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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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10/10

Shadow

I hardly know what to say, except that you may be the most twised author ever - putting Severus in a situation like that, then ending the chapter!!I think Hermione will understand. She is not as prejudiced as other people we know...Ps Loved what happened to Bella there!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, we aren't through with Bella. Not at all.

Thank you so much!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, we aren't through with Bella. Not at all.

Thank you so much!!!

10/10

tialangela

Breathless. Horrified. Amazed. Dizzy. Shocked.E -X-H-I -L-A-R-A-T-E-D!!!That's how I feel now.Please, update soon. I am begging you. ***(You are a genius. Period.)

Response from tialangela (Reviewer)

Sorry, I forgot to mention: I could swear I was smelling the scent through the chapter. That was brilliant.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your review gives me chills!!! Thank you so much! (And when this is all over I will reveal the source of the scent, a commercial line of products that is available in the US.)

Response from tialangela (Reviewer)

Sorry, I forgot to mention: I could swear I was smelling the scent through the chapter. That was brilliant.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your review gives me chills!!! Thank you so much! (And when this is all over I will reveal the source of the scent, a commercial line of products that is available in the US.)

10/10

potterbrat

Oh My GOD!!  I almost hestitated in reading this chapter, because I wanted to savor all the ones before it.  I knew it would be another cliffy that would leave me panting for me, and you have certainly proven yourself once again.  I have rarely read a fanfic that keeps me this enthralled, and for that, I thank you.  I absolutely cannot WAIT to read more.~*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

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Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much! You just don't know how much your review means to me right now when writing is so hard! The next chapter is in the queue, though!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

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Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much! You just don't know how much your review means to me right now when writing is so hard! The next chapter is in the queue, though!

10/10

Sampdoria

Another brilliant update! Though I long for Hermione and Severus to be reunited, I think we needed this chapter. More than any other chapter, it showed how intense their love are! Not to mention, Hermione needs to know just what kind of damage she inflicted on both of them by breaking their bond, I hope she and Severus will remember that in the future! While I can understand Severus terror (and enjoy Bellatrix terror for the same reason) of finding out that Voldemort is his father, he can't actually belive that it would change Hermione's opinion of him? Surely he knows that Hermione loves him, not who his parents are? Though, I can easily see that other people, if they find out, would be more than happy to use it against him, Hermione wouldn't care one shit about who fathered him or not, she loves Severus just the way he is!!! (Make sure that she tells him that as soon as possible) The solution is "simple"; Voldemort accepts that Hermione would rather die than betray Harry, but feel secure that he will manage to kill Harry without her "help" and won't claim her loyalty until he is victorous.... Severus and Hermione must just make sure that the rigth side wins the war, nothing to it...... But first of all, reunite Hermione and Severus, and after he has snogged her senseless, and they have made love so intence that their blood is screaming for mercy, he is allowed to lay her over his knees and smack her bum until she swears never to behave this stupid ever again. (Then again, would laying in Severus lap while he smacks your bum be considered punishment????) When this is done, they can make sure to win the war and live happily ever after! Another question, does Albus know that Voldemort is Severus father? Hurry up writing, as usual I am in desperate need for the next chapter!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  As always, your review is wonderful, and I'm relieved that you aren't wanting to revoke my fanfic privileges for putting Severus in this situation! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  As always, your review is wonderful, and I'm relieved that you aren't wanting to revoke my fanfic privileges for putting Severus in this situation! 

0/10

elsolel

Very cool. That is a twist I really wasn't expecting.  Even with the elf made cups as a hint.  Darn.  Now I have to wait for the next chapter just like everyone else!  Wah!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

But I've had the most wonderful ride, watching you read your way to this point!  And I'm working on the next chapter now so maybe you won't have to wait too long...Thank you!!!

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

It's been cool reading and responding.  I've stayed up late reading this and it has been worth every yawn the next day!  Now I just have to read everything else you've got posted here! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Not a lot. I've spent almost all my time writing CoMC! But thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

But I've had the most wonderful ride, watching you read your way to this point!  And I'm working on the next chapter now so maybe you won't have to wait too long...Thank you!!!

