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The Plight-Trothed Bride

1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

2: Burgeoning Consequence

3: Persistent Enchantment

4: Now and Forever

5: Rough Beginnings

6: Relentless Persistence

7: Troublesome Misconceptions

8: Troubles and Traitors

9: Prisoner of Azkaban

10: The Ministry of Magic

11: The Second Visit

12: Announcements and Tidings

13: Question of Freedom

14: Troubled Decisions

15: Mistaken Intent

16: Friendly Intervention

17: The First Date

18: The Big Birthday Adventure

19: Duncansby Head

20: Squabbles and Shopping

21: Regulations and Requests

22: Return to Spinner’s End

23: Good Intents and Interventions

24: Tea, Books, and Answers

25: Her Knight Errant

26: Burgeoning Intimacies

27: The Snakes in the Grass

28: House of Rose and Thorns

29: Unwillingly Trapped

30: Facing Friends

31: On Heather Moor

32: Revived and Wedded

33: First Days

34: Enlightening Visitations

35: The Headmaster Returns

36: The Prince Family Tree

37: The Osgood Family Secret

38: Into the Flames

39: Interrogation and Inquiries

40: Trying Romantic On

41: Trying Assertive Romance

42: A Magical Pact

43: Potions and Consequences

44: Breaking the Curse

45: Phoenix Tears

46: Nesting Invasions

47: The End of Term

48: Débuted and Eluded

49: Christmas Eve

50: Intervention and Surprises

51: Christmas Surprises

52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

53: Boxing Day

54: A Magical New Year’s

55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

56: Comeuppance and Surprises

57: Achievements and Failures

58: The Colubridae Snake

59: Jealousy and Flowers

60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

61: Preparations and Projects

62: The Great Retrieval Quest

63: School Is Over

The Plight-Trothed Bride

beaweasley2

1,194 Reviews   |   1,194 Ratings, 0 Likes, 339 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 470,308 Words 71 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Harry Potter Original Character Rita Skeeter Neville Longbottom Kingsley Shacklebolt Kreacher Angelina Johnson Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Molly Weasley Percy Weasley Remus Lupin Teddy Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Narcissa Malfoy Draco Malfoy Travers (Death Eater) Augusta (Gran) Longbottom Albus Dumbledore Charlie Weasley Poppy Pomfrey Astoria Greengrass Dean Thomas Antonin Dolohov Mulciber (Death Eater) Mr. Ollivander Cho Chang Filius Flitwick Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?

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Chapters (63)

Chapter 1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

Chapter 2: Burgeoning Consequence

Chapter 3: Persistent Enchantment

Chapter 4: Now and Forever

Chapter 5: Rough Beginnings

Chapter 6: Relentless Persistence

Chapter 7: Troublesome Misconceptions

Chapter 8: Troubles and Traitors

Chapter 9: Prisoner of Azkaban

Chapter 10: The Ministry of Magic

Chapter 11: The Second Visit

Chapter 12: Announcements and Tidings

Chapter 13: Question of Freedom

Chapter 14: Troubled Decisions

Chapter 15: Mistaken Intent

Chapter 16: Friendly Intervention

Chapter 17: The First Date

Chapter 18: The Big Birthday Adventure

Chapter 19: Duncansby Head

Chapter 20: Squabbles and Shopping

Chapter 21: Regulations and Requests

Chapter 22: Return to Spinner’s End

Chapter 23: Good Intents and Interventions

Chapter 24: Tea, Books, and Answers

Chapter 25: Her Knight Errant

Chapter 26: Burgeoning Intimacies

Chapter 27: The Snakes in the Grass

Chapter 28: House of Rose and Thorns

Chapter 29: Unwillingly Trapped

Chapter 30: Facing Friends

Chapter 31: On Heather Moor

Chapter 32: Revived and Wedded

Chapter 33: First Days

Chapter 34: Enlightening Visitations

Chapter 35: The Headmaster Returns

Chapter 36: The Prince Family Tree

Chapter 37: The Osgood Family Secret

Chapter 38: Into the Flames

Chapter 39: Interrogation and Inquiries

Chapter 40: Trying Romantic On

Chapter 41: Trying Assertive Romance

Chapter 42: A Magical Pact

Chapter 43: Potions and Consequences

Chapter 44: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 45: Phoenix Tears

