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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Magical Betrothal
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Magical Betrothal

1: Chapter 1: Lunacy

2: Chapter 2: Truth and Consequences

3: Chapter 3: Reaping What You Sow

4: Chapter 4: Reactions

5: Chapter 5: Dealing With Fate

6: Chapter 6: First Day of Many

7: Chapter 7: Coming to a Realization

8: Chapter 8: Time Marches On

9: Chapter 9: Making Adjustments

10: Chapter 10: Accepting The Situation

11: Chapter 11: Making Progress.

12: Chapter 12: Discovery

13: Chapter 13: Two Steps Back

14: Chapter 14: Admissions

15: Chapter 15: Power of Love, Part One

16: Chapter 16: Power of Love, Part 2

17: Epilogue

Magical Betrothal

cocoachristy

634 Reviews   |   634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )

Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 64,690 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Oliver Wood Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Lunacy

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Truth and Consequences

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Reaping What You Sow

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Reactions

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dealing With Fate

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: First Day of Many

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Coming to a Realization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Time Marches On

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Making Adjustments

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Accepting The Situation

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Making Progress.

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Discovery

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Two Steps Back

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Admissions

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Power of Love, Part One

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Power of Love, Part 2

Chapter 17: Epilogue


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10/10

faula_tara

yeah for serveus and lamo at cissy she got hers maddy being engaged and all and good fot luna i am happy there seems to be soma happily ever afters commingyeahwomderful chapter

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, she did, didn't she? Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

Sampdoria

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!!! You have done a marvellous job with this chapter, I am totally impressed (and would have paid good money for being able to see the faces of Narcissa and Pancy when Madelaine showed up with her fiancé). Severus acted perfectly when taking the Malfoys to task:-))

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you so much! I am so happy you enjoyed it and my Severus!

10/10

amsev

Well, I'm delighted that Ron has finally sorted out what he's feeling.  I'm also glad that Severus stood up for Hermione...  I'm having a brainphart:  does she know they're staying together yet?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

! Yep, it was time for Ron! No, Severus and Hermione haven't discussed the future...

0/10

Mint Stick

It's a good thing Ron has older brothers to set him straight! Severus defending the Malfoys to Hermione made me bristle, I must admit. Yes, he had a point, but so did Hermione - and he really, really shouldn't have expected her to just get over it and be all happy about meeting them socially again. I trust that he can understand her a bit better now - and I do hope Narcissa stops meddling (and that Draco stops being an idiot).I'm glad things seem to be working out for the best for all the couples involved, anyway!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, good old George!Well, I don't know that he was defending as much as trying to explain that there are two sides to everything. He does understand things better now.

9/10

Marti

“I have no problem with that. I’ve slapped one in the face before.”That is the BEST line in fanfiction I've read in the last six months!!  YES!!!  Great story, I look for it whenever I log into the Poetess.Be well,

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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much,

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

! You've made my day! I am so happy you've enjoyed my story!

10/10

ladyluv

The Malfoys are hard to stop - are they not? No must be spelled out completely to them. I cannot believe that they had a second chance and were still trying to fix up Severus even though he is married. I hope the get to see Hermione for who she really is and stop calling her a Mudblood.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, don't you just love the Malfoys? Not only trying to fix him up, but actually thinking they were doing him a favor!  He set them straight really fast though!

10/10

June W

well, I must say that I was ready to give Ron the heave-ho so that Luna could get a loving husband, but you turned him around, thanks to George.  and without THWACKING Ron on the head!  the Malfoys - I'm glad Severus told them off.  Madeleine and William were a big surprise, and it let Hermione have a nice chat with Maddy, perhaps start a friendship - who knows.  the Wolfsbane project seems like a nice way for S&H to spend time together plus challenge Hermione professionally.  and Cho and Harry are off to a good start.  all good stuff!  (still, I wouldn't have minded if Ron had gotten whacked....)  now, will Cho and Harry use the betrothal charm too?  mnuahaha!!  thanks for the new chapter.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks June! Ron just needed a little reassurance, he'd been hurt too, after all! ;-) Yep, the Malfoys needed to realize where Severus' loyalities lay. No, Harry and Cho won't do it! :D

10/10

hgelman

Such a sweet story!  I am such a sucker for a happy ending.  I love when I am given one - thanks (in advance)!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much! Me too, I gotta have happy!

10/10

barbied011

Only one more chapter to go?  :(  This is one of the few stories I don't ever want to end.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you, barbie! You've made my day saying that!

0/10

sunny33

Aww Ron and Luna are going to be ok.  I loved the last bit of playfulness between Lucius and Narcissa, gives their characters a bit more depth

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks sunny! Yep, they will! Right, one of these days, I may write a L/N fic...

