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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

sinbad

I liked the news clippings, and definatly think Rita got what was due to her.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

i agree... that skag! LOL

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

i agree... that skag! LOL

0/10

debjunk

This story is spellbinding.  Lol  I am eager to see Snape's resurrection, but I'm scared too!  I think that when Ron finds out what she's done, it will be hard for him to accept it.  But of course, he probably wants to leave her anyway.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

You'll have lots to read about with Ron. Don't worry. Snape coming back is a good thing. hahaha

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

You'll have lots to read about with Ron. Don't worry. Snape coming back is a good thing. hahaha

10/10

cocoachristy

Oh Awesome! I loved it! I am taking Jake to see the Mummy tomorrow, we both love the movies!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

cool. :) I'm watching the first one right now. How was it??

Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)

For the most part, I really liked it. The main complain is that the woman who played Evie and Brenden Frazier didn't really have any chemestry together. But other than that? Awesome!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

cool. :) I'm watching the first one right now. How was it??

Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)

For the most part, I really liked it. The main complain is that the woman who played Evie and Brenden Frazier didn't really have any chemestry together. But other than that? Awesome!

0/10

WriterMerrin

Ha!  That put a grin on my face.  Very cleverly done, and I like the way all of the plot points are twisting.  I'm even more interested to see how it looks in narrative form now that some time has passed, especially if there are problems in the Snape abode.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :) I shall cover the things we've missed. ~grin~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :) I shall cover the things we've missed. ~grin~

10/10

sherrithewriter

As a former newspaper editor, I really enjoyed your take on all the news that fits. It was a great way to catch up the story and move it along while casting some really good plot lines that could be used in the story in the future. Great job, as always, and I appreciate it!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Oh, awesome. :) Thank you for letting me know. Bwahahaha. I had fun with it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Oh, awesome. :) Thank you for letting me know. Bwahahaha. I had fun with it.

10/10

sherrithewriter

As a former newspaper editor, I really enjoyed your take on all the news that fits. It was a great way to catch up the story and move it along while casting some really good plot lines that could be used in the story in the future. Great job, as always, and I appreciate it!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool! Thank you so much. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool! Thank you so much. :)

10/10

teshara

Ron is doing a big bad thing...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, he certainly is. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, he certainly is. :)

10/10

teshara

Your consistency with character personalities is awesome. I have never seen a fic where Lucius is single because Cissy has left him and I think it's a really neat way to bring Lucius from evil 2nd tier character to reformed first tier.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I shall remain silent on the matter for now. I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I shall remain silent on the matter for now. I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.

10/10

blue artemis

I loved that chapter, especially the pustules and Luna's little additions.  

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee. Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee. Thanks!

10/10

teshara

I like the way you have Hermione and lucius interacting with each other. She knows what she has to do and he wants to help his friend, but they clearly dislike each other.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely. :)

0/10

timestep

See, and I just thought 69 was the year you were born.  LOL.Nice articles!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Nope. That was a few years before me. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Nope. That was a few years before me. :)

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Too cute. Thanks for the update and good for you giving Rita the boot.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! Rita needed a good kick to her arse. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! Rita needed a good kick to her arse. :)

0/10

Grace52373

Very clever, and amusing chapter! I had to stop myself from laughing aloud, since I am at work though! I am looking forward to the next one, and I am hoping that Weasley leaving his wife, won't cause trouble for the Snapes!Grace

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Thanks for reading! :) More about the Weasleys in the next

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Thanks for reading! :) More about the Weasleys in the next

0/10

faula_tara

lmao how enjoyable quite humerous and enlightening thnak you for another wonderful chapter and welll worth the wait love you ending comments by the way hugs and chocolate

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :)

0/10

CharmedForce

I enjoyed reading the newspaper articles. They were very fun!And my grandmother was born on August 13th as well!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool! Such a good day then. hehe

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool! Such a good day then. hehe

10/10

hgelman

I love the format the chapter was presented in - what a great way to move a story forward!  I also appreciated the notes at the end.  I had smirked at the Friday the 13th.  I had always wondered about the '69' - so now we all know you are not a naughty wench - just a sentimental one.  Excellent chapter - excellent story!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Bwahahaha! Thank you

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Bwahahaha! Thank you

10/10

mikimoto

I am so glad to see that Hermione has not lost her touch when it comes to hexing documents.  Let's just hope those pustules last for years and years.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm thinking they will. bwaahahhaa

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm thinking they will. bwaahahhaa

10/10

livvy6

I do enjoy reading newspaper snippets as a way to move the plot along. It is a clever way of doing it without it seeming rushed. Still am very curious as to how Severus and Hermione are working out their relationship and where it's going.Livvy

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool Thanks! I'll have more ss/hg stuff soon

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool Thanks! I'll have more ss/hg stuff soon

0/10

septentrion

It's a very good idea to use newspapers to move the plot forward. I enjoyed this very much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks!

10/10

Muggline

The newspaper articles are a great idea! I would not want to read a story entirely based on these, but as an intermediate chapter, it adds a nice touch! And I love the bit about Rita Skeeter being fired!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

She deserved it! She'll be back though. That biatch!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

She deserved it! She'll be back though. That biatch!

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the great update. I liked how the articles described the progress of your story, very cleverly done!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

10/10

Maddie

The "news" reports were quite varied and entertaining.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~grin~ Thanks

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~grin~ Thanks

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

This was a fun chapter. It worked really well in moving things along. I love how Rita published the letter anyway and crossed out his request not to. And LMAO @ Hermione's spell. I'm so glad to see Rita get fired in a story!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. Hermione's not lost her touch yet. hehe Bad little Rita. YOu'd think she'd stop while she's ahead.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. Hermione's not lost her touch yet. hehe Bad little Rita. YOu'd think she'd stop while she's ahead.

10/10

beaweasley2

 Oh, my, gods ! I totally loved this.  I think the articles were hilarious!  I do think that Rita is in a bit of trouble not hat I min d that too much! Silly beetle, gets into mischief! Priceless!Really good chapter! I was thrilled to see an update!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool, doll. Thanks for reading. :) Glad you liked

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Are you kidding I LOVE this story!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool, doll. Thanks for reading. :) Glad you liked

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Are you kidding I LOVE this story!!!

10/10

aura

Loved all the articles!  Very cute and funny.  Glad Skeeter got what's coming to her, and that Lucius is pleasantly sedated.  Eager to see what's been going on behind the scenes.  Can't wait to find out more about Draco...and if the Dearborn woman (or the Death Eater father of her child) have anything at all to do with the rest of the story. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Dearborn will play a minor role in a couple of things, but nothing major. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Dearborn will play a minor role in a couple of things, but nothing major. :)

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