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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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10/10

doralupin87

awwww, this chapter was just sweet and all warm. I love that their relationship is developing so nicely, they deserve to be happy, especially Severus. I did not like it one bit that Albus was there, he has the worse timing ever, that man! he should have been spending time with Minerva!!! but it was a great chapter! I can't wait to read more, I'm still very worried about the attacks. Thanks for the update, it was brilliant as usual. Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yeah, Albus had the idea that he was helping them socialize, and nothing could be further from the truth! LOL!I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :-) Thanks!

10/10

esmelle

Oh I liked that ending. I also enjoyed the way Minerva was teasing Albus revealing his liking of the Powers books. Its good to see them be able to behave like a married couple in public. Lucius's letter, like himself, was annoying. Poor Severus will now be in suspense for two years. I wonder if it has something to do with Eoghan. Another great chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

!It is fun to have them like that in public, I agree. Fun to write, too.Yes, poor Severus -- Lucius wasn't doing him any favors by writing him that letter, was he?Thanks for the review! :-) A great thing to open my email and find this morning!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Sounds like Draco's life really is getting a makeover, whether he wants it or not. But, distancing himself from his father won't be a bad thing, in my opinion. Starting fresh for Draco could be the best thing that's ever happened to him.Squeee! We're getting closer to the Poppy/Severus date on Thursday. That makes me very happy and I'm anxious to see her reaction to the red tulips, though I think she'll adore them. And what sort of bloody letter was that to send to someone? Sheesh. I'm surprised Snape kept it but glad he's sharing it with Poppy but Malfoy is still super annoying!Minerva was funny, as always, when it comes to Albus and Severus. She does seem to play the mediator a lot of the time with them. Bless her heart. Maybe she's not giving Albus enough to keep him occupied, tee hee. Thanks for the update!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, the Thursday date is rapidly approaching! (I think you'll enjoy that chapter.)That was a rather self-serving letter for Malfoy to send. Kind of typical Malfoy.Glad you liked the little exchanges with Minerva and her two wizards! LOL!Thank you for the review! :-)

10/10

Riposto

Poor Draco. Although he has essentially disowned his father, the estrangement must still be difficult for him. I'm not sure what to make of the relationship between him and Severus. It seems very stiff and formal, although I'm sure Draco shares things with Severus that he doesn't share with anyone else. I feel very sorry for Draco - he seems so alone.And more Suzie! She's so much fun. How can Severus possibly resist her? 

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I think that how they are together is somewhat context-dependent, if you know what I mean. I think the estrangement is difficult for him, more so since his father was almost killed (again!), and he has a lot of conflicted emotions about it.Glad you're happy to see Suzie back! :-)Thanks for the review!

10/10

Anonymous

I'm glad Dumbledore didn't manage to do something that would have been a large inconvenience to our protagonists *lol*. The interaction is cute and lovely, but I hope you won't make Snape too docile and considerate. Somehow I don't think it would fit him well.

Author's Response: Not too docile, I would hope, although obviously people are different with different people, too.

Yeah, it was just Dumbledore being a small inconvenience, not a large one! lol!

Thanks for the review!

10/10

doralupin87

aaaaahhhh! that is sooooo not fair!!! not fair at all!! *pouts* I was so looking forward to some Poppy and Severus time!!! I guess I'll get over it.Now that is over! lol This chapter was great! I'm loving how you write Draco and can't wait to read that other fic with him and Ginny! I adore Suzie!  she's soooo cute. I'm very very curious about Lucious letter, I hope it's nothing too shocking. And that bit about the students in the cauldron! LOL, hilarious! you are brilliant!I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for updating!Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Oh, don't worry, you'll have some nice Sev & Poppy time in the next chapter -- we even open with it, picking up the story just minutes after the close of the last chapter! Does that make you happier? I'm glad you like Suzie. She's fun to write. She shows up by reference in the Draco/Ginny fic, too. Glad you liked the bit of Potions humor! haha!Thanks for reviewing!

Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)

why, yes it does!! :) now I really can't wait!!! I guess I'm now realizing that I'm missing my husband!! LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter! and pleaseeeee update CSG soon! Thanks!Sam

10/10

esmelle

Based on the last sentence I don't think the next chapter is going to start well for Severus and Albus. I like that Gertrude is being fussed over by her family, especially Quin:). I don't agree with the decision to change the irreplaceable wards on the estate but when you mentioned that Gertrude was going to think of what Malcolm would have done I figured that would be the decision. Minerva and the fax machine comments were hysterical. I like Eoghann. I imagine he is what Severus could have been with a different upbringing. Thank you for another delightful chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hey there! For some reason, I didn't see that I got this review until tonight -- I don't think I got an auto notice for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Gertrude is certainly cocooned in the heart of her family, which is good for her. Yes, Minerva and facsmile machines v. real machines! haha! Glad you liked that.Thanks for the review! (Life has been very tiring and draining lately, so writing is slo-ow, but the next chapter is getting there.)

10/10

OldFashionedGrl

Ooh, love the thought of Poppy 'helping' Severus brew a potion.... and his private lab. Can not wait to see what you do with that. Nice to see more Eoghan. I'm really developing a soft side for that boy (I suspect Severus is as well) Wonderful details about his lessons and life on the island. The description of the moonlight garden is gorgous. I feel like I can see it in my mind. I hadn't really thought about Johannes' old feelings for Gertrude in a while. Makes sense that he cares and is upset by her being taken in to the minestry. I like the arrangement he set up with Severus - brewing in exchange for flowers. That way he can get Poppy gifts in the future. (I'm always looking ahead ;) )

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Poppy helping Severus with the potion will be in the next chapter, so whenever that's up, I hope your anticipation is rewarded!Yes, I think that Severus is, too. Johannes was also one of Gertrude's few regular visitors on the island, probably the most regular, given that he wasn't tied to Hogwarts, so they've maintained a close friendship (as Gareth indicated way back chapters ago when we learned why Gertrude can't go back to the island alone), and Johannes is well-acquainted with all of the sorrows and traumas that she has suffered over the years. He's a very empathetic soul.Yes, more gifts for Poppy! :-)Thanks very much for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

0/10

esoterica1693

Something about the very last sentence in that chapter sounds ominious!  Eoghan is a winning little fellow--and I like kids about as much as S^3 does!Too tired to think more now but very enoyable chappie!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Don't feel that the sentence is too ominous -- though I did go through about 6 permutations of it before I was somewhat satisfied with it.Glad you liked Eoghan. He's got his little personality coming out in this chapter a bit more.Very glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks very much for reviewing! *VBG*

10/10

esmelle

Ok I feel better now that Gertrude is home and has been cleared. Interesting that Severus was the one to help clear her. Hope it helps them both. Glad that Hermione and Severus talked a bit. His reaction to her talking to Fleur was funny. He is such a private person; I hope Fleur keeps quiet. Great chapter. Looking forward to the dinner party which sounds like its going to be "a disaster looking for a place to happen" with the cast of characters Albus has invited.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad that you're feeling relieved!Yeah, Severus did NOT like the thought of Hermione talking to Fleur about them! I could feel his cringe! LOL!That dinner party could be a whole lot o' different things! And it certainly could be a disaster! Thanks for the review -- glad you enjoyed the chapter!

10/10

OldFashionedGrl

Wonderful job of moving everything forward but keeping your reader involved in the emotions of the characters. Poppy's worry and concerns come through so well in her fretting about whether Gertrude's eating, watching when Hermione enters the grounds, talking with Minerva about what happened. I definitely feel the anxiousness. I enjoyed Severus' conversation with Hermione and that he told her how she'd hurt him. Seems they're both growing. I'm wondering if they'll overcome all this and be able to be friends again. I was about to say I'm hoping they are able to regain that friendship - but I'm not entirely sure that I do. It worked for them at the time - was beneficial to both - but things change and they're both different people now. What I'm really looking forward to is seeing what you do do with the characters and their stories. Definitely looking forward to Albus' little dinner party!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, you're right, that friendship was born of a certain set of circumstances, and it grew in those circumstances. Things have changed and they've changed, too, so they can't recapture the same friendship they had in the past -- but they can still go on to have a warm and meaningful friendship with their earlier emotional closeness forming a solid basis.Glad that you could feel the tension and anxiety simmering beneath the surface here as Poppy and Severus both wait.Thanks very much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! (And the little dinner party should be pretty interesting!)

10/10

doralupin87

oh so it is Quin! I don't know how I feel about that lol. Great wonderful chapter! I love Eoghan, he's such a sweet boy, I hope Severus tries to have a realtionship with him.

I loved it that he asked Poppy to brew with him and that she understands how important that is! they are sooooo sweet!.

Poor Minerva, she's a bit lost in the muggle world and its contraptions, isn't she? I can't wait to read how the brewing goes and the red tulips! Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Rosemary's baby's due soon, so Quin is staying at the Gamp estate most days (which is Rosemary & Alroy's home), and Gertrude has been spending most of her time there, too. Remember that Gertrude was trying to use the impending birth as an excuse not to go on holiday, but the other witches talked her into it. I'm glad that you like Eoghan. He is a sweet boy. He is a surprise to Severus -- yet another pleasant surprise for him! lol!Minerva doesn't do too badly. She can place a telephone call! That's not bad! haha! (Having a niece who is married to a Muggle has acquainted her with a few mundane things, but she hasn't spent much time in the Muggle world since the fifites, so there's a lot to catch up on!)Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)

I'm almost convinced! lol. I'm just trying to get you to tell me, which is not going to happen!! I don't know if I can wait long enough to find out! Yes, Minerva has a lot to catch up on I agree! but she's too busy! She's the one who needs to go on holiday. BTW, I loved Siofre and Johannes bit, they are just too cute! and he's so wonderful to her (so I'm going to go ahead and rule him out, just because! lol) Thank you so much for the update, this was the highlight of my week! and it's only monday so LOOONG week ahead! Thanks for writing, it really helps me keep busy and not thinking. Sam

10/10

HogwartsDuo

This is just what I needed after a rather busy day at work. Thanks for uploading it!!I'll just bet Severus is anxious to get Poppy into his quaint little lab and do some brewing. snicker snicker! And I'm sure it'll be more fun spending the time with Poppy than with Albus, at least in Severus' opinion. Give me Albus any day. haha.Minerva was very sweet to insist that Snape wait until Albus was finished with his meal ... dessert included ... before leaving and then to insist that they not stay gone long. I love it when she shows her softer side where Albus is concerned.Eoghan sure does love his newly found cousin and it's fun to see Snape having to get accustomed to the idea of having a relative that actually likes him and wants to spend time with him. tee hee.Johannes is, as always, a sweetie. I'm glad he was able to spend some time contemplating Siofre's surprise in the moonlight garden. I hope we'll get to see the surprise and her reaction to it, maybe not in this story but perhaps another.The last bit left me with a smile and a warm feeling, don't ask me why. I hope Albus goes home and gets some good cuddle time with Minerva (yes, I am an ADMM GLM)!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You're very welcome! I'm glad it "hit the spot," so to speak. It's nice to know that. :-)Yes, a relative who likes him, looks up to him (literally & figuratively), and who isn't "odious," as Severus had half-expected him to be, since he's a Prince relative.Johannes needed to relax after a day of jangled nerves, and nothing's more relaxing for him than planning something beautiful for Siofre. :-)You can imagine a lovely little ADMM scene for yourself! :-) Unless he and Severus get lost in the forest on the way back to the castle, lol, I'm sure that he and Minerva are going to have an early night w/ a bit of cuddling and a some sweet sleep, well-deserved for them both.Thanks for the review! :-)

Response from HogwartsDuo (Reviewer)

You know ... You COULD write a little "end of the day" scene where we get to see Albus and Minerva cuddling up and canoodling for a bit before exhaustion claims them. Throw a GLM a bone!!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

If at any point in the near-future I feel moved to write an ADMM drabblish fluff-without-plot one-shot set during the LVS timespan, I will definitely keep this occassion in mind!

Response from HogwartsDuo (Reviewer)

Sigh ... you are such a tease ...sniff sniff.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Haha! You know you love it! BTW, please forgive my wonky spelling -- it's been a very strange day (so strange, I feel it should be "A Very Strange Day,"), and I'm not running on all cylinders!

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herby

AAArrrrhhh!!! You stopped!^^Anyway, I'm glad you updated. I was starting to get really bored...it's just raining outside :-!Eogahn has much in common with Sev. At least it seems to me that way. They're both very...private...personalities and have an extrodianary talent as wizards. Luckily the little fellow doesn't have to share more, like the childhood for example. He also seems to look up at Sev. Sure he's proud to have found such a captivating family member.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, chapters do have a way of coming to an end! LOL! Next chapter, back to Hogwarts! And some nice Severus & Poppy interaction for you, I hope!Eoghan does look up to Severus. He has a clipping collection of all the newspaper articles about his Prince cousin. LOL! Good thing that Severus doesn't know that! They do have some interests in common, too, and both like learning new things and mastering them -- provided they think they're worth learning. Eoghan isn't so keen on fishing or his Sunday lessons! haha!Thanks for the review -- glad the chapter entertained you!

10/10

Anonymous

Great chapter! Gertrude is home again, Severus could distinguish himself a bit with his observations and contribution, and Poppy and Severus get obviously closer. *happy sigh* :o)

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to have at least some difficulties cleared up easily, isn't it? (Wish RL were that cooperative! haha!) :-)

10/10

Anonymous

Oh dear, and the next catastrophe. Poor Gertrude! But it's good to see that Poppy and Severus both realise so clearly what they want and that it is right before their noses.

Author's Response: Yes, right in front of their noses, as you say! They do seem to lurch from one catastrophe to another, don't they?

Glad you liked it. Thanks!

10/10

Anonymous

Good that it was Minerva, discovering Sev in shirtsleeves and without buttons and cufflinks! *g*
Great chapter. Moody is quite symapthetic here, and the whole scene brings the danger much closer, I find.

Author's Response: Yes, good that she hadn't sent Albus down! lol

I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks!

10/10

doralupin87

great chapter!! I'm so glad Siofre was taking care of Gertrude, I'm more at ease but I'm still very upset they took her to the Ministry!. I can't wait to read more! I'm very ansious to know who's behind the attacks and of course to see Poppy's relationship with Severus!Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you're more at ease now! I hope to have the next chappie up sometime this coming week.Thanks, Sam!

Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)

you are very welcome! I'm on the edge of my seat, literally!, when I read each new chapter!. Thank you so much for taking the time to imagine them, write them and post them! I read that you think "the natural lifespan of the fic has been reached before its conclusion" NO WAY!!! that's not possible!! so keep on writing because you have at least one faithful reader, ME! lol.Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much! I know it's a really long fic, so it wouldn't be surprising for people to lose interest over time -- although, that said, I think a lot of good fics are posted over the course of a few years.I am enjoying both the mystery and the romance, myself! It's been fun to write!Thanks for the encouragement!

10/10

mimmom

wow, crazy stuff.  I'm glad Gertrude could go home quickly.  I had a feeling that it was going to be something to do with which hand the attacker used that would clear her.  I had to think on it quite a bit when Severus said he remembered something that would clear her and then I thought about her missing arm.  Maybe Severus helping Gertrude in this way will help him feel less uncomfortable around her.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, good that they realized that the attacker appeared to be right-handed & Gertrude doesn't have one -- and Severus likely blocked on that clue for a bit because he doesn't like to think of it.Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

10/10

OldFashionedGrl

Ahh, more Poppy and Severus... YAY!!!!!I love it! I really enjoy how you show us Severus' thoughts and the way Poppy can see the change in his mood and seeks to clarify. It's wonderful to see him enjoying the little moments with Poppy, thinking about the best way to tell her that without it sounding wrong. I really enjoyed the littlel post healing session in wandless magic. As I've said many, many times... the way you incorporate the magic into the story is seemless. It's never without purpose and it brings so many new layers to everything. Exceptional!I love the image of them growing old together as much as Severus!Lovely moment when Poppy has to remind him to put on his shirt. He's gotten very relaxed with her, hasn't he? ;) Not quite thinking clearly. Looking forward to seeing who's on the other side of the door and where Poppy and Severus go next!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

