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The Plight-Trothed Bride

1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

2: Burgeoning Consequence

3: Persistent Enchantment

4: Now and Forever

5: Rough Beginnings

6: Relentless Persistence

7: Troublesome Misconceptions

8: Troubles and Traitors

9: Prisoner of Azkaban

10: The Ministry of Magic

11: The Second Visit

12: Announcements and Tidings

13: Question of Freedom

14: Troubled Decisions

15: Mistaken Intent

16: Friendly Intervention

17: The First Date

18: The Big Birthday Adventure

19: Duncansby Head

20: Squabbles and Shopping

21: Regulations and Requests

22: Return to Spinner’s End

23: Good Intents and Interventions

24: Tea, Books, and Answers

25: Her Knight Errant

26: Burgeoning Intimacies

27: The Snakes in the Grass

28: House of Rose and Thorns

29: Unwillingly Trapped

30: Facing Friends

31: On Heather Moor

32: Revived and Wedded

33: First Days

34: Enlightening Visitations

35: The Headmaster Returns

36: The Prince Family Tree

37: The Osgood Family Secret

38: Into the Flames

39: Interrogation and Inquiries

40: Trying Romantic On

41: Trying Assertive Romance

42: A Magical Pact

43: Potions and Consequences

44: Breaking the Curse

45: Phoenix Tears

46: Nesting Invasions

47: The End of Term

48: Débuted and Eluded

49: Christmas Eve

50: Intervention and Surprises

51: Christmas Surprises

52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

53: Boxing Day

54: A Magical New Year’s

55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

56: Comeuppance and Surprises

57: Achievements and Failures

58: The Colubridae Snake

59: Jealousy and Flowers

60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

61: Preparations and Projects

62: The Great Retrieval Quest

63: School Is Over

The Plight-Trothed Bride

beaweasley2

1,194 Reviews   |   1,194 Ratings, 0 Likes, 339 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 470,308 Words 71 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Harry Potter Original Character Rita Skeeter Neville Longbottom Kingsley Shacklebolt Kreacher Angelina Johnson Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Molly Weasley Percy Weasley Remus Lupin Teddy Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Narcissa Malfoy Draco Malfoy Travers (Death Eater) Augusta (Gran) Longbottom Albus Dumbledore Charlie Weasley Poppy Pomfrey Astoria Greengrass Dean Thomas Antonin Dolohov Mulciber (Death Eater) Mr. Ollivander Cho Chang Filius Flitwick Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?

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Chapters (63)

Chapter 1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

Chapter 2: Burgeoning Consequence

Chapter 3: Persistent Enchantment

Chapter 4: Now and Forever

Chapter 5: Rough Beginnings

Chapter 6: Relentless Persistence

Chapter 7: Troublesome Misconceptions

Chapter 8: Troubles and Traitors

Chapter 9: Prisoner of Azkaban

Chapter 10: The Ministry of Magic

Chapter 11: The Second Visit

Chapter 12: Announcements and Tidings

Chapter 13: Question of Freedom

Chapter 14: Troubled Decisions

Chapter 15: Mistaken Intent

Chapter 16: Friendly Intervention

Chapter 17: The First Date

Chapter 18: The Big Birthday Adventure

Chapter 19: Duncansby Head

Chapter 20: Squabbles and Shopping

Chapter 21: Regulations and Requests

Chapter 22: Return to Spinner’s End

Chapter 23: Good Intents and Interventions

Chapter 24: Tea, Books, and Answers

Chapter 25: Her Knight Errant

Chapter 26: Burgeoning Intimacies

Chapter 27: The Snakes in the Grass

Chapter 28: House of Rose and Thorns

Chapter 29: Unwillingly Trapped

Chapter 30: Facing Friends

Chapter 31: On Heather Moor

Chapter 32: Revived and Wedded

Chapter 33: First Days

Chapter 34: Enlightening Visitations

Chapter 35: The Headmaster Returns

Chapter 36: The Prince Family Tree

Chapter 37: The Osgood Family Secret

Chapter 38: Into the Flames

Chapter 39: Interrogation and Inquiries

Chapter 40: Trying Romantic On

Chapter 41: Trying Assertive Romance

Chapter 42: A Magical Pact

Chapter 43: Potions and Consequences

Chapter 44: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 45: Phoenix Tears