9/10

JoKK2

Well I am very happy that Ron seems to be getting his head on the right way round.  It took him long enough!  Delightful chapter as always.  While I of course like your take on the main characters in this story, I am also enjoying your take on the Malfoys.  The shock they display at Severus' declarations is spot on.  They really could not see him with Hermione by choice.  Delightful.  Although I will be sorry to see it end, I look forward to the last chapter.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, he got the closure he needed so that he is able to move forward. It did take him long enough! Glad you're enjoying my Malfoys! I am always saddened to end a fic, but I already have another one started--in my head! Wanted to finish this one first before starting another.

10/10

irishredlass

Narcissa ought to be shot!  I am so glad that Madeline appears to be a decent character.  Now can we shoot Draco?  Well done.  Irish

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! Don't you just love Cissy? ;-) Glad you enjoyed!

10/10

snitchette

Thank God or wathever is up here for giving Ron a bit of sensitivity. He really needed it. And I'm glad Severus finally admitted something. I'm also sad it's almost finished.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Poor Ron, he's really gotten a bad rap during this fic, but he was hurt badly too. All in one day he lost the love of his life (even though she was not his 'soul mate', Ron truly loved Hermione and wanted to marry her) and was forced to marry someone he had no romantic feelings for. I would be a bit bitter too! ;-)Yep, he admitted it! Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

kittylefish

it's always a great pleasure when i see there is an update to your story.  i loved that talking to that george gave to ron, and his efforts to make things right with luna.  i was a little ticked off at severus for not having a little more compassion towards hermione - okay, maybe he can make excuses for his friends, but he should have understood why she might not want to go back to the scene of the crime - but after the nightmare, he absolved himself, and at least he set those malfoys straight. well, it's been fun, and i look forward to you tying up all sorts of loose ends in the next chapter.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much! That's always nice to hear! Ron needed some courage to face his wife, and George gave it to him. I think it was more of an explanation than making excuses, and letting her see that there's two sides to every story.  Glad you enjoyed!

9/10

CharmedForce

I'm so glad that Severus realized how poorly the Malfoys were treating Hermione, and finally stood up for her. That would always have been a problem between them. Ron deserves a huge kick in the pants, and it looks like George was only too happy to oblige.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yes, I agree. And, it made a statement to the Malfoys as well!LOL! He did need some courage...

10/10

sshg316

"What was her name? Tulip?"BWAHAHAHAHA!  I'm still giggling over that one as I type.  That is absolutely brilliant!  *giggles madly* ... *wipes tears of mirth*What an excellent chapter!  Everyone is now on the right track, thankfully.  Good for Luna for making Ron work to earn back her affection.  She offered her love freely, and he threw it back at her.  It makes sense that she would be more guarded now.  Narcissa and Lucius crack me up -- such Slytherins they are!  And I'm glad that, despite her reservations, Hermione braved entering the snake pit yet again. I'm even more glad to see Severus' protective side.  As always, I look forward to more!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much! You're review is making me smile! :DSo glad you liked it! Yep, Luna is a bit more leary this time, but she loves him, so it won't take him too long! ;-)Don't you just love the Malfoys! More up soon!

10/10

mia madwyn

Aw... sweet endings on the way! And Sev stood up for her, yay!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Yep, the Malfoys know exactly where he stands now!

0/10

Saracen77

I'm glad they are finally making the best of the situations...  I thought Ron might need a smack in the head to get the idea, but George seems to have done the trick!Can't wait to see who you are!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, Ron is always the last, eh? Do you have any thoughts as to who I am? Just curious.

0/10

MollysSister

You had me laughing out loud with this line "What was her name? Tulip?”

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

HA HA HA! Thanks! Glad we could share a laugh!

10/10

blue artemis

I'm glad Severus finally lost his temper.  And it appears the Malfoys have to learn that bloodlines aren't everything.  I wish Hermione had punched Draco, though. 

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! LOL! Yep, Draco always seems to deserve a punch! ;-)

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Sorry I missed reviewing this one. Good chapter. :)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much! :D

0/10

Tzentel

I'm enjoying your story :D  I'm hoping you'll post again soon so I can find out about Harry & Cho.  :D

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks so much! I am shooting to have the second part complete and to my beta by this weekend!

9/10

phoenix

Thanks for some sweetness. Looks like three of the four couples are coming to terms.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you! Yep...

9/10

phoenix

Oh, my! So much going on here. Hermione is still learning how to have a good relationship with Severus and poor Harry with Cho. I hope she's alright. And Ron, at least he's gotten some of it through his thick head, but is it enough?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Right, and Luna has been terribly hurt.

9/10

beaweasley2

Whoot to Cho! Way to go! She practically showed him!Poor, gin - Oliver is just a typicl male ego driven set of balls. Therapy - they need therapy!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Uh huh! She did show him!Well... I thought that Oliver and Ginny came to a pretty reasonable compromise. ;-)

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