Chapter 46: Nesting Invasions

Chapter 47: The End of Term

Chapter 48: Débuted and Eluded

Chapter 49: Christmas Eve

Chapter 50: Intervention and Surprises

Chapter 51: Christmas Surprises

Chapter 52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

Chapter 53: Boxing Day

Chapter 54: A Magical New Year’s

Chapter 55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

Chapter 56: Comeuppance and Surprises

Chapter 57: Achievements and Failures

Chapter 58: The Colubridae Snake

Chapter 59: Jealousy and Flowers

Chapter 60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

Chapter 61: Preparations and Projects

Chapter 62: The Great Retrieval Quest

Chapter 63: School Is Over


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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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10/10

Maddie

Thank goodness Severus took Lucius's words to heart and he let up on the selfish sex. Great, now he has been arrested.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Severus would normally be like he was in the dreams (if he wasn't a pissed off git) just like Luna and Ginny keep assuring Hermione. Lucius just reminded him he's being a git and to knock it off.  And yes, a slight complication.Thank you for the review.

10/10

Dancingkatz

This is a fabulous fic. I'm looking very forward to the next chapters. You have a wonderful talent for writing erotica.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so very much. *blushes* I'm glad you are enjoying this.

Response from Dancingkatz (Reviewer)

There needs to be a word that means enjoying but raised by an exponential degree. That would describe how your descriptions of hte dreams and the actual sex make me feel as I read them. Also, I meant ot tell you that I love what you're doing with Lucius and Narcissa. I think these characterizations are wonderful. It is so nice to see them behaving as a long-married loving couple instead of two ice-beings who married for political or financial reasons only and who barely tolerate each other. And the friendly advice from Lucius to Severus... absolutely priceless!(I really should have started reading this much earlier in the evening but it was well worth staying up past my bedtime to finish reading)Ad I meant what I said about your talent.

10/10

ladyluv

Well he is definitely not like his dream but he does have the capacitiy to be. Oh crap, they have caught him - what happens next... good chapter.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

No he isn't like he is in the dreams, he's acting exactly as my boyfriend said he'd act/and as I think canon Snape would react.  Considering the love he carried for Lily all those years, Sev has the capacity to love very deeply.Yes, he's been caught... Jail and the trial.Thank you for the reveiw.

10/10

baseballbabe122

Damn Ron.  Rawr.  I like that Severus is coming around... even if it isn't because of purely good intentions, but then he wouldn't be Snape, would he?  :) Keep it coming.  You've got something good going here.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Ron kind of got caught grumbling in front of the wrong person - it's Rita who was spilling the beans and Ron was asked to confirm. He knew better than to lie to Darthmyer!Yes, Severus is just beginning to come to terms with this Bonding. and now... he's caught and in jail. Poor guy. Dead, not dead, sexy dreams, Bonded - jailed.I'll send you his reaction and Hermione's in the next chapter asap    Thank you very much for the reveiw.

9/10

la Chatelaine

I never thought I would ever say this, but I guess in the Potter Multiverse anything really is possible:  Thank goodness for Lucius Malfoy, the Voice of Experience and Reason.  Finally, a chink, a chip in the wall!  Severus is finally (eventually true but nevertheless finally) going to ... well, what?  That's the question.  Since when has olde Rito Mosquito been an auror?  Do the wizarding police and press have a better working relationship than press and police in the muggle world? 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Isn't that half the fun? I hope I didn't go too far off the known Potterverse? But this prompt is so fun to play with.I simply wanted Severus to have a friend on his side, someone who he could talk to - and talk some sense and give it to him straight. Hermione has a clan - he needed someone.Yes, Sev was finally starting to realize he'd been a jerk and *bang* he lands in jail. Poor guy.In regards to Rita, the Aurors probably made some kind of deal, exclusive scoop and possibly (?) for her imformation. She's still a reporter and NOT and Auror. she's raising trouble, digging for juicy news and gossip.

