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Potions Under Duress The Love You Take
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The Love You Take

1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

5: Chapter 5: Complications

6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

11: Chapter 11: Escalation

12: Chapter 12: Confusion

13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

14: Chapter 14: Recovering

15: Chapter 15: Regression

16: Chapter 16: Possession

17: Chapter 17: Confession

18: Chapter 18: Exposure

19: Chapter 19: Recognition

20: Chapter 20: Consternation

21: Chapter 21: Prostration

22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

24: Chapter 24: Validation

25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make

The Love You Take

Subversa

1,365 Reviews   |   1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 978 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 153,637 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Complications

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Escalation

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confusion

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Recovering

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Regression

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Possession

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Confession

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Exposure

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Recognition

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Consternation

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Prostration

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Validation

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make


About Subversa

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Subversa

Member Since 2005  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,367  |  226 Reviews Written  |  1,394 Review Responses

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Mint Stick

Dumbledore is a master of manipulation, isn't he? Although in this particular situation, I suppose he is trying to find the best possible solution out of the many bad ones.

An intriguing start, in any case! 

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Yes, no twinkly Dumbledore, sadly.  I will agree that he's trying to find the best possible solution, but it is also another example of him sacrificing Severus without a backward glance. Thanks so much for the note!

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spikesra

Love it! I love the last line is heartwrenching

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Thank you, Spikesra.  I'm rather addicted to disturbing last sentences - I'm glad you liked that one.  More to come!

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Bentwaters

WHEEEEE!!!!  Off on another wonderful journey at the fingers of you!!!  ^.^  A little mourning time was needed by all, but now we continue with the "good stuff".  Can't wait to keep reading! 

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Ooh, journeysome fingers!  Mine wave back to yours:

Yes, I've mourned, and now I've said fluck it!  I'm gonna write some MASHED POTATOES WITH GRAVY.  NO FREAKING CRUNCHY GREEN VEGETABLES.

Yes, good stuff ahead.  Later, I'll do post-DH.  probably. 

9/10

my little secret

Oh, yeah!  *sits back, puts up feet, crosses arms behind head*  I'm in for the long haul on this one!Peace  ~ j

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

LOL!  Lovely image, doll.  More to come soon!

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revolsepans

Yeah!!  Terrific beginning and I love the premise.  Looking forward to more.  Ahh, I'm in heaven just dreaming of the possibilities....

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

A true SSHG fan, I can tell!  There are so many places to go with such a beginning, I agree.  Thanks for the note!

10/10

mugglemomof3

Squee!!!!! Another HG/SS from Subversa! My summer is now complete. Whooo Hooo.  Very compelling start. I can't tell who my heart is breaking for more, Severus, because what he has to do, or Hemione, because what she will become part of, or Maybe even Dumbledore, for what he must witness and excuse because it is war. Awe.... It just hurts. Either way, I'm loving every  minute of it.... More pretty please... Oh, and of curse hugs to SubHub....

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi, hon!  Boy, I barely got this one in under the wire for summer, didn't I?  After DH, I'm afraid my store of sympathy for AD is at an all-time low, but I do feel for both Severus and Hermione.  Thank you for letting me know you'd read it, sweetie - more to come, soon.

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real_life

Yes!!! finally another story. I look forward to the rest of it. By the way, you write a great 'Snape'.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi,

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

!  I'm glad you like my Snape - he's a tortured soul, but I can't help but love him.  I'm very pleased to know you're looking forward to the rest of it!

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septentrion

There are a lot of references to the sould here. A DH's legacy, probably. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I would hate to think anything of this story is DH's legacy, but obviously, my characterization of Dumbledore comes from my feelings around DH.  I think Severus mentions his soul because, I think the necessity of opening himself up to Hermione to some extent equates, in his mind, to surrendering the hidden, protected core of himself to someone else - and for this to be at AD's instigation is just too much, for him.  Thank you for reading, my dear.

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Calicoskys

oooh this sounds like a interesting on *patiently waits for next chapter*  My screen name is a somewhat  obscure Paul McCartney reference so go you for having the beatles thrown in there :)) 

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

So far, we SSHG folk seem to be a Beatles-loving lot!  I'll have to investigate the origin of Calico Skies, though.  Thanks for taking the time to leave a note, my dear.

10/10

Keladry Lupin

*impressed whistle*  I'm worried, but better Severus for what you've implied than anyone else mentioned.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Yes, he's the best one, because it is a horrible thing them both, to be forced into something they would not have chosen at this juncture of their lives.  I do ache for him, having to risk his terribly solitary soul in a forced intimacy.

10/10

amsev

I was wondering whether or not the title came from a Beatles' song.  Excellent beginning.  I look forward to reading more.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

We Beatles-lovers recognize their lyrics, don't we?  I'm tickled that it caught your eye.  I'm glad you like the beginning; I hope to post the next by the weekend.

10/10

wsanders

This is the Dumbledore that I can easily buy into. Not necessarily evil, but does everything in his power to see to the right thing being done.

This promises to be another one of your interesting and long stories. I look forward to its unfolding.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I'm so pleased that you aren't put off because the story is not canon-compliant.  I just find comfort in spending time in AU, don't you?  Thank you for the lovely encouragement.

Response from wsanders (Reviewer)

Well I honestly don't understand why some people turn their noses up on AU by default. I'm certainly keeping this story on my TPP bookmark list.

10/10

maryperk

Very interesting start.  Hope to read more soon.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Thanks,

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

!  I hope to update by the weekend.

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DeeMichelle

I'm so intrigued by this story.  I don't know that I can put into words how excited I am.  :-)Lovely beginning!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

LOL!  Well, I hope it lives up to your excitement, love.  Thank you for the beta and the endless support.

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jessnmary

Wow! I love what you have so far and can't wait for more!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi,

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

!  I'm glad you like what you've seen so far - more to come soon!

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sunny33

I told you. someone should have AKed that Morgen years ago!

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sunny33

Gotta feel sorry for Sev when he was young, just as well he's got better taste now.

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signofthetimes

A deeply twisted cliffhanger - what a choice! 

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BrenaMarie

Around 10 years ago I read this story and was absolutely in love with it. Now, here I sit, with liquid pooling in my eyes as once again this tale  has touched my heart. Thank you so much for having the courage to share this pure joy with all of us. Your writing is flawless, your respect of the characters is top notch and your story telling sucked me right in to every single moment. Thank you so much again. Much Love ~ Brena 

10/10

maryperk

so, um, more please.  I hope it's just the holiday season that has you too busy to update and not the lose of plot kitties.

9/10

celestlyn

I really loved this story. You did a great job and it is beautifully written. The whole thing was a pleasure to read.

10/10

ader_snape

This is one of my favorites by you. I love reading your work!! =)

10/10

Phoenix_Fire

What a wonderful way to end this magnificent epic. I have really enjoyed your story, and I have no doubt I will read it again and again.

10/10

lulululu

I adored this story.  It has been such a joy to follow it as you've written it.  It was sexy, suspenseful, frightening, moving, and ultimately extremely satisfying.  Thanks for writing!

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witherwings1972

Hi. I really enjoyed this story. it was well written and very moving at the end.

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