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Potions Under Duress Denial
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Denial

1: Decisions and Revisions

2: Dying Generations

3: Another Measure

4: The Eyes of the Doe

5: All the Pleasures Prove

6: The Fool's Triumph

7: Shy One

8: My Own Way

9: Tested and Tasted

10: In at the Eye

11: This Sense of Sorrow

12: Without Ceremony

13: A Barbarous Tongue

14: Travel On

15: Accidental Stars

16: Tell Me

17: Chaste Life

18: All Day Long I Look

19: Infinitely Suffering

20: I Knew a Phoenix

21: Music in Mouth

22: The Worst of All Bad Names

23: May I Feel

24: The Ring of Fire

25: My Dark Declivities

26: Your Wounded Stare

27: Eternity

28: A Mind at Peace

29: Be Not Afraid

30: The Deeps of my Heart

31: Sweet Unrest

32: My Mind Aches

33: Tread Softly

34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare

Denial

little beloved

639 Reviews   |   639 Ratings, 1 Like, 40 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance General post-HBP/HBP compliant Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 214,187 Words 34 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Dean Thomas Draco Malfoy Hestia Jones Neville Longbottom Padma Patil Dennis Creevey Michael Corner Minerva McGonagall Theodore Nott Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Original Character Mrs. Granger Parvati Patil Ronald Weasley Sibyll Trelawney Lucius Malfoy

Five years after the fall of Voldemort, Hermione and Severus receive unhappy news.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Decisions and Revisions

Chapter 2: Dying Generations

Chapter 3: Another Measure

Chapter 4: The Eyes of the Doe

Chapter 5: All the Pleasures Prove

Chapter 6: The Fool's Triumph

Chapter 7: Shy One

Chapter 8: My Own Way

Chapter 9: Tested and Tasted

Chapter 10: In at the Eye

Chapter 11: This Sense of Sorrow

Chapter 12: Without Ceremony

Chapter 13: A Barbarous Tongue

Chapter 14: Travel On

Chapter 15: Accidental Stars

Chapter 16: Tell Me

Chapter 17: Chaste Life

Chapter 18: All Day Long I Look

Chapter 19: Infinitely Suffering

Chapter 20: I Knew a Phoenix

Chapter 21: Music in Mouth

Chapter 22: The Worst of All Bad Names

Chapter 23: May I Feel

Chapter 24: The Ring of Fire

Chapter 25: My Dark Declivities

Chapter 26: Your Wounded Stare

Chapter 27: Eternity

Chapter 28: A Mind at Peace

Chapter 29: Be Not Afraid

Chapter 30: The Deeps of my Heart

Chapter 31: Sweet Unrest

Chapter 32: My Mind Aches

Chapter 33: Tread Softly

Chapter 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare


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10/10

wiccakitty

 What a wonderful story! loved it. :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thanks so much,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. :)I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully I'll have another story for you in the future. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thanks so much,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. :)I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully I'll have another story for you in the future. LB x

0/10

The Contessa

Dear little beloved. So once again we've reached the end. And once again you've brought me to tears with this beautiful epilogue. Thank you so much for bringing this story back to TPP. I will love it forever. I very much look forward to reading your future stories. Keep writing ... please.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you so much, Contessa, for all of your kind and encouraging reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed it all over again, and I hope I'll have a new one for you soon. Hugs, LB xxx

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you so much, Contessa, for all of your kind and encouraging reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed it all over again, and I hope I'll have a new one for you soon. Hugs, LB xxx

10/10

Chaoticclara

Such a sweet ending, especially because of the sad twist. I really like that Severus is allowed a romance without turning too fluffy. It is a very difficult balance, and you did it superbly. I'm looking forward to reading more from you, both original, published fiction and the fanfictions you find time for.All the best in your endeavours!

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you so much, Clara. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! And you'll be glad to know that the main character in one of my original fics is called Clara! Many thanks, LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you so much, Clara. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! And you'll be glad to know that the main character in one of my original fics is called Clara! Many thanks, LB x

0/10

draegon_fire

I loved Denial much more this time around. You have really grown as an author, and it shows in the corrections you made. I'm looking forward to anything else you put out.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you very, very much for all of your reviews, df. :) You are very kind, and I hope you'll have more from me soon. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you very, very much for all of your reviews, df. :) You are very kind, and I hope you'll have more from me soon. LB x

10/10

mick42

A wonderful ending, it was a nice touch having Theo attend the wedding, maybe he's growing up at last. Thank you for reposting this it was a joy to read.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Yes, I think Theo IS growing up. :) Many thanks for all of your reviews, mick. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Yes, I think Theo IS growing up. :) Many thanks for all of your reviews, mick. LB x

10/10

phoenix

Thank you for that wonderful end. It was very satisfying to 'know' what happens once they cleared the air and accepted one another flaws and all. I'm sure Severus will make a fine father.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

I'm certain he will. :) Thank you very much for all your lovely reviews,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

I'm certain he will. :) Thank you very much for all your lovely reviews,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x

10/10

Jinxie

Beautifully ended and thank you (again) for re-posting this story! Hope the ideas bouncing about come to fruitition and work out for you!