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

It's been cool reading and responding.  I've stayed up late reading this and it has been worth every yawn the next day!  Now I just have to read everything else you've got posted here! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Not a lot. I've spent almost all my time writing CoMC! But thank you!

0/10

elsolel

They are still married in the muggle world.  They were married in that cathedral, right?  What did Voldemort put into the cup?  So many questions.  :)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Very observant, my dear!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Very observant, my dear!

10/10

Sephia

Holy. F-ing.SHIT.  ("Luke, I am your father....")Well, this is one I did not expect.  Oh, my.  So, does Snape speak Parseltongue, too?hehe.  wow.just...wow.(Sorry, I know that made no sense.  I still can't get my thoughts together, but I loved it.  Please, please, PLEASE update!)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Good question you ask. (smile) (feeling like Yoda)Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Good question you ask. (smile) (feeling like Yoda)Thank you!

10/10

etern

after much procrastitation i read the chapter........................ ....father.... ::rendered speechless:: O.O (tis brilliant)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!

0/10

Queen_of_Stars

there's a twist 4 u....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, a twisted twist.  LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, a twisted twist.  LOL!

0/10

elsolel

She broke her wand, and that made her ministry ring disappear?  That's odd.  

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

More will be explained....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

More will be explained....

0/10

elsolel

Albus is really self centered in this, isn't he.  He seems to be a step out of synch with whats actually happening, too.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Albus is totally focused on winning the war, and because of Voldemort's belief in the prophecy, that means he's focussed on Harry. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Albus is totally focused on winning the war, and because of Voldemort's belief in the prophecy, that means he's focussed on Harry. 

0/10

elsolel

That is very cool.  I like the idea (I hope I understood correctly) of people being entranced when Severus sings.  That is really an evil bed.  I don't like it much at all.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Snape's singing will be explained more later....I didn't even remember that he "sang" an incantation until I saw references to him singing them in other fics, and then was told that this is how he healed Draco from the Sectumsempra that Harry cast on him in HBP.  Which makes me wonder if we'll get to hear AR singing that spell in the moooovie!

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

That would be neat.  he sings a song in Truly Madly Deeply, and now I like that version better than the original.  It gets sometimes gets into my head, but it's the ending, so I can get it out again fairly easily.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, I still haven't seen that and I absolutely have to rent it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Snape's singing will be explained more later....I didn't even remember that he "sang" an incantation until I saw references to him singing them in other fics, and then was told that this is how he healed Draco from the Sectumsempra that Harry cast on him in HBP.  Which makes me wonder if we'll get to hear AR singing that spell in the moooovie!

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

That would be neat.  he sings a song in Truly Madly Deeply, and now I like that version better than the original.  It gets sometimes gets into my head, but it's the ending, so I can get it out again fairly easily.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, I still haven't seen that and I absolutely have to rent it!

0/10

elsolel

Very convolulted.  I'm amazed that she sent that many howlers.  I wish I could have seen their faces!  Oh, I hope she's ok.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh I do wish I could have seen all their faces, too!  But imagining them is quite fun!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh I do wish I could have seen all their faces, too!  But imagining them is quite fun!

0/10

elsolel

Draco is such a scuz.  I thought the part where controlling strong magic is a physical thing was pretty interesting.  Bleh, what does that say about Slughorn?  I shudder.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh gads, I can't even think about the Slug!I wasn't sure how that idea about controlling magic would be received, but it seemed possible to me and I kind of liked it.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh gads, I can't even think about the Slug!I wasn't sure how that idea about controlling magic would be received, but it seemed possible to me and I kind of liked it.

0/10

elsolel

Hermione's outfit sounds gorgeous.  Damn, now I wish I could wear green.  Pout.  I'm jealous.  I like how Madam Hooch did an "appraisal"  heheheOne day to be ordinary.  That's kind of sad.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, it's sad.  But it gives me hope.  Maybe knowing what ordinary means will give them something even bigger to fight for.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, it's sad.  But it gives me hope.  Maybe knowing what ordinary means will give them something even bigger to fight for.

