The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge The Enchanted Tower Room
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for The Enchanted Tower Room

The Enchanted Tower Room

1: Enchanted Discovery

2: Back to the Tower Room

3: The Enticement of the Tower Room

4: Enchanted Discovery

5: Seduction of the Tower Room

6: The Distressing Entreaty

7: Allure Beyond the Tower Walls

8: Captivation Beyond the Tower Room

9: The Unrestrained Pull

10: Attracting Attention

11: The Apparation Test

12: Strain and Discord

13: Undaunted Choices

14: The Lovers Curse

15: Swinging of the Pendulum

16: Walls Come Crashing Down

17: Unrequited And In Sorrow

18: Love's Helping Hands

19: Facing the Dark Lord

20: Survivors, Victors and Victims

21: Consequences and Reflections

22: Prospects, Plans and Promise

23: Reunited

24: Breaking the Curse

25: As Past and Present Collide

The Enchanted Tower Room

beaweasley2

544 Reviews   |   544 Ratings, 0 Likes, 296 Favorites )

Drama Romance General Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 147,708 Words 25 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape Horace Slughorn Lavender Brown The Grey Lady Harry Potter Ronald Weasley Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Avery (Death Eater) Evan Rosier Neville Longbottom Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Kingsley Shacklebolt Ginevra Weasley Minerva McGonagall Ernie MacMillan Filius Flitwick Susan Bones The Bloody Baron

Teenage Severus Snape and Lily find a room in the castle with a partially hidden staircase that leads them up to a private room at the top of a tower that even the Marauders don't know about.



Then twenty years later, Hermione Granger finds the room. Suddenly she’s confronted by Severus Snape, who’s always considered tower room to be his own private little nook, finds herself not only under the rooms spell, but must now meet the conditions of the room with the one professor that has always been her biggest enigma.

Start Reading

Chapters (25)

Chapter 1: Enchanted Discovery

Chapter 2: Back to the Tower Room

Chapter 3: The Enticement of the Tower Room

Chapter 4: Enchanted Discovery

Chapter 5: Seduction of the Tower Room

Chapter 6: The Distressing Entreaty

Chapter 7: Allure Beyond the Tower Walls

Chapter 8: Captivation Beyond the Tower Room

Chapter 9: The Unrestrained Pull

Chapter 10: Attracting Attention

Chapter 11: The Apparation Test

Chapter 12: Strain and Discord

Chapter 13: Undaunted Choices

Chapter 14: The Lovers Curse

Chapter 15: Swinging of the Pendulum

Chapter 16: Walls Come Crashing Down

Chapter 17: Unrequited And In Sorrow

Chapter 18: Love's Helping Hands

Chapter 19: Facing the Dark Lord

Chapter 20: Survivors, Victors and Victims

Chapter 21: Consequences and Reflections

Chapter 22: Prospects, Plans and Promise

Chapter 23: Reunited

Chapter 24: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 25: As Past and Present Collide


About beaweasley2

Validated
Author

beaweasley2

Member Since 2006  |  53 Stories  |  Favorited by 519  |  2,769 Reviews Written  |  6,181 Review Responses

I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

Also Archived At
Sycophant Hex

Reviews for The Enchanted Tower Room

Displaying Review 226 - 250 of 544 in total
← Previous 1 2 … 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 … 21 22 Next →
0/10

phoenix

Oh, nothing like some of those sneaky magical rooms in the castle. I love how it has some sort of power over them.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Thank you. Well the room has some power over them... all three of them.

0/10

phoenix

Interesting story. I like the back and forth to the past to show the room's history.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Thank you very much.

10/10

Shadow

Hmmm.... i could make a dozen gueses as to why the spells have lasted so long, but I just KNOW you would never tel me *pouts*I love the artwork at the beginning of the chapter. It shows so well the differences between Hermione's and Lily's reaction to Severus.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

I will tell you eventually! It has to do with what happened between the Grey Lady and the Bloody Baron, obviously. *hint* If Lily's love could act as a lasting protection for Harry... of course that only lasted until he came of age (but that could have been Dumbledore's doing?)Thank you very much for the lovey review and the compliment on my drawing. I was going to do one drawing per chapter, but *sigh* I don't really have the time for that now. Yes, the art work is to show the differences between the relationships. I'm flattered you like it.

