, and then I'll post one of CoMWT again. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oooh, so if she's surging this strongly, does that indicate that she will "finish off" at a powerful level? :) I'm looking forward to seeing her reaction when she twigs on to the fact that Harry is using Severus's old book, as I'm pretty sure she'll figure it out. I liked the additional classes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, if she's surging this strongly now - yes, she'll be a really strong witch. Yes, well, she'll figured it out just like she does in canon, but possibly earlier ,or not. I'm glad that you approve of the additional lessons.:) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, if she's surging this strongly now - yes, she'll be a really strong witch. Yes, well, she'll figured it out just like she does in canon, but possibly earlier ,or not. I'm glad that you approve of the additional lessons.:) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Hmm, I wonder why she couldn't concentrate on using just a wee bit of her magic, and if a female professor - say, McGonagall - could tell her more about witches controlling their power during the Surging. Very interesting! Than you for updating.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You know, that's a good point. I've addressed some of this in upcoming chapters. I hope you like how I handle it... or how it's addressed... McGonagall is quite busy running the school especially with Albus ailing and mising so much (Voldemort background hunting) but she'll pop up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You know, that's a good point. I've addressed some of this in upcoming chapters. I hope you like how I handle it... or how it's addressed... McGonagall is quite busy running the school especially with Albus ailing and mising so much (Voldemort background hunting) but she'll pop up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Interesting chapter. I like that her magic is surging. I can't help but think that her amazing power will server her well again before this year is through. But Severus is right - she needs to learn to control it or she could kill one of her class mates.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You're absolutely right, she has to learn to control it, and it will serve her well being a really strong powerful witch. Harry is likewise strong/powerful. I'm glad that you like the Surges idea. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You're absolutely right, she has to learn to control it, and it will serve her well being a really strong powerful witch. Harry is likewise strong/powerful. I'm glad that you like the Surges idea. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Just re-reading parts of this and it occurred to me that Severus, for all of his vaunted mental prowess, didn't figure out that the Dark Lord had lost the first war. The fact that Hermione is here from the future should be a red flag. I guess he's too preoccupied with day-to-day cloak and dagger minutia, along with feeling a bit the hero?Anyway - thought you might want to know that the story is still fun with a second reading.
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You know I never saw it that way. You're right, he didn't think about that at all. I'm delighted and flattered that you that you enjoy the story so much to read it agan. Thank you, and thank you for the review.aeron's response: Really good stories always hold up during a second or third reading and the really cool thing is that I always find things that make them more interesting in different ways. I really enjoy all of the details and layers you include.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou. It's good to know that people enjoy the little extra bits. You have a wonderful weekend and hope your week ahead of you is a good one.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You know I never saw it that way. You're right, he didn't think about that at all. I'm delighted and flattered that you that you enjoy the story so much to read it agan. Thank you, and thank you for the review.aeron's response: Really good stories always hold up during a second or third reading and the really cool thing is that I always find things that make them more interesting in different ways. I really enjoy all of the details and layers you include.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou. It's good to know that people enjoy the little extra bits. You have a wonderful weekend and hope your week ahead of you is a good one.
Look at you, always teasing us with a bit of Severus and Hermione at the end of the chapters. More! More! More! Really, I love the subtle way you indicate that there is the tiniest bit of friendship there waiting to blossom, given the right circumstances.
