interesting begining.  i look forward to more.  thanks

Oh so this is the other POV - okay. Cool. Nice way to do this. I'm glad Ginny is helping and that Harry is really wanting to help Snape. I shoudl have guessed that Ron is such a selfish git. Geeze.Nevertheless, It's funny that Hermione would go to such extremes though. Still, this is really funny at times. Well done.

Oh this is really funny. I like how you have Snape in this - especailly the contemplation that he goes through. But I LMAO when he heard Hermione yell at Harry!

Ooooooh this is exciting! I can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up. He can't say that they're just doing it out of pity now that he can hear them and they don't know it.

Ron was a bastard though, wasn't he?

huzzah!!  I love you for your update and that satisfied look you get when it gets posted and we give reviews--  heehee  what you thought I wasn't looking. . .  

oooh my!  Things are moving along quickly now.  I can't wait to hear Snape's take on what just happened.  I'd love to know what he thinks of this trio and how they have taken to helping him.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

Ooh! So they're getting closer... can't wait to see what happens when/if Sev wakes up. And Hermione... hmmm.. wonder if Sev will have some never-before-expressed feelings for the 'insufferable know-it-all' :)

Ooo, can't wait to see how he reacts to that little bit of info.  Great job.

How about a sequel? 

Fascinating start, and the juxtaposition of Severus's thought processes with Hermione's interjection is well placed. I look forward to the further unravelling of the plot

what a fantastic beginning!  i loved how you immersed us in snape's slippery mental world.  i was mesmerized, and am looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

Hey there.You really made me laugh soooo loud that I possibly scared my cat to lose one of her nine lives.. LOL The last line made me vitalize the whole scene and it's bloody hilarious in a fun and good way. You have a wicked humour. Just keep going darling!   I enjoyed the totally paranoid thoughts of Severus Snape. It is only what you can expect of a spy through several years. Good work.Hugs, Carmille 

What in the world? LOL is this some kind of african ritualistic dance? hahaha

Poor Snape!  Or maybe lucky Snape who gets to see HG nekkid.  Your last line is hilarious!  I look forward to reading more.

Seems very interesting so far.  I like Severus's thought patterns and the way they seem so real.  Great job!

What a way to wake up.  And here I was swimming along peacefully in the mind of Severus Snape, getting a feel for his state of mind and bam! the repremanding voice of Hermione Granger forces it way inside.  Very interesting start.  I look forward to seeing where this is going.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

Talk about a fabulous last line! I couldn't control a laugh/snort from escaping when I read that. Keep up the lovely work!

Hee! What a fabulous last line!Intriguing start to a promising story too.

*growls in frustration* Must have more! Soon!

Again, comedy of the highest order. Beautiful!

This is freaking AMAZING! Very often, I find myself skimming stories, but I was acturally reading this one. I like the vivid imagery. You word paint well. Besides which, that subversion from the depths of Snape's unconscious mind and this sort of creepy, ancient ritual to Hermione screaming at Harry that it's all in the hips...High comedy. Worthy of Joss Whedon.

please update. this is a great story!

I am loving "Severus" arguing with "Snape", it is fun. Really Harry, hermione did tell you to remember the spells.

Better Hermione realise what a prat Ron is now, than after they marry and have kids. What will Severus think of "goodnight my love"?

A very good beginning, a pity it was never finished.