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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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mia madwyn

Member Since 2007  |  14 Stories  |  Favorited by 522  |  490 Reviews Written  |  4,179 Review Responses

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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With the completion of Care of Magical Creatures my fanfic output is going to slow way down, but if you want to be sure to know when new fics post, please follow me on twitter.  I don't tweet much, but I'll surely tweet that kind of thing. 

About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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0/10

Elise_Wanderer

Okay, will you accept "thinking wizard's fic"?  If there is no such magic anywhere, you have made it real and necessary - and one can only hope for more.  You continue to astonish - this is bloody marvelous.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And you just blow my mind with your praise.  Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And you just blow my mind with your praise.  Thank you so much!

0/10

nightshift

Amazing what someone bright can do when sufficiently motivated.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

She has a little extra special power there to draw on, but you're absolutely right!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

She has a little extra special power there to draw on, but you're absolutely right!

10/10

Lkmaide

Holy hot smut batman!  heehee  puns intended, but I'd imagine if anyone can make a 'Romeo and Juliet' style poison with a time-released part for rewaking it would be Severus Snape.  BTW you rock my world and I love you for it!  Your beta is a brilliant, wonderul person who helps you update quickly and I look forward to more soon!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much, and I'll be sure my betas get your compliment, as well.  I abuse them horribly, like an Irish setter wagging my tail with my tongue lolling out, as I ask frantically, "Do you have time for a quick read?"  LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much, and I'll be sure my betas get your compliment, as well.  I abuse them horribly, like an Irish setter wagging my tail with my tongue lolling out, as I ask frantically, "Do you have time for a quick read?"  LOL!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

That was intense.  But awesome. Keep it coming.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you -- I intend to!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you -- I intend to!

9/10

revolsepans

That was such a beautiful chapter.  I can't even find words to express how much I like this story.  Can't wait to read more.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

0/10

cmwinters

asdfjkllll;l;l!!!!!Legilimency!sex *FLAIL*

*puddle of guh* 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Are you quite all right?  For a minute, I wasn't sure if you'd fallen asleep on your keyboard or had a seizure....

(Seriously--THANK you!)

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

It might've been a seizure.  (Seriously.  ZOMG!!!  LEGILIMENCY!SEX is the hottest thing ever!!1four  Did you know I made a special request for that for hp_traditions???  *f-l-a-i-l*)

Anyway.  Um. More coherent.  Yes indeedy.   Yes.  The bit where Snape asks her "and did someone in the Ministry actually tell you the Wizarding World NEEDED a new magical art?"

Guh.  And drool.   

*dies*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

No, I had no idea!  What is hp_traditions?  I never heard of that before.  (I'm a newbie, remember?)  I'm glad you liked it.  It's one of those things that I assumed had probably been done to death but I hadn't actually stumbled across it before so I went with it!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

If it's been done to death I haven't seen it so if you see more would you kindly take pity on me and send it my way?

 hp_traditions is an exchange fest going on on LiveJournal and InsaneJournal.  http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp-traditions .  They'll take requests (and submissions) of het, gen, slash & femmeslash, ratings G to NC-17, (provided the author writes something the recipient wants), as long as the focus is on some sort of tradition, whether it be something like a pagan ritual or a birthday party.  

Some of us *coughmecough* had two comment long submissions.

It's still open for sign-ups.  Tell your friends. ;)  

<.< 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Are you quite all right?  For a minute, I wasn't sure if you'd fallen asleep on your keyboard or had a seizure....

(Seriously--THANK you!)

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

It might've been a seizure.  (Seriously.  ZOMG!!!  LEGILIMENCY!SEX is the hottest thing ever!!1four  Did you know I made a special request for that for hp_traditions???  *f-l-a-i-l*)

Anyway.  Um. More coherent.  Yes indeedy.   Yes.  The bit where Snape asks her "and did someone in the Ministry actually tell you the Wizarding World NEEDED a new magical art?"

Guh.  And drool.   

*dies*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

No, I had no idea!  What is hp_traditions?  I never heard of that before.  (I'm a newbie, remember?)  I'm glad you liked it.  It's one of those things that I assumed had probably been done to death but I hadn't actually stumbled across it before so I went with it!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

If it's been done to death I haven't seen it so if you see more would you kindly take pity on me and send it my way?

 hp_traditions is an exchange fest going on on LiveJournal and InsaneJournal.  http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp-traditions .  They'll take requests (and submissions) of het, gen, slash & femmeslash, ratings G to NC-17, (provided the author writes something the recipient wants), as long as the focus is on some sort of tradition, whether it be something like a pagan ritual or a birthday party.  