10/10

rlc

Nice chapter.  It does seem like Severus is starting to come around.  Malfoy must be a good influence. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, Severus was starting to come around. I have Lucius as a good friend and close enough to say what he thinks, even the blunt truth. I have Lucius as he would be to those of influence, the Ministry, of power and close friends. I wanted to make him dimensional - outside the way we see him in the books, arrogrant, cold, you know. So as a friend, yes he is Severus' influence. Hermione has Gin, Harry, Luna, Nev, George, etc... I wanted Sev to have someone... He's gonna need it.

9/10

faula_tara

well ron is really gonna get it i cant wait to see what happens next wondeful story lemons and a plotkeep up the good work thank you 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you - yes loads of lemons, some sweet - some sour but still yellow! Tryin' to have a plot - since it didn't start out that way! Teehehe

9/10

faula_tara

well snape well just have to wait for a shag o well but this doesnt bode well for hermione and i know rita is comming back she got the info she wanted

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, Severus get's shagged in the next ... oops. Hermione will explode - no, not the messy kind!Rita is going to write a book a best seller even if she's got to fabricate a few facts!Harry is gonna surprise you - he's been busy!Kingsley rocks!Poor Seveie thinks he's gonna rot in Azkaban...

9/10

faula_tara

i loved this chapter so it wasnt all lemons but i would have rather seen rita in a jar again lmao you are doing wonderfully with this story

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much

9/10

faula_tara

ok there is the serveu i was expecting  i mean i kind of feel bad for hermione but she asked for it by doing a charm she didnt know bout

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep - the real man - the real package and he's pissed. Hermione didn't know what she was getting into and is now simply trying to make it work out. But things will work out - eventually.

9/10

faula_tara

wow and i thougth hed be hexing her 6 ways to sunday o well shows what i know lol thank you for another wondeful chapter

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Nope, he isn’t suddenly Mr. Romantic, but he’s definitely curtailing in the hexes! Thank you for the review.

9/10

faula_tara

well lets see he has let the dreams plauge him longer than i thought he would we will see how the actually meeting goes tho somehting has got to happen lol nothing can go this smoothley but i am enjoying the story

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. He may have the entire Malfoy library at his disposal, but he hasn't found the right book - yet! Or has and discounted it as not probable. ?

9/10

faula_tara

ok well serveus will be in for a shock when he finds out what hermione did oops all is fair in love and war and how did they save serveus just curious 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, he is. And yep, all is fair in love and war – might as well go for fire! I didn’t go into how the Malfoys saved him yet… There will be a LM - HG moment (not sex - get your mind out of there!) and he'll tell her.

9/10

faula_tara

very cool and lemons yto start with wow i am going on to the next chapter yjank you for another story i can get lost in

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are most welcome! Thank you for the reveiw.

10/10

blue artemis

Ron deserves whatever he gets, and I like that Lucius is telling Severus to behave. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Ron is going to have a rough time, besides lose the girl. Yes, I'm having fun with Lucius. I wanted to show a side of him we don't get in the books - Lucius with a friend, the man that people who are friends or are influencial see.

10/10

Katie616

Oooh, Hermione is going to be ma-aad when she finds out what Ron did. . . hee hee hee!I'm glad Severus is getting more used to her, and that he and Hermione are getting to know each other a little more.Can't wait for the next chapter!~Katie

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Oh you better believe it!!He is somewhat becoming accepting to the fact that they were Bonded. He does know what it means - he just doesn't like it - being trapped in this without it being his decision.I'll be posting again asap.

9/10

kittylefish

well, i'm glad you had snape finally soften a bit - i was getting mighty tired of his attitude.  i know he's angry, but hermione is a human being, not an emotional punching bag/useful sexual device.  i guess i'm not that big a fan of angry, nonreciprocal sex, so i'm glad that aspect seemed to be improving.  before he was arrested, anyway!  i'm sure that will do wonders for his disposition.  i did enjoy your making lucius the voice of reason, giving him relationship advice.  i especially enjoyed that he took the advice.  and am looking forward to hermione swatting ron on the nose with the rolled up newspaper.  ; )

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, Severus is softening up a bit... accepting what it is. It's not that he doesn't know what the Bonding means - he just hated being trapped and not in control. Yes, he's - well, oops, there is the slight problem of being arrested... his disposition is basically going to ... guess! \/Oh, Hermione is ging to be one pissed off witch! You'll see...Lucius is ging to be back - I've plans for him!Thank you for the reveiw.

