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Potions Under Duress The Love You Take
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The Love You Take

1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

5: Chapter 5: Complications

6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

11: Chapter 11: Escalation

12: Chapter 12: Confusion

13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

14: Chapter 14: Recovering

15: Chapter 15: Regression

16: Chapter 16: Possession

17: Chapter 17: Confession

18: Chapter 18: Exposure

19: Chapter 19: Recognition

20: Chapter 20: Consternation

21: Chapter 21: Prostration

22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

24: Chapter 24: Validation

25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make

The Love You Take

Subversa

1,365 Reviews   |   1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 978 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 153,637 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Complications

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Escalation

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confusion

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Recovering

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Regression

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Possession

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Confession

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Exposure

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Recognition

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Consternation

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Prostration

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Validation

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make


About Subversa

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Subversa

Member Since 2005  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,367  |  226 Reviews Written  |  1,394 Review Responses

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Reviews for The Love You Take

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irishredlass

Oh, no please tell me the title  of your other commitment and promise me that it will be done soon!  I so love your writing. 

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irishredlass

Oh, no please tell me the title  of your other commitment and promise me that it will be done soon!  I so love your writing. 

10/10

sheedy

Wow I love this fic. I have no doubt that you will finish it. Keep up the great work and give us a peek at your current endeavor.

10/10

ktg

I have never reviewed a story before, but I have to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story (as well as all of your previous stories).  I read each chapter twice when it appears.  It's sexy (of course), but also the character development is great.  I can't wait to see where it all ends up!

10/10

rlc

I know this story will be worth waiting for!  I'm sure your exchange story will be delectable too!  Thank you.

10/10

KarenDetroit

Hurry back, dear Author.

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IndigoAngel

NOOOOOOOO ~writhes on floor in pain~ however will I survive without this story??? Well, I suppose if your winter challenge one is half as good it MIGHT get me through...

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Detentionwithseverus

This is a beautiful story... I'm disappionted that you're taking a break from it but I'll take your word for it that you're going to finish and I look forward to the next installment.. whenever that may be! xx

10/10

lilyginny27

Take all the time you need.  Thanks for the heads up!  I'll read anything you write  (and vouch for you, too :-)

10/10

Katie616

Oh, my. I think that was the most touching of all these chapters. I have to say that it was quite a fluffy story at first, but it has most certaintly developed a lot, and they were all good developments.

I shall wait patiently for the next chapter to come out, though I do wish it would be soon. But I'll still wait, since it would kill me not to finish a story. In that, I'm the same as you, because I hate not finishing reading stories, and you hate not finishing writing them (though I am that way about writing stories, also, though I have not posted any stories online yet. I just don't like all the work it takes for me to deem in good enough for other poeple to see it, though I really am working on a story, which eventually I will submit. 

Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapter. I hope Severus ends up happy; he totally deserves it.

Katie 

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Mint Stick

It's just getting better and better! I love the way they're both starting to show the existence of feelings beyond just desire. I'm also really glad to see Harry being so mature and reasonable about things.

10/10

pickles

Now I'm sad to read you are taking a break on this story.  Its a very big favorite.

But I will wait patiently.  Drop me a line about your other obligation.

10/10

Ella Snape

I will definetly be waiting and looking for the next installment.  Good luck with your other story and hurry back. This is one of the best!thank you,

10/10

pinna47

*sigh* Okay. I'll just read chapters one through twelve again... and again. I have read so much fan fiction over the years and I have never wanted to comment before. This story is the most remarkable blend of romance and rutting. Sweet and sad, without being hopeless. There aren't many people that can write this well that aren't already published. I will be quite happy to see a new chapter when it appears.

10/10

Mazzy

Excellent chapter. cracked me up the way Sev keeps dismissing his feelings towards Hermione as almost jsut commom curtosy between them. Wondering if Hermione's love grows as part of the curse - like it seemed Bellatrix's may have - or just because. And very leery of Sev's dimissal of being betrothed.Sad you have to take a break from writing it but I look forward to when you come back to reclaim this story.

10/10

remy

Es ist so sehr romantisch! That was my first thought, but on reflection, there's so much more going on!

 The lovely romantic elements of this chapter mixed perfectly with the realistic feelings Severus has.  He knows he wants more but he's convinced himself that this is as good as it ever gets.

  Definitely wonderful Severus characterization (loved his dance-strategy!), by far my favorite chapter. 

10/10

GryffKat

I don't know what to say. I am devastated that this story is going on hiatus. I am just bummed, bummed, bummed. There are so many things I like about this story. I will write you a more encouraging review when I get over my complete and utter horror that I will have to wait for more.Arrghhh!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

10/10

purelush

hiatus??? *gasp* I don't know how I'll survive. But...I'll muddle through somehow.

Excellent chapter, as always. *sniff, sniff* 

0/10

draegon_fire

You're forgiven.  I know what it's like having other obligations step in the way.  I really loved this chapter, though.  Hermione has hinted to Severus that her feelings run deeper. I'm also shocked at Harry and Ron's behavior. Not so much Harry's, since he didn't overreact. But I knew Ron was an ass, but this chapter really brought that out.  It looks like things are looking up for the moment. I look forward to reading more of this story once you come back from your hiatus.

10/10

Maggiferous

I love the turn this story is taking, and am more than happy to see it come to a proper conclusion. 

10/10

Deavlynn

Amazing as always!  At least you left us a nice long chapter to tide us over until you can continue again.

What's with the whole betrothal thing? huh? Very fishy. I can't wait to find out!  I'll cast my vote now - I'm hoping for a SS/HG wedding at the end of this. 

I will patiently (okay, maybe not so patiently) await the next installment.  Have fun with your other story!

10/10

Bentwaters

I feel .......  wistful I guess is the word for it.  So beautiful, but so sad.  I just want to become some omniscient being and open their eyes to what we all see.  *Sigh*  I guess I'll have to just dream it all.  That is, until you get back to this lovely yet heart-tugging place.  I'll be patient. Well, I'll TRY to be patient. At least you've left us with lots to think on in the meantime.  and then to know that we'll have ANOTHER story from you.... can't be upset by that at all. heheBest wishes on all your writings.

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peppermint

Well, I suppose I can live with that so that your giftee for the exchange isn't left hanging!  I've really been enjoying this story and eagery look forward to its continuation in the future.

10/10

my little secret

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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Anonymous

Well, if you have to switch gears for awhile at least you didn't leave us hanging.  Good luck!

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