Some of us *coughmecough* had two comment long submissions.

It's still open for sign-ups.  Tell your friends. ;)  

<.< 

9/10

MeMs

aah, poor sev, having to live with that thought.  Im really curious how you are going to spin that, can't wait for more

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

More is on the way--thanks!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

More is on the way--thanks!

10/10

ladyluv

Great chapter and I hope that he is not tempted to hurt her but one never knows in war what sacrifices one is willing to make to defeat the enemy.  This chapter was so emotional but good.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much. 

10/10

blue artemis

That was hot and amazing, and with that tinge of sadness at the edges. I really am still hoping for a happy ending.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

If you ever stop hoping for a happy ending, life as I know it will come to an end!

Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

If you ever stop hoping for a happy ending, life as I know it will come to an end!

Thank you.

9/10

harrypotterwanter

Well that was sexy! I wonder how often Severus will want to do that. *smirk* I still don't understand why Severus feels that he's going to have to poison Hermione. He is, after all, both a Potions Master and a spy. I'm sure he can come up with something to trick Voldemort without actually doing his bidding. Hopefully Hermione will help Severus realize that fact.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm not sure he thinks he has to.  It's just having to promise to, plus the other things he has to do, are all getting to be a bit much for him to deal with.  But you're right--Hermione will definitely have her own way of approaching everything.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm not sure he thinks he has to.  It's just having to promise to, plus the other things he has to do, are all getting to be a bit much for him to deal with.  But you're right--Hermione will definitely have her own way of approaching everything.

10/10

livvy6

Oh man, he is neck deep in it now! Man, how is he going to get out of this mess? Looks like Hermione has figured out what all the hoopla about how sex can be.

There is such a unique style of writing you use, it is very poetic. You use few words that say so much between the lines. This is a "thinking man's' fic and find myself having to go back and re-reading and seeing what I missed the first time.

This 'my Professor" and "Miss Granger" thing has its potential to be an enderaing nickname for them, I just really think that there needs to be that equal footing first, where he calls her "Hermione" and she calls him "Severus". Once that is dealt with then they can call themselves whatever the fuck they want. There is progress with them, but gosh they are still SO messed up, but what do you expect? He's a spy and she's still a very innocent young woman.

Lots to work through! Keep it up!

Livvy

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I don't know about "thinking mans' fic" but I like receiving the honorific!  Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I don't know about "thinking mans' fic" but I like receiving the honorific!  Thank you so much!

0/10

GryffKat

Groans aloud. I think I just have to stop reading because I can't stand the waiting between chapters. When the fic alert came in about an update, I practically jumped up and down.This is the sixth review I have left for this story, so you must know how much I love it but the thing where they call each other Miss Granger and Professor really bothered me in this chapter. It has never bothered me prior to this point. I suspect it is the beautiful and ever so gently mounting tension you are creating between the characters and their growing un-admitted love that has caused my sudden annoyance about the name thing. The absurdity of the formal name calling snuck up on me ever so subtly that now it seems ridiculous in the extreme, which I have come to believe was your intention all along. So, good job you crafty writer, you. I can see you writing a beautiful and amazing chapter where they come to use their first names (before the coming Halloween conflict please). I would love to see it be poetic, like the top of chapter 24, which, IMHO, is some of your strongest writing in all the chapters. I would love to see them coming to use their first names be an amazing love poem as I know you have it in you to write. I have decided to read the story from the beginning again, starting tonight.Cheers, Kat aka

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for your amazing review.  They may be approaching that point, because for the first time I'm finding that my fingers are struggling a bit to type those words/names.  Prior to this, I couldn't type anything else.  So the story and/or characters are starting to struggle a bit, and I'm glad.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for your amazing review.  They may be approaching that point, because for the first time I'm finding that my fingers are struggling a bit to type those words/names.  Prior to this, I couldn't type anything else.  So the story and/or characters are starting to struggle a bit, and I'm glad.