Things aresn't going well for Severus' band of rebellious Slytherins, are they? Hopefully they can make it through with the least damage done. The good guys can use as much help as they can get.I think my favorite moment was the sex talk. I don't know if I feel worse for Harry having to hear it, or Mr. Weasley having to give it. The line that really made me laugh was this:Hermione could just see trying to explain condoms to Mr. Wesley; he’d want to try some, and Mrs. Weasley would have a fit, most likely.Great chapter! On to 6th year ...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
There are more Severus/Hermione moments coming, but alas, no underage sex or such. There is a lot of underlying like, loads of angst friendship (he desperiately wants to keep the student/teacher relationship in tact. He's taught all these years and now his resolve to not mix with students is challenged) No, things are not going well for the Slytherins in Severus' group on the outside, but then with their families being Voldemort's targets (to become followers and Death Eaters) they are under a lot of pressure. Voldemort doesn't have the numbers flocking to him like last time and that has him feeling frustrated for support. He can't understand why the people don't worship his magnificence like before.I'm so glad that you got a kick out of Mr. Weasley's the talk with Harry, and poor Harry, he's not exactly understanding it all. I think even Hermione is misunderstanding here. But then you'll see - they will get the info they need. Note: The Surge - explains what happene din France, finally. Superwitch Hermione, doing all that wandless against three adult wizards. The Bloom, and the Allure as well as the Urges. I bet you can guess those, huh? Hope you enjoy the year ahead. Loads of angst and cute situations, plenty of Severus and Hermione interaction.Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
There are more Severus/Hermione moments coming, but alas, no underage sex or such. There is a lot of underlying like, loads of angst friendship (he desperiately wants to keep the student/teacher relationship in tact. He's taught all these years and now his resolve to not mix with students is challenged) No, things are not going well for the Slytherins in Severus' group on the outside, but then with their families being Voldemort's targets (to become followers and Death Eaters) they are under a lot of pressure. Voldemort doesn't have the numbers flocking to him like last time and that has him feeling frustrated for support. He can't understand why the people don't worship his magnificence like before.I'm so glad that you got a kick out of Mr. Weasley's the talk with Harry, and poor Harry, he's not exactly understanding it all. I think even Hermione is misunderstanding here. But then you'll see - they will get the info they need. Note: The Surge - explains what happene din France, finally. Superwitch Hermione, doing all that wandless against three adult wizards. The Bloom, and the Allure as well as the Urges. I bet you can guess those, huh? Hope you enjoy the year ahead. Loads of angst and cute situations, plenty of Severus and Hermione interaction.Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I'm looking forward to more of it. Thank you!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. More is coming... soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. More is coming... soon.
excellent chapter, I really liked how Hermione let Harry know that it is really not all about him. I love Luna and how she brings a bit of laughter now and then. Our poor dear Severus, he has so much on his plate. Even though he is in and out of her life so quickly the few words between Hermione and Severus have such meaning behind them. Thanks for another great update.
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Oh, ho, thank you for the extra love. Hugs.
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sorry about that, don't know why it showed up twice.
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It's all right. If you click on the arrow to go back to the previous pages, it will duplicate your review. Once you've left a review, click on your account or go click on newly submitted instead to go forward. (I've inadvertently left duplicate reviews before some one told me this.)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, ho, thank you for the extra love. Hugs.
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sorry about that, don't know why it showed up twice.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's all right. If you click on the arrow to go back to the previous pages, it will duplicate your review. Once you've left a review, click on your account or go click on newly submitted instead to go forward. (I've inadvertently left duplicate reviews before some one told me this.)
excellent chapter, I really liked how Hermione let Harry know that it is really not all about him. I love Luna and how she brings a bit of laughter now and then. Our poor dear Severus, he has so much on his plate. Even though he is in and out of her life so quickly the few words between Hermione and Severus have such meaning behind them. Thanks for another great update.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Yes, well someone had to tell the git that it's not ALL about him and Voldemort. Harry's self-effacing nature bugged me at times. Yes, I love Luna tooo, she's so brillant and yet so honest. Seveurs does, but he'll handle it all. I'm glad that you liked the exchange, although it wasn't very long. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Yes, well someone had to tell the git that it's not ALL about him and Voldemort. Harry's self-effacing nature bugged me at times. Yes, I love Luna tooo, she's so brillant and yet so honest. Seveurs does, but he'll handle it all. I'm glad that you liked the exchange, although it wasn't very long. Thank you for reading and for the review.
