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Hilltop Cottage

1: Prologue

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

6: Five

7: Six

8: Seven

9: Eight

10: Nine

11: Ten

12: Eleven

13: Twelve

14: Thirteen

15: Fourteen

16: Fifteen

17: Sixteen

18: Seventeen

19: Eighteen

20: Nineteen

21: Twenty

22: Twenty-One

23: Twenty-Two

24: Twenty-Three

25: Twenty-Four

26: Twenty-Six

27: Twenty-Five

28: Twenty-Seven

29: Twenty-Eight

30: Twenty-Nine

31: Thirty

32: Thirty-One

33: Thirty-Two

34: Thirty-Three

35: Thirty-Four

36: Thirty-Five

37: Thirty-Six

38: Thirty-Seven

39: Thirty-Eight

40: Thirty-Nine

41: Forty

42: Forty-One

43: Forty-Two

44: Forty-Three

45: Forty-Four

46: Forty-Five

47: Forty-Six

48: Forty-Seven

49: Forty- Eight

50: Epilogue

Hilltop Cottage

neelix

734 Reviews   |   734 Ratings, 0 Likes, 196 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica General Potions Under Duress 80,954 Words 56 Chapters Complete
Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

After the war, Hermione needs a break. A small house provides her with more than just the sanctuary she craves.

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Chapters (50)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four

Chapter 6: Five

Chapter 7: Six

Chapter 8: Seven

Chapter 9: Eight

Chapter 10: Nine

Chapter 11: Ten

Chapter 12: Eleven

Chapter 13: Twelve

Chapter 14: Thirteen

Chapter 15: Fourteen

Chapter 16: Fifteen

Chapter 17: Sixteen

Chapter 18: Seventeen

Chapter 19: Eighteen

Chapter 20: Nineteen

Chapter 21: Twenty

Chapter 22: Twenty-One

Chapter 23: Twenty-Two

Chapter 24: Twenty-Three

Chapter 25: Twenty-Four

Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Twenty-Five

Chapter 28: Twenty-Seven

Chapter 29: Twenty-Eight

Chapter 30: Twenty-Nine

Chapter 31: Thirty

Chapter 32: Thirty-One

Chapter 33: Thirty-Two

Chapter 34: Thirty-Three

Chapter 35: Thirty-Four

Chapter 36: Thirty-Five

Chapter 37: Thirty-Six

Chapter 38: Thirty-Seven

Chapter 39: Thirty-Eight

Chapter 40: Thirty-Nine

Chapter 41: Forty

Chapter 42: Forty-One

Chapter 43: Forty-Two

Chapter 44: Forty-Three

Chapter 45: Forty-Four

Chapter 46: Forty-Five

Chapter 47: Forty-Six

Chapter 48: Forty-Seven

Chapter 49: Forty- Eight

Chapter 50: Epilogue


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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

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Reviews for Hilltop Cottage

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10/10

snitchette

OMG! Severus and his damned insecurities. I do hope he won't do something harsh. And *SQUEEEEEEE* they kisses and what a kiss. *grin* thank you so much. It almost counterbalances the cliffie (almost)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

*pouts* Only almost??It was full-on snogging, you know. Tongues and such. And Grasping. I'm pretty sure there would have been grasping, with hands and stuff...

10/10

beaweasley2

  One leap forward -  one h u g e misunderstanding!  Oh gods, update!  please!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. see, this is Severus. He's forever tripping over his damaged psyche!

10/10

kittyperry

Oh dear. Poor Severus - he'll get entirely the wrong impression now.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

He will, and he does. Because he's a bit silly and all hurt and wounded... bless!

10/10

HBAR

I really like the dinner scene.  They were a bit clumsy and that feels appropriate. they were snogging like a pair of teenagers at the Yule Ball. Love it!  No more description needed here.  We all know exactly how that is.As for the ending, well, last chapter I asked you to be nice to them and you said no can do.  So I went into this with the mindset that it wouldn't be wine and roses.  I was actually afraid that Mike the Creep was going to do something bad to her, so when the actual cliff hanger came, I was a bit relieved.  Funny how that works.  But that still doesn't let you off the hook in terms of getting the next chapter up quickly :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I will do my very best - but you might wish I'd waited a bit longer! It won't be pretty, and I apologise. The darkest hour comes just before the dawn, after all!

10/10

keske

o sev, you idjit...ya jump to conclusion so quickly...hehe what i'd give to be a kitty cat on their fences when Mione comes back ^.^

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol.. you just need to sit and read. Believe me, it's a safer place to be. There's foolish wand waving...