10/10

Mazzy

I know I always say this - but again, this is one of my favs. (and the next).Sev's emotion at what he said is heartwrenching. And then their acceptance and emotional attachment to each other really shined through in this one.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so glad.  Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so glad.  Thank you.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

WOW!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!

10/10

Katie616

Yay! The ministry has been foiled! Hurrah for brilliant Hermione and her dastardly tricks!

And three cheers for poor Severus, who has told his master he will kill his love at Halloween. Courage.

Sorry! What I meant to say was 'That was awesome! I'm totally in suspense!' but I think I was close enought to my desired mark.

~Katie 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your review was definitely a bullseye, perfectly on target.  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your review was definitely a bullseye, perfectly on target.  Thank you!

0/10

emmeline33

This is so amazing! A tortured Severus is a sexy Severus. I like the way that you have Hermione developing her strength and resolve, too.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I do love tortured.  (Um, obviously!)  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I do love tortured.  (Um, obviously!)  Thank you!

10/10

little beloved

What a wonderful, sensual chapter. Thoroughly enjoyed this one, thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks so much.  I'm glad it worked!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks so much.  I'm glad it worked!

0/10

oenthusiast

I just wanted to say I always look forward to it when I see another chapter of this story. And the Anglican theology is a plus. :)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm glad you like the theology bits--I find them fascinating myself but admittedly am not spending a lot of time there.  I'm trying to balance the needs of the story with the need of Hermione and Snape to simply be together, and their need to be together frequently overwhelms the plot!  Ooops.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm glad you like the theology bits--I find them fascinating myself but admittedly am not spending a lot of time there.  I'm trying to balance the needs of the story with the need of Hermione and Snape to simply be together, and their need to be together frequently overwhelms the plot!  Ooops.

0/10

Mint Stick

So wonderfully poetic. The desperation of their - his - situation very nearly made me choke up, it was so intense.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  It really is intense--everything is closing in on him.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  It really is intense--everything is closing in on him.

9/10

JoKK2

Powerful storytelling, chapter after chapter.  Thanks for another one.  JoAnne

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!

10/10

irishredlass

Oh my now that was: tender, gentle, harsh,painful and hot all at the same time!  What a wonderful chapter.  You absolutely pull your audience in and we become completely captivated in your world.  You may use JKR's characters, but this is your world and very powerful one.  Well done.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.  Writing this can be very intense because I have to sink deep into it myself, which is why sometimes a bit of time passes between chapters.  Sometimes I sit in front of the keyboard knowing what is going to happen, but only dry pedestrian words will show up on the screen and I have to force them, and I simply have to wait until the flow and the mood are right.  I'm glad to know that you can tell the difference, because I can tell the difference when I'm writing.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.  Writing this can be very intense because I have to sink deep into it myself, which is why sometimes a bit of time passes between chapters.  Sometimes I sit in front of the keyboard knowing what is going to happen, but only dry pedestrian words will show up on the screen and I have to force them, and I simply have to wait until the flow and the mood are right.  I'm glad to know that you can tell the difference, because I can tell the difference when I'm writing.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Oh, my god!  More, please. This is exquisite. Much better than anything else I am reading. Great job. Thanks for the SEX with SEV fix.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  To deny you SEX with SEV I'd have to deny Hermione the same, and I don't think she'd be happy about that!

Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)

Would any of us if we were is her knickers?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Clearly not!  LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  To deny you SEX with SEV I'd have to deny Hermione the same, and I don't think she'd be happy about that!

Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)

Would any of us if we were is her knickers?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Clearly not!  LOL!

0/10

SMichaelM

Snape can't kill Hermione! Please let him use the drowning sleep potion and then let him "dipose of the body" by taking her to a safehouse or something and then lift the potion. Also please let their feelings for each other not be cumpulsion. That would be very sad.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  Snape and Hermione won't let Voldy have his way, never fear!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  Snape and Hermione won't let Voldy have his way, never fear!

10/10

menagers

Oh, its brilliant. So glad I found a place that is more up to date with the chapters! I just couldn't wait anymore at Ashwinder.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for following me here!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for following me here!

10/10

dragonfolder

I really, really enjoyed this story :) It was a delightful read, and I'm happy this is my first Hermiony/Snape story. I most certainly have to check out any other stories you might have.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

It's not over yet!  I'm writing all the remaining chapters and when I start posting, will post them two days apart through the end.  Thank you!

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