The plot thickens!  So Snape notices Hermione. I think I know the secret!  This is a fun story. 

Intriguing!  I suspect that Snape is in for a bit of frustration!  On to the next chap...

What a lovely ending.  I do hope the boys behave at Christmas, but if they don't, I'm going to need to read about it.  Great story!

Lovely ending, Luna can see things that no one else can. Thank you for a wonderful story, I'm just sorry it's over.  

Very nice. I guess we'll just have to imagine everyone but Luna's reactions to Snape coming for Christmas. So nice that they both did find happiness.

Very nicely done. Good of him to be a gentleman and to not give up on her.

Oh, Hermione, you have misread the signs. I can't wait to see how he reacts to finally figuring out her secret.

Even if he doesn't solve the puzzle, he still might find out the secret now that he's actually using his eyes. I wonder how badly she'd panic if she knew what he was doing?

Great, intriguing start. I can completely see Severus unable to back off the challenge of an unsolvable riddle. :)

I love that he didn't solve it until she gave him permission to do so.  It made the reveal of the secret all the more special.  I think they are both handling it well, all things considered.  Yay for such a lovely romance!

Well, this is a good start to their relationship, lol.  Poor girl is in fits.  He needs to hurry up and solve this, so he can put her out of her misery.  But goodness, this is fun while it lasts, even if it is at their expense.

If they only knew how the other felt, this would go so much smoother ( and happen much sooner).  But, it wouldn't be nearly as much fun.  I have complete confidence that he will solve that puzzle, or find a way to get her to help.  I don't think giving up is in his vocabulary.

What a fabulous start!  Why do I know that the secret has something to do with Snape, lol?   Off for more ...

That was wonderful, they are so in tune with each other now, can't wait for the epilogue.

This may be fluff, but it's angsty fluff. I hope she doesn't run away, that wouldn't be very Gryffindor, { or very Hermione for that matter }

I wonder when she will notice, that he is taking notice.

Really good!

awwww *swoons* just lovely and very well written!

A very satisfying chapter.  It was perfectly done.  Thanks for a great get together for them!  They so deserve this.

I nearly swore at you again, but you redeemed yourself beautifully! :D

I nearly swore at you again, but you redeemed yourself beautifully! :D

I nearly swore at you again, but you redeemed yourself beautifully! :D

A sweet, light chapter, like a good wine, to be savored and finished happily. Thank you!

Poor Hermione! The worst-case scenario just didn't occur to her, I suppose. This story may be fluff, but it's a clever little story.

Yay! A puzzle worthy of great minds. Can't wait to see what Severus actually discovers