Chapter 46: Nesting Invasions

Chapter 47: The End of Term

Chapter 48: Débuted and Eluded

Chapter 49: Christmas Eve

Chapter 50: Intervention and Surprises

Chapter 51: Christmas Surprises

Chapter 52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

Chapter 53: Boxing Day

Chapter 54: A Magical New Year’s

Chapter 55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

Chapter 56: Comeuppance and Surprises

Chapter 57: Achievements and Failures

Chapter 58: The Colubridae Snake

Chapter 59: Jealousy and Flowers

Chapter 60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

Chapter 61: Preparations and Projects

Chapter 62: The Great Retrieval Quest

Chapter 63: School Is Over


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beaweasley2

Member Since 2006  |  53 Stories  |  Favorited by 519  |  2,769 Reviews Written  |  6,181 Review Responses

I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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10/10

sinbad

Intriguing, I'm wondering about that relative myself...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Oh me too, I mean - you'll see. He's a real piece of work. teeheheheThank you for the reveiw.

0/10

HBAR

Oh my goodness ... this is complete?!?!  Yay!  Just wanted to stop in to say that you haven't lost me as a reader, I just have found myself buried by real life over the last year, so I've stopped reading chapters.  At some point I will find the time to finish this thing, but I also really want to start from the beginning before I move on to new chapters.  So exciting when something you've been reading for a long time is finished since so many good fic gets abandoned.  Good job, you!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep. It's complete. Buried RL happens, even to me! I appreciate you and that you give your time to even read my writing. means a lot. Thank you for teh review and happy enchanted reading to you. 

9/10

Mazzy

Ugh! Both of them better come to their senses and quickly!! It'd be nice if at least one of them wuld loose their stubborn streak long enough to simply invite the other for tea. Tehy haven't even spoken and Hermione's rushing off to sign annulment papers. Good grief!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I know - aren't they being stubborn? Hermione only has the papers, picked them up. She hasn't signed anything - yet. Tea. Severus inviting Hermione for tea. Nope, I've something else in mind that's more fun.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I know - aren't they being stubborn? Hermione only has the papers, picked them up. She hasn't signed anything - yet. Tea. Severus inviting Hermione for tea. Nope, I've something else in mind that's more fun.

10/10

soccermom

I don't think I've reviewed this story recently.  I love this story and can't wait for your next update.  Someone needs to lock those two in a cabin in the middle of nowhere for awhile so they can sort things out!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Oh  gods!  That's bloody brilliant! can you imagine, Severus locked in a cabin, wandless,  with Hermione?  and leave her wandless too! The cabin warded in such a way as to make wandless magic to weak to... Thank you!!!  By whom? maybe...?

Response from soccermom (Reviewer)

How about they're locked in a cabin wandless with Rita Skeeter in her animagus shape and a can of bug spray and huge fly swatter as weapons!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

 Laugh so hard I pee my knickers!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Oh  gods!  That's bloody brilliant! can you imagine, Severus locked in a cabin, wandless,  with Hermione?  and leave her wandless too! The cabin warded in such a way as to make wandless magic to weak to... Thank you!!!  By whom? maybe...?

Response from soccermom (Reviewer)

How about they're locked in a cabin wandless with Rita Skeeter in her animagus shape and a can of bug spray and huge fly swatter as weapons!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

 Laugh so hard I pee my knickers!

10/10

Mazzy

I have backtracked a few chapters so I may have already reviewed this one, but in case I haven't ... :)What really touched me about this chapter was it's 'realism' at the end (am I even allowed to use that word when talking about wizards and magical trials??). I mean, the tiral itself ended ideally - which I, for one, am grateful for - but it was after the trial that really spoke to me. Severus' responses and his utter shocked seemed palpable in the words you chose, and Hermione's confusion comes through just as strongly. Your words really pulled me into the characters' individual emotional states. I loved it and I'm so glad I have one more chapter yet to read before I have to wait for an update. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

, thank you so much for the wonderful review. I am so pleased that the shock and stunned disbelief Severus is feeling and the deep confusion and hurt Hermione is came through. Thank you.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

, thank you so much for the wonderful review. I am so pleased that the shock and stunned disbelief Severus is feeling and the deep confusion and hurt Hermione is came through. Thank you.

0/10

Snapeizzle

This story is deliciously good. I started it about a week and a half ago, and became obsessed with the story by reading it during any free moment I have. Now that I'm at the end, I need more! This story is so deliciously good; and I'm loving your take on Snape/Hermione. I feel like you have stayed very true to who Severus is, and let him grow naturally.Can't wait to read more :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

It's delicious? Oh, that so made my day! I've never been called delicious. I am delighted that you're enjoying the story and that you like how I'm typing Seveurs/Hermione. I'm really trying to stay true to who he is and his basic character, because we love his snarky personality, right?  Yes, there is more, loads more this is a really long story lol) and I'm typing on chapter 44. lol  Thank you very much for reading and for the review.

10/10

helshez

No! She can't do it, not now that Sev is finally starting to come around. That's an evil cliffie to leave us on, I hope you can update soon.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, but unfortunately she doesn't know he is. Sorry about the cliffie! I do do that on occasion. I'll update in a little bit. I promise!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, but unfortunately she doesn't know he is. Sorry about the cliffie! I do do that on occasion. I'll update in a little bit. I promise!

0/10

Morsmordre

Whew! Too bad that spell isn't real!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

If it was, could you imagine how it could much up lives? Well, maybe you could.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

If it was, could you imagine how it could much up lives? Well, maybe you could.

10/10

mia madwyn

Oh, this is so painful!  Poor Hermione!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, I know. I'm working on turning things around. I'm glad you like it so far.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, I know. I'm working on turning things around. I'm glad you like it so far.

10/10

Sampdoria

Such a fantastic story this has been, thank you so much for your plotting, writing and sharing!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are very welcome. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

doodle

This is well done.  I look forward to the next installment.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much.

10/10

JordanneLeigh

Just lovely! Thanks for the update! I really enjoy this fic!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much and I appreciate the support and the stars.

0/10

Ryder

I read the entirety of this story in the space of three hours and fell in love with it in the first ten minutes. I'm eager for the next chapter!I love that Severus isn't turning into a complete marshmellow yet (no matter how cute it is). I always like seeing how he handles his feelings for Hermione, and you do brilliantly at describing how he does it. Priswell needs a swift kick in the arse and a dose of her own "medicine", and I sincerely hope that Severus is the one to give it to her. Muahaha.Anyways, keep up the awsome work and update soon!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

, I'm impressed that you read the story up to date so quickly! Thank you for chosing my story. I'm working on proofreading the nexrt chapter and it will be sent off to be beta cleaned shortly. I dont' write wimpy Snape (unless drugged), marshmellow or sappy Snapes!  I love Snape as snarky, sneering, scarcastic and dark. Won't change him much. but he will learn how to be in a realtionship when I am through with him.Oh, Priswell, Skeeter, Whitmire will all get theirs! in the end.Thank you very much, and thank you for the review.

10/10

severuslover

Lovely chapter. Nice progress between Severus and Hermione. Interesting twist with the potions and the cave theory. Keep up the beautiful work!! ~Jen

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. Yes, progress, but one that Severus will have to figure out why it's progress - so he doesn't make a mistake later. The caves was fun to dabble in. Thank you for the review, Jen. I'll do my best for you! LOL

0/10

Past

my heart is breaking for Hermione. After the last chapter I was mad at my husband, not that our relationship is anything like that of HG\SS but he is still a stupid man, perhaps I am a little to vested in the land of fiction oh well guess the hubby will have to deal with it  . You should be proud that your writing can instill such emotion in someone.My only issue with this story that I am also reading repaying a life dept and want both updated quickly (no pressure beggers can't be choosers). Keep up the great work.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I'm sorry to have made you sad. On the hubby front copy your fav love scenes and suggest role palying? Works with my boyfriend. He loves playing Snape for me! I promise to update as soon as I can. I'm updating my The Enchanted Tower Room (posting it in queue) tonight, and will submit another chapter of Plight next. Okay? I'm really flattered by your kind words. Thank you for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I'm sorry to have made you sad. On the hubby front copy your fav love scenes and suggest role palying? Works with my boyfriend. He loves playing Snape for me! I promise to update as soon as I can. I'm updating my The Enchanted Tower Room (posting it in queue) tonight, and will submit another chapter of Plight next. Okay? I'm really flattered by your kind words. Thank you for the review.