And I thought Albus was the one who meddled and maneuvered! Severus seems to know everyone and just who to tweak; a little push here, a little promise there, to get things to line up like he wants. Such a match-maker he is! ;)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Well, it is in his best interests, isn't it? Besides, what’s a little push and tweak? And he did learn it from the best – Dumbledore himself.
Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Well, it is in his best interests, isn't it? Besides, what’s a little push and tweak? And he did learn it from the best – Dumbledore himself.
Thank you for reading and for the review.
I had to laugh at the way different members of the Weasley clan responded to Fleur's presence at the Burrow. There seems to be a pretty clear delineation between the males and the females– they guys are enthralled with her and the gals not so much. I hope Molly can get a hand on her feelings since the young Veela will be the mother of her grandchildren. LOL! Even Hermione is put off because of the way the guys respond to her just being in the room. The only male who doesn't seem to caught up in all of this is Arthur. He doesn't seem to be too upset one way or the other, but I could be wrong.
Hermione's talk with Harry was a good thing. He needs hear from his friends that he doesn't bear the weight of all that's going on. It's important that he knows they personally have as much to lose as he does if they don't win this war.
Mr. Weasley's fatherly talk with Harry cracked me up. At Harry's mention of condoms, Arthur was very quick to say that he wasn't condoning any such "behavior."
Poor Severus has his hands full trying to walk the tight rope between the Dark Lord and his demands and trying to keep his Slytherins safe... Hopefully his students will become adept at Occlumency. It has occurred to me that even with all of Dumbledore's careful planning, everything could be undone if Voldemort were to sense so much as a whiff of memory of their and Seveurs' endeavors to fight against the Dark.
I'm delighted that Severus got to see Hermione when he went to the Burrow to see Tonks (even if it was only for a moment). I loved that he noticed how beautifully she is growing into her womanhood. This could get very tricky if the Dark Lord ever decided to harm her and Severus was anywhere around.
Thank you for another very detailed and intriguing chapter!!!
Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, well, Fleur is a ‘presence’. I think Arthur does feel some attraction to the girl but he’s older and mature, and there is his shed retreat. Molly will, she did in canon.
I’m glad that you liked Hermione’s talk with Harry. It’s important for him to know he’s not the center of all this, it’s not just him and Voldemort. His self effacing is really annoying in canon, everyone doing this for him, or getting hurt because of him. Oh and Mr. Weasley’s talk! I’m glad that you liked it. Remember the point Arthur made about the Bloom and Allure – it will come up later. And the surges, You’ll find out what they are when Hermione does, but it will explain a bit of what happened in the house in France.
Yes, Severus is handling, juggling quite a bit. But he knows how to delegate if need be, like asking Tonks to take care of his boys. Yes, if Voldemort does ‘get a whiff’ then he’d be in serious danger.
Yep, he noticed, and yes, it could.
You are most welcome for the chapter, I’m so glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, well, Fleur is a ‘presence’. I think Arthur does feel some attraction to the girl but he’s older and mature, and there is his shed retreat. Molly will, she did in canon.
I’m glad that you liked Hermione’s talk with Harry. It’s important for him to know he’s not the center of all this, it’s not just him and Voldemort. His self effacing is really annoying in canon, everyone doing this for him, or getting hurt because of him. Oh and Mr. Weasley’s talk! I’m glad that you liked it. Remember the point Arthur made about the Bloom and Allure – it will come up later. And the surges, You’ll find out what they are when Hermione does, but it will explain a bit of what happened in the house in France.
Yes, Severus is handling, juggling quite a bit. But he knows how to delegate if need be, like asking Tonks to take care of his boys. Yes, if Voldemort does ‘get a whiff’ then he’d be in serious danger.
Yep, he noticed, and yes, it could.