10/10

wsanders

I almost don't feel bad about Snape there in the end. It's sad that he's just using Hermione, so I certainly look forward to seeing how you'll develop his character. Your Hermione is not the typical one we read in fandom, and that makes for an intriguing read. Her guilt in performing the charm and her youth has her quite overwhelmed with the situation, and I look forward to seeing her develop beyond that state.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Snape is going to be dealing with a lot and will see just how strong and wiling Hermione is in trying to make this work - but he's really testing her. No, this Hermione is only 18 or so, in her first real relationship and she's Bonded to the man - not someone her age but a man - with a past and walls and layers and stubborn... her guilt and her innocence as well as her youth does have her feeling a bit overwhelmed.  She will surprise him and hopefully not too late...

0/10

Mazzy

oh wow. How's Sev gonna get out of this one? Maybe it's his bad karma for being such a shite to Hermione :) I mean, can't the man managed to give her a little satisfaction in the process? Would it really kill him to be pleasant, at least during sex?? I guess I hope his being caught isn't karma after all or they'd undoubtedly never see each other again - as Sev would surely rot in Azkaban LOL

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Oh, wel, this is for twenty years of bad Karma then... but don't count Hermione out - she is about to step into her element. A campaigne!  Nope - she'll see him in jail Tee hehehe you'll see.

10/10

pookah

I was hoping Ron would tell Hermione (or even Owl Snape) that it was not safe for him (Snape) to come to the Burrow, as Aurors would be watching.  Ron was feeling guilty, after all.  Oh dear.  I can't blame Snape or Hermione  for being upset or acting poorly.   After all,  it is a shock to both of them and they haven't had much time to asimilate the idea.  Especially Snape, who thought he was having some great dreams, and then pow!  he's bonded.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Pookah, Oh, so true. You so get it!

Ron didn’t send an owl cuz he wouldn’t know where to send it and Pig might have taken all night!

Thank you for the review.

9/10

CharmedForce

I like that something Lucius said has sunk in to Severus, and he went back to return the favor to Hermione. That will help him in the long run if they can just learn to get along. And stupid Ron always fucks things up.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, actually Severus is just coming to terms and realizing that he's being a jerk. Lucius is a true friend to him, and pointed out what Severus didn't want to hear.Ron, silly boy!

10/10

MollysSister

You write the best smut mystery author! Angry sex, grudge sex it does not matter either way! A naked Severus makes readers happy. Of course as soon as Hermione and Snape reach a tenative truce it gets blown all to hell. Ron & Rita are in big trouble bubble. Cannot wait for the next chapter!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Wow, thank you! Yes, I do like a naked Severus. and Yes, just as he is starting to accept things and make an effort - Ron and Rita - well, more Rita than Ron really, messes things up!Thank you for the reveiw. I'll try to post again asap

10/10

sinbad

What a place to stop!  An evil cliffie to be sure.  Let's hope things will improve for them and Severus gets cleared.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Would I have it any other way? Sorry abou the clffie - I'll try to post the next part asap

0/10

sunny33

Lucius giving Severus relationship advice was priceless!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

What are good friends for? Besides he is happily married, and Sev is staying in hs home since his recovery. But yes, relationship advice from Lucius I thought would be cute.

10/10

savine_snape

Oh Bugger... Ok I don't like the way that Severus is taking and not really giving anything to Hermione until that is he gets relationship advice from Lucius ?!?. However, I feel sorry for him getting caught in a moment of inattention by three thrice blasted aurors... I hope Hermione makes ronikins life hell... after all he practically dropped the rest of his family in the royal doodoo.
Looking forward to an update on Severus' plight and how this will affect both Hermione and Severus if they can't do the horizontal tango ~smirk~
SS/HG forever Sav x

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yea, well, he’s still a bit off at being trapped by Hermione, so he’s still being a selfish git. However, Lucius did knock some sense into his thick head.  Hermione’s reaction is actually borrowed from canon… and comes up in the next chapter. The rest of the family isn’t in any trouble. Just gotta get my next chapter betaed and I’ll post it. Thank you for the reveiw.

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