0/10

faula_tara

ok dear thank you for your apology in reference to the pope but i am no longer a catholic and i think you handled everything with tact and respect but you are a dear for worrying about your readers what a sweetie you are as for the chapter say it aint so no annulment ans serveus had better stop being a huge git but thta is what i want yuo have spun a womderful tale so far and who am i but a devoted reader as for rita couldnt a house just fall on her or something i kno wwishful thinking on my partthank you for another wonderful chapterhugs and chocolate my dear

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are welcome. I didn't know how sensitive someone would be about their beloved Pope. Nope, no annulment yet. But Severus is sure making the decision a bit easier for her. I've thought about a house - and fly paper, roach hotels and  such... well see. Thank you for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are welcome. I didn't know how sensitive someone would be about their beloved Pope. Nope, no annulment yet. But Severus is sure making the decision a bit easier for her. I've thought about a house - and fly paper, roach hotels and  such... well see. Thank you for the review.

9/10

phoenix

So far so good on the Hogsmeade weekend. And Severus is really making a good effort to woo Hermione and prove that he can be a worthy mate. Hopefully she will come around soon enough.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, this weekend is goign well. He's trying, but missing one little important thing. You'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Seems Severus did not entirely ignore Narcissa's advice and isn't quite as stubborn as he lets on to be. He really should listen to her since she's good at dispensing advice, especially with regards how to treat a woman, being one herself. Nice encounter in the library.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Nope, he's not, but he is used to maintaining pretenses. I'm glad you liked the library encounter. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Good girl Hermione and good boy Severus. He finally found the right response to something she did.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, he did. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Hermione's another step closer to solving Severus' mystery, but he really shouldn't blame Blume. He should know how hard-headed Hermione is about school work.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, she's close to solving the mystery of who's who. No, he shouldn't, except that the partner doing the translation/shield should also be watchign to make sure his/her partner isn't straining and he wasn't. But yes, Severus should blame Hermione, only he's too worried to. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Well, his communication skills still haven't improved all that much, but their relationship seems to be going the right direction. Of course now she is going to be her usual busybody self regarding his great-grandfather, but that could be a good thing, if a little annoying to poor Severus.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, he is finally opening up and discussing things. Their relationship is going in the right direction. Hermione has a new 'family' member and considering she's lost hers (for now) she is reaching out to Talfryn. (He doesn't mind at all) and Severus will come to appreciate it. Thank you for reading,

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

, and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Nice to see that Severus is healed. And now he's learned all about wand lore like Harry and company did. Hopefully they can round up the last of the rogue DEs. I wonder if Hermione is beginning to rethink her decision to return to school - not that she knew what she was going to do anyway.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, all better now. Yes, and I think Ollivander was only as open about it as he was because he wanted to help Severus. Hummm, no, I think she wants to finish scholl, it's a major priority for her, one instilled in her by her parents. She'd want her NEWTs. Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

ladyluv

How sad this chapter was - the end of it really got to me. I wonder what she will do and what Severus will do - this is interesting.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I'm sorry. but I hope I can swing things back up... wroking on it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I'm sorry. but I hope I can swing things back up... wroking on it.

9/10

phoenix

Poor Severus. He would naturally have a curse that would interact with the snake bite. One day he might get his life to himself. And can't wait to see Maggie finally called on her behavior.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

some people never have a life totally theirs who have to take into account someone or others well being/feelings, and are richer for it.  Maggie, it will come. I hope you like how I do it. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

One wedding down out of three. So the question is, who will be next. And yay for finding a cure for Severus. Good job Hermione

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Did you like Neville's and Luna's Jewish-Irish Catholic wedding? and all the superstitions?  Hummm who will be next. You'll have to wait and see. Yep, Hermione saves him. Thank you for reading and for the review.

Response from phoenix (Reviewer)

It was interesting a little jarring. I tend not to think of religion when it comes to the wizarding world since there is so much history of persecution. I do know that cross-denominational weddings can be executed quite beautifully, just like this. The superstitions were perfect for the Lovegood/mum's family.

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