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Potions Under Duress A Fresh Start
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A Fresh Start

1: Chapter One

2: Two

3: Three

4: Four

5: Five

6: Six

7: Seven

8: Eight

9: nine

10: Ten

11: Eleven

A Fresh Start

richardgloucester

218 Reviews   |   218 Ratings, 0 Likes, 225 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 25,328 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Summary:Neville, Snape and Hermione return to Hogwarts after the summer. Some things have changed in the post-Voldemort world – how do they cope? (Response to prompt 12 on the Potter Place Fall Challenge Prompt List.)

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven


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RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013).  She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!

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Reviews for A Fresh Start

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8/10

Merlinsbeard

I really enjoyed that chapter, hopefully there will be more.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!  Yes, there's more.

10/10

karelia

Yay, it's great to see your most wonderful story posted here!!! *adds you to faves*

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you very much!  And I'm flattered to be a favourite.  I've just submitted two more chapters.

10/10

Keladry Lupin

Okay, for Septima to make such cutting remarks when Severus helped her the previous year in such a manner ... that's so hypocritical!  What a #$&@*!!!

I do love the metaphor of Neville being a butterfly.  He isn't the only one in this story, but using him as the catalyst for events to come was inspired.

What a fabulous opening chapter!  Yay you! 

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thanks, Keladry.  Neville always had it in him to be a butterfly.  Even JKR saw that....

10/10

Aoibheann

Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.  Looking forward to reading more.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you very much!

0/10

Tzentel

Hi - What a happy story! I rather expected Severus & Hermione to end up together, but what a surprise to have Ron & Neville. sweet :D

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!

0/10

jectex

Wonerful,wonderful story.

10/10

mick42

Ahhh, it's so sweet that Neville doesn't know that he is now a hunk.

10/10

mick42

A grown up sexy Neville, is a wonderful surprise. Severus' return a little sad, that he still is not trusted after all he suffered is appalling. Am I alone or does anyone else want to give Vector a slap, After Severus saved her sorry arse from Amycus Carrow, she copes an attitude.  

10/10

mick42

I'm so glad that Ron and Neville got together, they make a cute couple. Now Hermione has her very own " knitting Pattern  Man" 

10/10

mick42

I'm sure Hermione will bring him around, and not leave him to drown in his nobility.

10/10

mick42

Beware, hell hath no fury, like a Slytherin scorned, 

10/10

mick42

Because pretending nothing has happened always works so well.

10/10

mick42

Hermione Granger melting cauldrons!  I wonder how long she has wanted to do that. At last the scales have begun to fall from female eyes all over the castle, and about time to.   P. S. " Severus Snape teddy bear extraordinaire " now I want a Severus Snape teddy bear * she whines loudly *

0/10

malva

Thank you for another wonderfull story. Your characterisations never fail to bring a smile to my face =)

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!

0/10

hollyhopdrive

Looking forward to the next chapter, this is a truly lovely story.  Congratulations.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!

10/10

pookah

Go, Hermione!  Go after what you want!  That was a lovely chapter, and Severus is right not to be chasing a student. 

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!  And yes - it's a very awkward position for them both to be in.

10/10

sinbad

Definately a sad chapter, but I'm sure Hermione will turn his head to her way of thinking!

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

A sad chapter, but not the last....

10/10

sinbad

I like the way you are manuvering the story and shifting the feel of it.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you!

10/10

sinbad

Good chapter, and a bit more serious in tone.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Thank you.

10/10

sinbad

I don't know if you intended for this to be humerous or not, but Severus's dry scarcasm really makes this story!  Well done.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

I do intend quite a bit of humour.  I just hope you're not finding too much that's unintentional!!!


Thank you!

10/10

sinbad

I had to chuckle at Severus's responce to the tailor.  He is really trying to behave!

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Yes, he is.  I think he really wanted to use Crucio...

10/10

sinbad

hmmm a Snape make over in the works?  I'm really surprised he would bother.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

He's thinking of a Fresh Start.....


But not a complete makeover.

10/10

sinbad

Oh well, Hermione blew her cover.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Very nearly...

10/10

sinbad

Too funny,  she must be 'setting her cap' for an unwary professor!

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

Not yet!

0/10

sinbad

I loved the almost last line 'It beggard belief.'  it just strck me as funny.

Response from richardgloucester (Author of A Fresh Start)

I'm glad I made you laugh!

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