0/10

elsolel

Wow, I wish someone would get me presents that bad!  I like that she can 'billow' now.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought he did a great job, even though before I wrote these chapters I had no idea what he could possibly get her that would be in character and yet still seem romantic!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought he did a great job, even though before I wrote these chapters I had no idea what he could possibly get her that would be in character and yet still seem romantic!

0/10

elsolel

Did he leave Madam Malkin's in disgust, or did he come up with another idea for a present?  What was the potion for?  Again, yay for catch-up reading!  I don't have to wa-ait!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

::rubs hands together in glee::I won't answer your questions, but you're about to find out!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

::rubs hands together in glee::I won't answer your questions, but you're about to find out!

0/10

elsolel

A soul kiss?  Very cool.  I am glad that she didn't vow to obey!  ;)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I can't imagine Hermione having to be obedient!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I can't imagine Hermione having to be obedient!

0/10

elsolel

A place for her to go is a great thing.  How do all those rooms have the same view.  Are they different angles?  They must be.  The two of them are really getting things sorted, I hope the wrench of the withdrawl doesn't hurt to much.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I assumed the rooms were on different floors of the castle, more or less above/below each other.  Although the window Hermione sat in in the corridor was just next door to Madam Hooch, so they were close enough to one another to have more or less the same view!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I assumed the rooms were on different floors of the castle, more or less above/below each other.  Although the window Hermione sat in in the corridor was just next door to Madam Hooch, so they were close enough to one another to have more or less the same view!

0/10

elsolel

That's a wonderful resolution.  It makes me go awww. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Awwwww.  Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Awwwww.  Thank you.

0/10

elsolel

Oh, lots of forward plot in this chapter!  I like that she had to 'stop' concentrating in order to write.  I really hope he hasn't driven her away. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

He can be such a wretch, but then the things he has to endure are wretched.  Sigh.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

He can be such a wretch, but then the things he has to endure are wretched.  Sigh.

0/10

timestep

Interesting twist. And now that I've spent the last 3 days reading what you have so far, I can safely return to my life while I await updates.But they have been three entertaining days *smirk*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm delighted that you found my story worth three days of your life.  Wow!Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm delighted that you found my story worth three days of your life.  Wow!Thank you so much!

9/10

bansidh

I adore this fic!  I've been reading SS/HG for years and I don't comment often anymore (to my shame) but I had to tell you how wonderful I'm finding it...That said, I just had an, "Obi-Wan never told you about your father..." moment, you know?  Better written, more angsty (no one should have let George Lucas write dialogue).  I guess that makes it more a Joseph Cambell thing, rather than George Lucas.   Sort of an archetypal epic hero occurrence like the dark journey or some such.Sorry about the stream of consciousness thing; the story is fantastic.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for your fabuous review!  I haven't studied Joseph Campbell directly but am very  familiar with his work, so yes, I think you're right.  Let's face it--George Lucas used Campbell as his guideline!Thank you again.  I really do appreciate it!

Response from bansidh (Reviewer)

Not at all...looking forward to updates!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for your fabuous review!  I haven't studied Joseph Campbell directly but am very  familiar with his work, so yes, I think you're right.  Let's face it--George Lucas used Campbell as his guideline!Thank you again.  I really do appreciate it!

Response from bansidh (Reviewer)

Not at all...looking forward to updates!

0/10

elsolel

I'm so glad that he showed her what he did.  That helped a lot.  I can imagine the blizzard of Howlers!  That would be funny.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

She simply can't believe anything wrong about him, can she?  She thinks she knows best, and I hope she does. She's also very very smart, but we knew that!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

She simply can't believe anything wrong about him, can she?  She thinks she knows best, and I hope she does. She's also very very smart, but we knew that!

0/10

elsolel

Finally, he gathered the energy to growl, "And did somebody actually tell you that the wizarding world needed a new magical art?"This line had me rolling on the floor.  Excellent.  I loved how Hermione took care of Severus.  (That might have been last chapter, I'm not sure.) ( I think I might put off until later the rest of the story.  I'm up waaaay past my bedtime!  And am getting confused.  Which may lead to entertaining reviews, but not relevant ones! LOL!)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Entertaining and relevant, both!  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Entertaining and relevant, both!  Thank you!

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