You are most welcome for the chapter, I’m so glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Those poor Slytherins! I hope Tonks and Kingsley will get to help them. Poor Severus has his hands full, so I hope Hermione will stay safe and not give Severus more pain. Thank you for the new chapter!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I just didn't want the 'There's not a single witch or wizard who went bad who wasn’t in Slytherin' bit - I mean, really? So... I have some who are not bad, only being trapped into a choice they didn't want to make. And really, NONE of the SLytherins stood and fought for the side against Voldemort? Yes, Seveurs has his hands full, but then school will start and it will be diferent, sort of. Hope you like it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I just didn't want the 'There's not a single witch or wizard who went bad who wasn’t in Slytherin' bit - I mean, really? So... I have some who are not bad, only being trapped into a choice they didn't want to make. And really, NONE of the SLytherins stood and fought for the side against Voldemort? Yes, Seveurs has his hands full, but then school will start and it will be diferent, sort of. Hope you like it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I liked how Hermione made her point to Harry -- that they aren't fighting "for him." It's about more than him. Ever since I started reading fan fiction, I've always wondered if some people were Marked against their wishes. I still wonder that... family ties and whatnot. (Draco certainly didn't seem willing in the movie...)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, it was something that Harry had to know - it's not all about him. He's Dumbledore's weapon, but really, so many people have reasons for chosing the sides they did. I'd like to think that there were some who took the Mark simply beacuse it was too scary not to. I know that you can't lie to Voldemort, but to save a loved one or your parents... I could see it happening. I agree, Draco was way over his head in HBP, and in DH the Malfoys really seemed as if they regretted their aliegence. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, it was something that Harry had to know - it's not all about him. He's Dumbledore's weapon, but really, so many people have reasons for chosing the sides they did. I'd like to think that there were some who took the Mark simply beacuse it was too scary not to. I know that you can't lie to Voldemort, but to save a loved one or your parents... I could see it happening. I agree, Draco was way over his head in HBP, and in DH the Malfoys really seemed as if they regretted their aliegence. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Poor little Kieran. Of course, he's young. He was probably over Hermione five minutes after she left.You can't blame the Grangers for wanting to keep their daughter safe, but she is going to proceed as a witch either way. Best that she has their support. And speaking of, I am glad that Severus and Hermione aren't in a romantic relationship here. Not that I would fuss even one little bit if that is where they end up, but because her parents are Muggles, he is sort of a surrogate wizarding father to her. And whether she thinks so or not, she needs that right now. I loved the admission of importance on both of their parts.Wonderful chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm so glad that you liked Kieran. You're probably right.No, the Grangers are only wanting what they think is best for their only daughter, but then Hogwarts is where she needs to be. Nope, at this time, there is no smooching going on. As a surrogate? I dunno - he is her teacher and she looks up to him. I'm sure things can change, but for now... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I agree. I just sort of think that she needs a wizarding adult to guide her, and while she has folks such as the Weasleys, they have their own children to attend to. She is more of a one on one attention sort of gal. I think in their own ways, they each need to be needed by someone, so things work out. If their relationship stays just as it is now, it would be enough. You write them together well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm so glad that you liked Kieran. You're probably right.No, the Grangers are only wanting what they think is best for their only daughter, but then Hogwarts is where she needs to be. Nope, at this time, there is no smooching going on. As a surrogate? I dunno - he is her teacher and she looks up to him. I'm sure things can change, but for now... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I agree. I just sort of think that she needs a wizarding adult to guide her, and while she has folks such as the Weasleys, they have their own children to attend to. She is more of a one on one attention sort of gal. I think in their own ways, they each need to be needed by someone, so things work out. If their relationship stays just as it is now, it would be enough. You write them together well.
wow this is such an eventful and charming chapter. Still the end was the best: they are both important--for everyone, for the greater good, but esp for each other. A wonderful update!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm delighted that you liked it. Yes, I agree 100%. teehehe Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm delighted that you liked it. Yes, I agree 100%. teehehe Thank you for reading and for the review.
Thank you for letting Hermione and Severus have a few private moments. Even if he was reading her the cautious-act, he ended their conversation by telling her that she was important- to him- not to Harry, but to him. Dare I hope that he might have caught a whisper of her reply even thought he'd already Disapperated?Thank you for this lovely interlude!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, a small one, but still important. There will be more interludes of sorts coming in the next chapters... I dunno if he caught her whisper or not? He was gone wasn't he? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yes, a small one, but still important. There will be more interludes of sorts coming in the next chapters... I dunno if he caught her whisper or not? He was gone wasn't he? Thank you for reading and for the review.
So much happened in this chapter!!! When Severus finds out what was going on with Hermione and her family in France, he will be furious. I especialy enjoyed the scene at the Ministry where Dumbledore neatly parried every effort by Minister Scrimgeour and Delores Umbridge to gain access to Hermione. Well done!Now I must get to the next chapter to see what happens next!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, tons. But then there is a lot happening outside of Hogwarts and this way I can show you some of it. Yes, Sev will. Yep, Dumbledore really railroaded everyone and got his way, old fart. Gotta love him for that. Thank you for reading and for the review, Beth.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, tons. But then there is a lot happening outside of Hogwarts and this way I can show you some of it. Yes, Sev will. Yep, Dumbledore really railroaded everyone and got his way, old fart. Gotta love him for that. Thank you for reading and for the review, Beth.
Thank you for the update, I was on the edge of my set as I would check and see if you had posted one for us. Thank you for continuing. I just love how he said she was important and the first thing she thought of was yes, for Harry. Can't wait for more between the two of them.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome for the update. I should have another ready, soon, I hope. I'm not quitting, I'm several chapters ahead of you. I'm glad that you like that moment -course, it was what Professor McGonagall asked of her - to help Harry keep an even head when he finds out what happened this summer. There is so much more SS HG time coming, I promise. Some good, some er, not so over the HBP year. Hope you like it.Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome for the update. I should have another ready, soon, I hope. I'm not quitting, I'm several chapters ahead of you. I'm glad that you like that moment -course, it was what Professor McGonagall asked of her - to help Harry keep an even head when he finds out what happened this summer. There is so much more SS HG time coming, I promise. Some good, some er, not so over the HBP year. Hope you like it.Thank you for reading and for the review.
Kieran was *adorable*. And I *LOVED* her interaction with Severus. The line she whispered as he left was priceless.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. Interactions you'll have, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and what I have planned. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. Interactions you'll have, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and what I have planned. Thank you for the review.
Thank you so much for continuing this! I am all excited every time I see you've updated. It's a fascinating story and I can't wait to read more. I love how their relationahip is still progressing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Of course I'm continuing this one! I'm delighted that you're sticking with me and like it so much. More is coming. Yep, it's very slowly creeping along. Thank you for the review. Hugs.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Of course I'm continuing this one! I'm delighted that you're sticking with me and like it so much. More is coming. Yep, it's very slowly creeping along. Thank you for the review. Hugs.
Another great chapter. I love the line, "You're important." He may as well have said, "... to me" out loud. I certainly heard it anyway. Funny she didn't until he clarified. She should know him better by now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much.Yes, it's implied, but she was rattled about the things he told her, not to mention some selfesteem issues. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much.Yes, it's implied, but she was rattled about the things he told her, not to mention some selfesteem issues. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Sigh... I always hoped/thought that Madam Bones, Karkaroff, and Emmeline Vance were in hiding until the war was over. Well, Severus and Hermione have now seen each other, and she will be more careful in the future. Thank you for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Nope, sorry, they gave their lives so others may live free. Well, maybe not Karkaroff, but he'll RIP I hope. Yes, Severus and Hermione had a moment, one of many more to come, I promise. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Nope, sorry, they gave their lives so others may live free. Well, maybe not Karkaroff, but he'll RIP I hope. Yes, Severus and Hermione had a moment, one of many more to come, I promise. Thank you for reading and for the review.
