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Potions Under Duress The Love You Take
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The Love You Take

1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

5: Chapter 5: Complications

6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

11: Chapter 11: Escalation

12: Chapter 12: Confusion

13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

14: Chapter 14: Recovering

15: Chapter 15: Regression

16: Chapter 16: Possession

17: Chapter 17: Confession

18: Chapter 18: Exposure

19: Chapter 19: Recognition

20: Chapter 20: Consternation

21: Chapter 21: Prostration

22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

24: Chapter 24: Validation

25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make

The Love You Take

Subversa

1,365 Reviews   |   1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 978 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 153,637 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Complications

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Escalation

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confusion

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Recovering

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Regression

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Possession

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Confession

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Exposure

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Recognition

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Consternation

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Prostration

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Validation

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make


About Subversa

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10/10

Dungeon_Butterfly

Yay! Hermione gets a backbone! LOL Can't wait to read the next chapter!

10/10

ofelia

You have created a such a rich wonderful story for these two - writing them so well so bloody well ...I will have to again collect myself from the liquid form I have become again and again reading your wonderful story ...I am SOO glad you started this story and ran head long into this delightful world!

10/10

Lily Valo

His entering her mind like that was the single most erotic thing I've ever read... I literally jumped back in my chair!

0/10

faula_tara

ok cat is out of the bag will serveus fight or flee now i am waiting to see i am fast becomming engrossed in this whole story you have but will it have a happy ending i sure hope so


and what is with the mirror it  shows your hearst desire will sev come clean about his feelings 

10/10

Lkmaide

sigh. . . . . .  update soon please!!

0/10

Javoher

Wonderful story!  Thank you for telling it.  I really enjoy your command of language, and appreciate your attention to the smallest detail.  Interesting plot, too.


Just wondering, though - when are Hermione and Prof. Snape going to start working on getting rid of the curse?  No matter how much in love she is (they are?), it has still taken away her free will.

10/10

lmm

Isn't there a saying something like "becareful what you wish for (look for in this case!) ...because you may just find it."


he loves her = mirror; she loves him = duhhh...


You weave a wonderful web with your words, that bewitch the minds and ensnare the senses of your humble readers.


MasterOurKing


you are a wonderful story teller...yes- you should be paid; re-read all your super reiews!


YayBravoCheer

10/10

rlc

Oh!  I can hardly wait to see how he reacts to that revelation.  Thank you for another wonderful chapter!

10/10

wsanders

I just had to read this chapter again. It's nice to see Hermione exerting herself and learning to negotiate with Severus. I wonder why Severus performed Legilimens to begin with, was he looking for what happened between Hermione and Krum?I'm way too fond of this story, and I hope your muse will continue to flow and there'll be many more chapters to come.

9/10

Katie616

Awwww, why'd you have to end it right there!?


It was really good, though. I'm glad they both worked out their differences, and that Severus finally got those fluffy pink socks off his floor. I would have been ashamed of them, and I have been known to wear fluffy socks of my own.


Thank you!


Bravo


It was wonderful!


~Katie

0/10

redheaddoxy

Arrrrg!  Cliffie!  Oh, so evil!

10/10

Lady K

Tell Severus that he had better not be rash when he responds
to Hermione’s newly-discovered feelings. :( As always, it was a great chapter.

10/10

La Mariane

it is so like Severus to try and take avantage of Hermione. He wanted to know her mind and now, i'm sure he knows more than he would like... But how will they cope with this new revelation (espacially Severus who is so determined to keep things unemotional)?


this chapter was really great, update soon please 

0/10

Wench

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! You are evil! :(

10/10

sinbad

Take what you want, say God, but pay for it.  I do believe Severus got a bit more than what he bargained for. 


Excellent chapter, I loved how they are learning the give and take part of relationships and how they danced around issues.

0/10

Mint Stick

I love the way she was so determined to make him listen to her. About time he treated her properly!


The revelation is intriguing - just what is his reaction going to be?

10/10

Elisabeth

Which rates more on the suspense scale, emotional cliffies or action cliffies? What do you do when a story is littered with both? Look around desperately for another chapter, that's what you do. Then realize there isn't one. Then spend a fruitless 15 minutes writing your own next chapter in your head. Then decide maybe it'll save your sanity to just forget you're reading this story for the time being ... until the next chapter is up, that is.

10/10

kittylefish

oh!  i fear the ending of this chapter has driven from my brain all that went before, and i can't remember anything i wanted to say.  not only does she know, but he knows she loves him.  or thinks she does - he might figure her brain is clouded from the curse, i suppose.


even before the declaration, the relationship was moving ahead in leaps and bounds:  all that delicious tenderness, and honesty, and communication!  (in between the necessary misunderstandings and such, of course.)


in other words, another great chapter of a fantastic story.

0/10

draegon_fire

Well, Severus finally found out Hermiones' feelings for him. I wonder how he will react. I can't wait to find out.

9/10

orm irian

I loved the warm, fuzzy parts of this chapter: their closeness and harmony in the wake of thier agreement were beautifully portrayed.  Tricky Severus has left himself in a real conundrum.  On the one hand, every one of his carefully cultivated self-protective instincts will tell him to withdraw from her.  On the other hand, he has promised not to push her away again.  So he's stuck--he has no choice but to deal with the frightening emotional intimacy of love. Hmm, I wonder what he will do.  Bad author!  Leaving us hanging like this.

10/10

MagicAlly

Beautiful.  What a heartbreaking end to this chapter (to say nothing of it being another evil cliffy).


What is he going to do next?  Pull away, telling himself it's for her own good? ~bites finger nails in anticipation of another lap of the roller coaster~


Love this fic so much. XXX

10/10

remy

My goodness, what a chapter! I'm in awe, you certainly know how to make the plot work for you...

10/10

harrypotterwanter

Hmm . . . I wonder what Severus will think of her revelation. He probably thinks she's affected by the curse and so cannot truly love him.


I am so glad that they have been getting along much better. Hopefully her revelation doesn't ruin too much. It was, after all, his fault that he found out. I wonder what he was trying to find in her mind. Did he want to know her feelings for him, or something else? I am quite eager for the next chapter!

10/10

Bentwaters

Mmmmmmm so, so GOOD!!!!  Can't wait for more. ^.^

10/10

ChristineDaae

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeees* I CANNOT wait for the next chap! :)

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