0/10

Anonymous

So many questions that I share with Hermione right now! ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, loads of questions and lose ends... but I'll wrap them up as we go along. (At least before they leave Hogwarts this year)

9/10

Anonymous

I can sense the tension building! *grins*

Author's Response: Yes, things are definately building between Hermione and Severus. *winks* Thank you for the reveiw.

0/10

Anonymous

Ooh, very curious to see how this all turns out!

Author's Response: I could tell you but why ruin the fun  you don't mind if I keep quiet about the ending do you?

Thank you for the reveiw.

Angel Mischa's response: *sigh* I tease readers all the time, so I guess I deserve a taste of my own medicine! LOL

9/10

Anonymous

Oh, Lily gets her moment. Sort of! LOL In the story, at least!

Author's Response:

Yep, Lily does.   Thank you for the review.

10/10

Anonymous

This is one of the best uses of canon (and the ghosts!) that I've read in perhaps forever!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I like using canon and twisting it to fit my story, and if I can fit it around what Harry's doing and still keep it true to the book (mostly) the better! Using the ghosts, the Grey Lady and the Bloody Baron was actually one of the inspirations for the story in the first place - thier tragic story. Then I wanted a room everyone would recognize but hasn't been used before, and then show the contrast of the relationships between Lily/Severus and Snape/Hermione. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thanks again for the kind words. I really appreciate them.

10/10

Anonymous

I always like tea references, and this Snape is great fun! I'm actually not too bothered about the lack of Lily because this feels like a fun romp to me!

Author's Response: Just showing one more thing Hermine and Severus have in common.  I'm glad you like how I am doing Severus. Thank you for the reveiw.

10/10

Anonymous

Great reuse of some canon here! *excited*

Author's Response: Thank you.

0/10

kimjo2

nooooooonnoooooonnoooooo!!  more please!  to the tower i beg of you.  don't leave me hanging...*pant pant*  lordy you write hotly.  thanks so much

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Yessssssssss ther is plenty more - I promise! but as far as hanging... I've got the next chapter written  it just needs to be cleaned up first.

0/10

kittylefish

and so things progress.  i wondered if the casters of the spells being ghosts makes a difference to their longivity.  nice building of the attraction between them.  i wonder what draco is up to and if it has any significance.  i wonder when the next chapter will be up for us to read!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Yes, and so both realtionships progress... I couldn't possibly tell you why the spells have lasted - but I will, I promise. In regards to Draco - it's the 'let the Death Eater's in the castle' thing from the book. I'm paralleling the book in this - somewhat. I've removed the Harry stuff and centering on Hermione's POV in 1997 and Severus' in 1977. I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can. It's written,   just needs some cleaning up first.

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

okay, knowing that you are paralleling the books might help me with future wonderings.  and as long as i know you're slaving away at your computer, i'm okay with the waiting.   ; )

0/10

sunny33

perhaps the spells persist as the casters are not completely passed on to death, they remain as ghosts?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Good question. You'll see.

10/10

Maddie

It look like they are becoming irresistible to each other. Just a little push . . . .

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

That's why Severus keeps making Hermione take the potions (and he does too) to try and squelch that irrestibility. Don't worry - I'm pushing!

10/10

michiruwater

Yayayayay! Thank you ^_^ I love this story so much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Geeze, thank you. I love hearing that!   Oh! You're very welcome, Michiruwater.

0/10

MollysSister

I am all sorts of curious how the spells have lasted so long as well. I think its promising for a "happily ever after" ending that H is attracted to S outside of the tower room. As always i look forward to the next chapter.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

,  Consider and comapre the reactions of the two girls - Hermione and Lily. They are both effected by the spells, both having been under the influence the same length of time at this point. Still, we do know how Lily's and Severus' relationship turns out.

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

Yes we do know how Severus and Lily turned out=not together, not friends, not happily ever after. I expect Lily felt used and angry...Future Severus appears to be attempting to keep Hermione away from him physically. Oh the tangled web you weave!!