How exciting! I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. There's so much going on, which is lovely. I have to admit, I loved the bit with Hermione and Kieran, very sweet. I wish Severus could have seen her with the little one. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Yeah, this is the what's going on out there in the war chatper, and I wanted to show a active OotP. I'm so glad that you like Kieran, he was fun to write. I'll try to get the next one out as soon as the process allows. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Yeah, this is the what's going on out there in the war chatper, and I wanted to show a active OotP. I'm so glad that you like Kieran, he was fun to write. I'll try to get the next one out as soon as the process allows. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oh yea, a new chapter from my favorite story. Always so glad to see a new addition for this story.Now, wow, what a summer for Hermione. Getting noticed by a cute guy won't rank so high in her book anymore. It's a good thing she's being watched by the good guys or she would have been in real trouble. And Minerva's family's place sounds like a nice place to spend a few days. I was curious when you started the section concerning Severus whether he was aware of what had happened to Hermione. I got the impression he's not. If that's the case, what's he going to say and how is he going to react the next time he has contact with her. You realize that's two chapters now with no Hermione/Severus interaction, in case you haven't noticed. Just thought I'd point that out. I hope that means you have 'extra' stored up for us in the next chapter. I keep trying to imagine where the story will go but you surprise me everytime. You do a good job following canon while deviating enough to make a story of your own. I'm anxious to see what you do with Hermione's sixth year. Dumbledore's hand has been mentioned so the curse has been introduced. The unbreakable vow has occured. Are you planning on having Severus complete the task given to Draco? Yes, I know I'm getting ahead of things. Just anxious and ready for much more of your story.Thanks again, Bea, for another chapter to this wonderful story. Hope the next chapter is up soon. Until it is, think I'll just reread the story one more time (again).
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I’m deeply flattered that you name this one of your favorites. Thank you. Chapter 33 is in queue, and in it you will have Severus’ reaction to the events in France, and unfortunately you’ll find out two canon characters die. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news. No, in this last chapter, Severus is not yet aware of exactly what happened in France, he only knew that it might, but you can guess who filled in the Order that something would happen to the 21 students that followed Harry to the MoM. In Chapter 34: Harry is back in the picture, and you’ll see Severus facing the Dark Lord (as well as a Severus-Hermione moment). I don’t know if the moments are enough to make up for two whole chapters without a Severus-Hermione moment, but once school is underway, that will change. (ie: More Severus-Hermione moments and alone time—sort of. It will build up to being the majority of the … I’m giving too much away.)Nope, pretty faces won’t mean as much to Hermione in the future, and when school starts, and she’s in her Bloom… and dealing with the Allure (I’ll explain that as Hermione discovers what it is), boys in general will irritate her. I have added these ‘changes, (one you’ve seen the effect of, two that will be coming up), that will shape her 6th year, so remember what happened over the summer when she finds out about the Surge. You saw a bit of that ‘condition’ happening in chapter 31, but as Hermione didn’t know it was happening – you will find out as she does on that one too. Yes, it was a very good thing that the good guys were alerted to trouble and acted on the tips. I’m so glad that I’m keeping you on your toes with this one.I’m glad that you liked Minerva’s grandson’s house. Yes, Minerva spends a few weeks there when school is out of session. You’ll see Kieran in the next chapter, but then be saying good bye to him for a while. I dunno yet if he’ll pop back up… Yes, Dumbledore’s hand is cursed. I’m not changing that story line from canon. Yes, the Unbreakable Vow has been made – keeping that as well. Ooohhhh, Draco’s task, dunno if I can/should give that one away, because I have my own views on that one and it may surprise you. Canon for Draco won’t be changed all that much, I’m keeping that subplot as well, although there may be a few tweaks. Hard to say at this point. (My alpha readers and beta know, but they aren’t talking. Bless them.) Chapter 34 and 35 are ready to submit, so you will hopefully have them… as the admin validation process allows me. Patience sweetie, it’s coming.You are most welcome,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, and I appreciate your sticking with me on this one. Love the opinions, and you are keeping me on my toes. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I’m deeply flattered that you name this one of your favorites. Thank you. Chapter 33 is in queue, and in it you will have Severus’ reaction to the events in France, and unfortunately you’ll find out two canon characters die. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news. No, in this last chapter, Severus is not yet aware of exactly what happened in France, he only knew that it might, but you can guess who filled in the Order that something would happen to the 21 students that followed Harry to the MoM. In Chapter 34: Harry is back in the picture, and you’ll see Severus facing the Dark Lord (as well as a Severus-Hermione moment). I don’t know if the moments are enough to make up for two whole chapters without a Severus-Hermione moment, but once school is underway, that will change. (ie: More Severus-Hermione moments and alone time—sort of. It will build up to being the majority of the … I’m giving too much away.)Nope, pretty faces won’t mean as much to Hermione in the future, and when school starts, and she’s in her Bloom… and dealing with the Allure (I’ll explain that as Hermione discovers what it is), boys in general will irritate her. I have added these ‘changes, (one you’ve seen the effect of, two that will be coming up), that will shape her 6th year, so remember what happened over the summer when she finds out about the Surge. You saw a bit of that ‘condition’ happening in chapter 31, but as Hermione didn’t know it was happening – you will find out as she does on that one too. Yes, it was a very good thing that the good guys were alerted to trouble and acted on the tips. I’m so glad that I’m keeping you on your toes with this one.I’m glad that you liked Minerva’s grandson’s house. Yes, Minerva spends a few weeks there when school is out of session. You’ll see Kieran in the next chapter, but then be saying good bye to him for a while. I dunno yet if he’ll pop back up… Yes, Dumbledore’s hand is cursed. I’m not changing that story line from canon. Yes, the Unbreakable Vow has been made – keeping that as well. Ooohhhh, Draco’s task, dunno if I can/should give that one away, because I have my own views on that one and it may surprise you. Canon for Draco won’t be changed all that much, I’m keeping that subplot as well, although there may be a few tweaks. Hard to say at this point. (My alpha readers and beta know, but they aren’t talking. Bless them.) Chapter 34 and 35 are ready to submit, so you will hopefully have them… as the admin validation process allows me. Patience sweetie, it’s coming.You are most welcome,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, and I appreciate your sticking with me on this one. Love the opinions, and you are keeping me on my toes. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs.
Oh, goodness. I liked seeing what happened during the summer, even if it wasn't something good. But I am glad that Hermione was able to escape.And little Kieran ... so adorable.And if Dumbledore is forcing Voldemort's hand, just get over it buddy. As if he expects the good guys to play by the rules while he does whatever he pleases. I almost feel sorry for Narcissa for having him as a constant housemate. Almost.Looking forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Nope, the summer was a rough one, but I wanted to show the war going on outside the castle, and those fighting on the good side a bit. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Of course Hermione escaped. Some of the 'hows' and the bits of her magic will be answered soon. I'm delighted that you enjoyed Kieran. He was fun to type. I loved your comments about the 'forcing of his hand' bit - you're right, and I agree. Dumbledore stretches the 'rules' a bit, doesn't he. Yes, I too feel for Narcissa, a teeny bit. But then I wouldn't want Voldemort in my home at all. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. Nope, the summer was a rough one, but I wanted to show the war going on outside the castle, and those fighting on the good side a bit. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Of course Hermione escaped. Some of the 'hows' and the bits of her magic will be answered soon. I'm delighted that you enjoyed Kieran. He was fun to type. I loved your comments about the 'forcing of his hand' bit - you're right, and I agree. Dumbledore stretches the 'rules' a bit, doesn't he. Yes, I too feel for Narcissa, a teeny bit. But then I wouldn't want Voldemort in my home at all. Thank you for reading and for the review.