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thanks  for all your reviews,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. :) Hopefully I'll have another story for you soon. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thanks  for all your reviews,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

. :) Hopefully I'll have another story for you soon. LB x

0/10

stgulik

Well, I laughed, I cried, I raged at a stupid law and the people who just want to live near each other and be happy. I didn't think I'd stick with this one, but I couldn't help but come back and see how they got along. Thanks for a great story.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

, and I'm glad you stuck with it. :) They got there in the end. Many thanks for your reviews, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Thank you,

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

, and I'm glad you stuck with it. :) They got there in the end. Many thanks for your reviews, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. LB x

10/10

just harry

This chapter was like a roller coaster ride I laughed I cried But most important I felt the love.   I'm so glad you have reposted this story it is one of the best I have read.  Looking forward to what ever you will write. 

You should send it out as a short story it is that good.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Aw, JH, thank you so much. Your reviews have been so kind and I've enjoyed them all. I'm really glad you enjoyed Denial, and I hope I'll be back with more soon. Many, many thanks. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

Aw, JH, thank you so much. Your reviews have been so kind and I've enjoyed them all. I'm really glad you enjoyed Denial, and I hope I'll be back with more soon. Many, many thanks. LB x

0/10

anoesis

That was a perfect, hopeful end to what's been a wonderfully plotted, paced and executed story. I can only hope that some day you might choose to write more of this pairing, as you do it so very well. Thank you.

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

My dear

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

, your reviews have been a joy to read. I'm sorry to only get around to responding to you now. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully you will have more from me soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

My dear

Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)

, your reviews have been a joy to read. I'm sorry to only get around to responding to you now. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully you will have more from me soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. LB x

0/10

Stella Stargazer

Lovely chapter, lovely story. Having been in Hermione's situation myself some years ago, I must say that the way you drew the scene emotionally was so accurate. Waiting for the epilogue, but sad that this story is ending.

0/10

chowcats

Heartrendingly beautiful, Little Beloved!  I love how Severus says all the right things...  Thank you for this chapter!

10/10

HBAR

I don't remember a single thing that happens in the epilogue, but this scene at St. Mungo's is one that has stayed with me since the first time I read it. 

You've handled a delicate subject very well, and the way Hermione (and probably Severus) is feeling is spot on.  It is such a relief that she doesn't turn him away, because even if she didn't realize it, she needed him to share in her grief.  And the way he explains his change of heart about children and life in general was perfect.

What I love the most, perhaps, is the sense of relief, and freedom, and hope that springs amidst such a desolate situation.  Well, that, and the way he proposes.  Best one ever.

I will be sad to see this come to a close. It has been a terribly fun ride.

10/10

Owlbait

Oh dear, I'd smack Hermione, but I remember pregnancy. Guess that isn't going to be a problem much longer, poor thing.

10/10

Owlbait

Wow, Sev went about that all wrong. Hooray for Lance! 

0/10

anoesis

Oh...! That was heart-wrenching and lovely all at once. I hope the epilogue sees them happy, with a huge brood of children, but personally I'd be happy to see it end here, so full of hope.

I've really enjoyed this story - thank you so much for deciding to repost!

10/10

Lumos

bravo bravo!! Even better second time round!

10/10

braye27

Every bit as gut-wrenching and spirit lifting as I remembered!  I was sad that they lost their baby, but there will be more children for these two incredible people to love and raise and love some more.

The scene in St Mungo's when Severus told Hermione how she had changed his life and his desires made me teary eyed.  I can't wait to enjoy the epilogue... I don't recall every little detail about it, but I do remember that it was everything I could have wished for!

Thank you so very much for reposting Denial.  It will always be one of my all time favorites.

Hugs, Beth

10/10

Phyllidia

What do you mean it's the last chapter?  Sounds like just the beginning.

Bittersweet and well written.  A job well-done my dear.  I eagerly await the epilogue.  Now let me go get a tissue....

0/10

xikum

Yes! that they got together, but so very, terribly sad that she lost the child.

10/10

sunny33

Aww, that was the best proposal ever! :)

10/10

snarkitty2

*sniff*  this was so moving, and so bittersweet.  so well written - and...nearly over....I may cry a little bit more just knowing that the end of this wonderful story is near.
Please, please, please write more!

10/10

phoenix

How heartbreaking to have lost the baby, but how wonderful to see Severus finally start to open up, to embrace rather than repress his emotions. Lovely scene between the two of them.

10/10

Jinxie

Every bit as beautiful, bittersweet and nerve-wracking as I remembered.  So well handled and such a beautiful proposal.  He chose his words very well, indeed.


Looking forward to re-reading the epilogue.

0/10

AuntieL

I love how Padma protected Hermione and that Severus took Lance's advice - again! That scene at St Mungo's was perfection. 

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