0/10

ofelia

I love the way you are drawing this story......their pull to each other outside of the tower! Just wonderful!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Thank you very much.

10/10

barbied011

I love this story.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Thank you. My beta should be getting the next chapter really soon.

10/10

Mazzy

Really enjoying this. And man, did young Snape have some serious control!! - actually starting the deed with LIly and then stopping... As for him and Hermione, I wonder if this means that she is his true soulmate or if he has more than one soulmate - Lily and Hermione - or if it's just coincidence that she found this room. Great read. Full of mystery.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Ok, drew from RL on this one a bit... and yes the  guy was so confused that he did pull away. Besides, Severus is an honorable guy  and does really care about Lily.In regards to which girl is Severus's soul mate - reread the what the Grey Lady said: "I suppose there are charms that make you susceptible, surrendering, yielding, pliable to the man you are with – if you are intended for each other – if you like each other.... You cannot get onto the stairs unless you are with someone with whom you are meant to be together or unless you are soul mates or are destined for each other."Hermione will explain how she got through the barrier, later, but the key is there.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the reveiw.

10/10

blue artemis

Chemistry, definitely.  

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

*nods* Yep! Just a bit!

0/10

hgelman

Interesting chapter!  I eagerly await more!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Thank you. I hope to be able to post it soon for you.

9/10

Katie616

I definitely think that there's more between them than a few age-old spells, and I like how Hermione is slowly realising that. I hope Severus isn't far behind her! I don't think either of them have figured it out totally, but I hope it doesn't take them too long. . . it's funny how Hermione just thinks it's an oddly long-wearing spell, when it's obviously. . . something more. . . -hint hint-Thank you for the chapter, even if it was a tad short!~Katie

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

"You cannot get onto the stairs unless you are with someone with whom you are meant to be together or unless you are soul mates or are destined for each other..." Hermione already respects Severus, admires him and has wanted to impress him since day one, I think if she cuold she'd admit that she'd like to befriend him...   Still, they are under the spells on the tower influencing them. Fact is, the spells are unusually long-wearing... but do they usually work outside the tower walls? (hint: Lily's reactions!)I'm sorry the chapter was too short. The next will be ready soon...

9/10

harrypotterwanter

Hopefully they solve the puzzle of the spells to the Tower Room so that they can continue their relationship without something standing in their way (other than their student-teacher relationship). Perhaps Hermione should try to talk to the Grey Lady again soon if the ghost knows that Hermione is trying to combat the curse. Probably finding out the spells from the Bloody Baron would be the best, but I'm not sure how much he'd be willing to reveal.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Oh, my gosh! Did you sneak a peek at my outline! grrrr. Fine then! Teehehe  You got some stuff right on the nose! Shhhhhh!

10/10

Anonymous

Brief but perfect. Moving things along nicely. The tension between the two is simmering but it feels like it could explode any time! (waiting desperately for the explosion, hint hint).

And things seem all right between Severus and Lily. How can that be? I want it to be good for them, but of course it can't last...

Oh, mystery author. What a spell you're weaving. Lovely.

Author's Response: Explosion will come - and a some problems and external forces will throw in the towel...

Both relationships are in for some challenges, and each girl will be faced with decisions. Severus's relationship with Lily is fine - now... and his affair with Hermione is causing him some discomfort. Why else would Severus feel that they would need the Mind-Clarity Potion, the four drops of the Calming Ascetic and a few of the Pacifying Draught? Have you noticed that he upped the amount of Calming Ascetic? Poor guy, he trying so had to resist... Teehehehe


Thank you for the reveiw. I'm glad you're enjoy the tale!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

There has to be more to their feelings than the spells from the past.  Oh thank you for updating this story.  I try to read everybodies, but this one I truly look forward to  seeing an update on.  Hopefully until next chapter.Tamara aka

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)

Tamarah,  Wow, thank you. This kind of support really makes me want to keep going with this story all the way to the end. I have the next six chapters written so far and I will have the next one ready for my beta really soon - like by tomorrow! I'm so thankful for the kind words of encouragement... Now back to typing!

Displaying Review 226 - 250 of 544 in total
← Previous 1 2 … 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 … 21 22 Next →

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules