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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Walking in Darkness
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Walking in Darkness

1: Prologue

2: Memories and Discoveries

3: Decisions

4: Weaknesses

5: Contemplations

6: Breakthroughs

7: Revelations

8: Endings

Walking in Darkness

Shadow

54 Reviews   |   54 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 16,786 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A response to the Summer Challenge at Potter Place
Prompt No 11: Post Voldy defeat and Hermione is now a vampire. Given the Wizarding
world's intolerance of vampires what will she do? Who will help her?
Perhaps the bat of the dungeons?

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Memories and Discoveries

Chapter 3: Decisions

Chapter 4: Weaknesses

Chapter 5: Contemplations

Chapter 6: Breakthroughs

Chapter 7: Revelations

Chapter 8: Endings


About Shadow

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Shadow

Member Since 2007  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 17  |  886 Reviews Written  |  198 Review Responses

I am 26 years old, recently married. I absolutely adore the world of Harry Potter, and love fanfics. My favourite pairing is SS/HG.
My husband doesn't understand it, but he accepts it (grudgingly!)



Reviews for Walking in Darkness

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10/10

togspled

The vampire is narcissa, of course. :)continue!!!

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Next chapter will be up very soon.Thank you!

0/10

FruGal

I enjoyed your story very much. Where do I vote?

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you.I am not sure when voting will begin, but I will let you know the website once it does.

Response from FruGal (Reviewer)

I look forward to your e-mail.

10/10

aura

It would be hard on Severus if this is true, but I'm guessing the Vamp is Narcissa.

Loving this fic! 

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you!The last chapter will be up soon.

0/10

septentrion

Yeah for hope and a good snogging session.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Nothing like a kiss to end on!Thank you for reveiwing!

0/10

Mint Stick

I wonder what there is in Transylvania! I assume Severus wouldn't let her go alone. It's nice to see them getting along so well. ;-)

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Hmmm... That would be telling.The next chapter should be up soon!

0/10

septentrion

A travel? oh my...

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

*Evil little smirk*Next chapter should be up soon!

0/10

Mint Stick

Yay, passion! ;-) It's a good thing she was honest enough to tell him the truth.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Honesty is always best.... Isnt it? In this case.... who knows?!

10/10

Lumiere

Hey, hun! You are just too good, sugar!

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

I know, I know! What can I say?

9/10

kimjo2

ooohhh!  great story.  i look forward to more.  thanks so much

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you!! Hopefully more up soon.

10/10

sinbad

Poor Hermione, she always seems to have self esteem issues.   What 40 something man wouldn't be attracted to a 20 something woman??!  And she's brilliant too!  Antother chapter like a fine Ammeretto, smooth with a litte bite.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you so much! Pardon the pun!

0/10

alina612

"No, Severus never ran. He stalked really fast to his chambers. The fact that he was out of breath was only because he had stalked extremely fast. He just wasn’t used to stalking that quickly. That was all." - Can I just say, best Sererus stalking line ever!? I loved it!

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thanks! More to come soon.

0/10

Anonymous

Oh. It felt a little like there was something missing between the last chapter and this one. Wasn't she upset at having tried to bite him and he was planning to give her his own blood to keep her alive??

Author's Response: I could not find the right place to address the near biting incident. This will happen in the next chapter.

Hermione does not know yet that Snape has added his blood to the potion. She still thinks it is rat blood. The question is: What will happen when she finds out?

0/10

Anonymous

Mmm intriguing!

Author's Response:

Thank you. More to come...

10/10

Anonymous

Wow, this is such a brave prompt to take up for a first fic! I really like what you've done so far. I've never read any fic with this sort of premise before, so I'm looking forward to the rest. Don't give up on it!

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it interesting too.
Deranged plot bunnies are dragging me all the way.
More up soon.

0/10

Mint Stick

Intriguing. Poor Hermione - naturally I am hoping that their research will actually lead to a cure (in addition to a better relationship than it has been so far).

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Umm, can't say. It would be telling...

0/10

Severina Snape

interesting...is this leading to a vampire-pair???normally I don't read vampire stories butI'll give this a try...

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Not to sure where this plot bunny is dragging me. Didn't think of the vampire-pair, but who knows...Thanks for giving me a try!

0/10

deathbyshikon

I like it already! Great start to your fic writing career. : )

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank yo so much! I was very nervous about it. Your encouragement is so appreciated.

9/10

javotte

oh my, this is a engaging story.

Sneaky Snape, I'm sure his idea will some how end up backfiring on him, or maybe getting him more then he expects.

 eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you! We can only wait and see...

0/10

septentrion

A very interesting development.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thanks. More to come...

10/10

sinbad

Very interesting so far.  I love vampire stories!  I hope Hermione comes out OK.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Whew. Thanks. I'm so glad you like it. More soon.

9/10

Maddie

I hope Severus takes a mug of blood with him when he goes to meet Hermione.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Hmmm...... Now there's an idea!

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Loved it.  This and the last chapter.  Somehow, I missed that last one when you added it, but I have since remedied that problem.  Both chapters were quite delightful.  I really like the role reversal--Hermione the vampire, Severus the helper (for lack of a better word).  Grea job, I can't wait for more!

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you! I really appreciate your encouragement.

0/10

septentrion

That's a nice set up for introducing Severus and Hermione's interactions.     

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thanks. Lets hope the plan works..

9/10

SisterG

Very delightful, I'm glad you took this challenge. At least I haven't come across too many Vampire-Hermione stories. Nicely written and I'm eager to see where it will go.

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Thank you. It was something that appealed to me too.

0/10

MsPrinceMalfoy

A very nice start!! The sadness about not seeing her own reflection was described in a very good manner. Hope to see some more chapters soon!!

Response from Shadow (Author of Walking in Darkness)

Whew! Thanks. Hope to get the nex chapter up soon ;D

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