-- glad you enjoyed the chapter!It was nice to be able to show the two together, especially after all the build-up that Severus went through to prepare for the date. I'm glad you liked the moments between them.I'm glad you're still enjoying the use of magic in the story. :-)We'll see Severus open the door to his visitor, don't worry about that! Soon-ish, I hope. We'll see how things go. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

OldFashionedGrl

I was so excited to see you'd updated this story. (Not that I don't enjoy Charming the Scottish Garden, but I LOVE this Poppy Severus relationship so much at the moment!!!)Severus seems to be growing and changing in so many ways, or maybe it's that the real Severus is finally able to come to the surface, now that he is starting to feel safe and accepted and doesn't have to guard his every moment. I really like how he is connecting to Eoghen, seeing maybe pieces of himself seeking acceptance and approval. I love how he offered to read the essay after he saw his disappointment. I also really enjoyed the interaction with Filius reagarding the lighting - the creepiness as it were. It was great to see him accept help and constructive criticism without being angry or defensive. It shows so much change for him. Of course my favorite part was when Poppy joined him in his rooms. I was a tad disappointed right along with Severus at her initial appearance, and very happy to find she had colorful robes he liked under the pinny. Their flirting and playful conversation is wonderful to read! Thank you for the up date.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Stripping off the veneer of some of his maladaptive behaviors has allowed Severus some room to grow. Of course, he's always had an easier relationship with Filius, and Filius has a gentle way about him. Flitwick is a good person for Severus to begin practicing letting down his guard a bit. ;PI'm glad you liked Severus and Poppy's date and their conversation!I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and the various developments. Thanks very much!

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WriterMerrin

Aww, Severus, so determined to get it right but so inept.  I love that he is finally wooing Poppy, and I love her attitude, needing to be the healer first.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :-)

10/10

doralupin87

aaawwwww! this chapter was so sweet!! I loved it that he was so nervous about getting everything perfect for her, I really this little game of guessing their middles names! it's so nice that they are enjoying each others company. I can't wait to see how this date ends and how this relationship goes. I've been so caught up in the romance that I had forgotten to freak out about the fact that someone wants to KILL Severus! OMG!! I'm freaking out now! lolGREAT CHAPTER! can't wait for moreSam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hey, Sam! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad that you haven't forgotten that someone wants to kill Severus! Feel free to freak out about it! LOL!Thanks for the review!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Ahh, a nice, long chapter to read after a long, hard day at work. lolThis was such a fun chapter. I love how Eoghan reacted to meeting Snape. I think it was good for both of them, and it will be interesting to see how that relationship develops, if we get to see it that is. Gareth, as always, is most welcome in a chapter. He's fun to read and I'm sure you have a blast writing his character. I think Severus was having a bit of fun with him when talking about Siofre in connection with Gareth's taste for older women. woo hooAnd, of course, the best part of the chapter was the Poppy/Severus bits They're so cute together!!! I'm very glad Flitwick helped him make the room more romantic and less creepy. haha.Looking forward to more SOON!!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks, Hogwarts Duo!Yes, I do enjoy writing Gareth -- although he practically writes himself, which is probably why it's fun. That "flow."I'm glad you enjoyed the Severus/Poppy bits. I was beginning to really look forward to writing a bit more of them together, there's been so much else going on -- it was fun to finally have Severus ready for his date! LOL!Yep, Filius was quite helpful -- Severus might have muddled along without his help, but I think Severus preferred the way it looked after Filius's help. It also made an amusing story for Severus to tell Poppy, which was good for him.Thanks for the review! I hope to have another chapter of LVS up in a couple weeks or so.

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gurlimargrethe

nice to have you back, this is a lovely chapter

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Glad you enjoyed it. :-) Thanks!

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