0/10

Sirius Girl 08

GAH!!! NO!!! Damn Mike the Creep!!  Oh, poor, poor Severus!! That really was a damn evil cliff-hanger.  I really, really hope Severus will at least listen to Hermione when she gets back so that she can explain.  However, I fear, his defences might be iron clad by the time she returns in the evening and she will have no idea what it is that she has done wrong to hurt him.  A very good chapter, but gosh, evil at the same time.  *on tenderhooks for the next chapter...* xXx

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I think you've just summed up the next installment very well, actually!... *remembers what happens later on and knows the readers will hate neelix*

10/10

debjunk

Do you want me to kill you now, or sometime later, when it will be a surprise?Oh, you are so mean!  How could you do that to Severus?  And how will Hermione make all of this right?  Huh?  I want answers in the form of speedy updates, post haste, neelix!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Speak to Kizzy! She has the chapters in her sweaty (but delicate) mitts right now! I'm hoping she finds the time to get them here quick so that people aren't left hanging over Christmas!Oh yeh, sorry for the cliffie...NOT!  *bwahahaha* *evil grin*

10/10

pookah

Oooh!  Thanks for this excellent update!  Nice to see someof Hermione's neighbors.  An evil cliffie is just what I needed tonight for a bedtime tale.  I'll try to have snapey dreams.  LOL 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

If you dream of Severus, make sure you share it! lol!

10/10

blue artemis

I'm sure Severus is really regretting the night before.  And I'm figuring Hermione just wanted to surprise him or something.  Sigh.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

BulletTimeScully

Oh no! You evil woman! *sigh* I knew things were going too well! Grrr! Poor Severus... he *would* think that she bailed on him! Great chapter though. I loved the dinner scene... so sweet and romantic. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I think whatever happens next, sweet and romantic will not be it - but it does move things forward somewhat!

10/10

Marty21

An interesting turn of events neelix. I can't wait find out what happens next. 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I hope you wont be waiting too long to find out, Marty! Thanks for reading x

0/10

kimjo2

personally, my idea of gardening is diging a big hole, laying the bulbs on and covering them up. but i can see where some folks might enjoy it. faboo update. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks, Kimjo! Happy Christmas to you, too x

0/10

kimjo2

oh dear.  misunderstanding.  i have hopes for an ultimate happy ending, tho.  thanks for the update.  christmas and holiday smoochies

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I have high hopes for that too!

10/10

snitchette

*clap hands in anticipation*. Please tell me they're close to kissing, pleeeeaaaase. That would be an adequate thank you for her hard work IMHO. And now he has a good excuse to visit her more often.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Oh, okay then... kissing it is!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Well, a kiss to begin with. It would be inapropriate for them to jump at each other and f*ck like nifflers on the floor... Not that I would complain, *evil grin*

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

It would be inappropriate, yes.... FUN, though! lol

10/10

snitchette

*grin* Here we are. He is finally softening. And next thing he tells her about his nightmares.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

You have the best ideas. He doesn't though! You should write the story you keep imagining!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Thanks for the cheerleading but I don't think I could write more than a few thousands words. Too much work and, contrary to your beliefs, not enough ideas and inspiration.

10/10

beaweasley2

I have this bookmarked here but love this so much that I'm actually reading it twice, SH and here. It's a charming story.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks so much - I'm trying to get the posting to coincide, but it's not working!

10/10

mimmom

aww, that's sweet.  I'm glad he'll be able to have his dream garden. 

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

thanks! x

10/10

beaweasley2

Loved this chapter.  Her confession and his reaction were so telling.  His thoughts as he shopped were cute and he still isn't acknowledging his attraction for her.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks so much - I think for both of them there is a conflict of emotions, in the way that friendships that grow into more can be.

0/10

Karfinwen

this is *really* cute.  i like this severus a LOT.  and that's saying something, as i love all severus', but this one is a particular brand of endearing :)

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

ahh, thank you! I love my Severus too. I feel his pain!

10/10

HBAR

OOOH, you made me reminisce about the tingly excitement that happens in the early stages of a really good relationship.  I'm really happy about the garden scene.  It just may be a catalyst for bigger and better things.  Very anxious to see what is in store for them.  Go easy on them, will ya?

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Go easy on them? Well... should I apologise now for the next chapter, I wonder?

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

It's ok.  What is the good without a little bad, right?  *Fastens seatbelt and prepares for turbulence*

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

It's not pretty but it certainly moves things on - I'm hoping my beta will have the follow on chapter ready this week - I don't want people dangling before Christmas x

10/10

blue artemis

That was absolutely lovely and what a wonderful surprise.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thank you so much. Glad you like it xxx

10/10

countrymouse

Just the kind of scene that makes me want to release a huge sigh of contentment.  This was wonderful.  I am most anxious to see more!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

lol... I know what you mean! Thanks,

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

, for taking the time to review x

10/10

BulletTimeScully

OH! I just knew he would like her gift! The ending scene was just perfect... not too much... just enough to have us begging for more!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

I'm glad you thought it was enough - I wanted the whole thing to be a slow burn.

10/10

keske

i love your story!

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Ahh, that's a really lovely thing to say. Thanks!

10/10

kittyperry

Another wonderful chapter. I love this story.

Response from neelix (Author of Hilltop Cottage)

Thanks Kitty!

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