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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

amsev

Why do I get this sneaky suspicion that Lucius is at the bottom of everything, from Ron locating a new chere amie to Severus possibly being a new dark lord.  Wonderful new chapter!  As always, I look forward to reading more!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I am smiling here :)

10/10

Lkmaide

I'm beginning to HATE cliffies!!!  But you rock my world when you update.  Nice going on this.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! HOpe you like the next

10/10

Shadow

Well, at least Harry wasn't anoited with the protective ointment. now he can hurt, maim or otherwise disembowel Lucius where Hermione or Severus couldn't!I cant wait to find out why he went around the more tricky way of brining Severus back. He always seems to have a motive for everything he does.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Exactly. More with Harry soon!

10/10

Maddie

Is this Lucius's way of getting back at everyone who has pissed him off. He takes Hermione's virginity when unnecessary, which deprives Severus of having a virgin bride, tricks Hermione into the binding by erasing her memories, lied about his wife leaving him, pretended to be reformed socially, . . . Now Severus is indebted to him for preserving his body and Hermione is indebted to him for assisting in the ritual. However, Lucius appears to be an evil bastard with his own agenda. I am dying to see what happens next.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Have you been peeking into my notes? :)

0/10

septentrion

Lucius has a certain talent for creating enemies, even in his family. If only Draco hadn't been thwarted time and time again in his attempts to see Harry...


Hermione's revelation about her marriage should be interesting, especially since I'm not sure now that Ron has cheated on her.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep.More to come on all this

10/10

ylang_two

To quote Han Solo, I've got a bad feeling about what the tome/book said.  Why does it make me think that maybe the newly-resurrected Snape is perhaps hosting the soul of the Dork Lord??

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Ooh, good theory. No Voldemort though. :)

0/10

KiraAlexia

Oh a very interesting chapter.  I like how Severus is torn between all the different emotions.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you

10/10

zyra

It'd better be soon!!!Okay, pressure aside... (hehe) I have to say this story is getting more and more interesting. At some point I thought I could figure out what actually happened, and then something else is revealed and I'm left with no idea.


So many questions! I am so intrigued to read more...


Sneaky Lucius... he knew Severus would want to strangle him knowing what he did to Hermione. Protective anointment, indeed... >_> Blast him!


The tome and those pictures of Ron... somehow I'm beginning to think that it was Lucius doing after all. I may need to re-read this one again. Who knows I might find some clue in between the lines...


In the meantime, just update quick... I'm nearly bursting with questions here!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. It's all getting pieced together, isn't it? :)

0/10

nightshift

I don't think Harry will get the chance. Snape is going to kill him first.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Snape would definitely like to

8/10

JoKK2

Oh and here I was starting to like and trust Lucius and now it seems like he is bad and even worse that before Voldemort kicked the bucket.  Your story is getting better and better.  I can't wait for more.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's so sly, isn't he? :)

10/10

KingPig

Evil, evil cliffie!!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

 :) :)

9/10

harrypotterwanter

I wonder why Lucius wanted to have sex with Hermione. To get back at Severus, or to get back at Hermione? It seems like nothing was really wrong with his marriage, just that he wanted Narcissa out of the way while he wooed Hermione into bringing Severus back to life. I look forward to hearing Draco's explanation. Hopefully nobody gets upset at Severus for his part in the plan, since he really couldn't do anything about it. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I will bring that up (the lucius having sex with her). Thanks for reading! hOpe you like what i have next

10/10

sinbad

Some how I think Severus is going to rearrange Lucius's face....maybe a few other parts as well.  You pulled the wool over my eyes, I thought he was a good guy!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He'd sure like to. :)

10/10

cocoachristy

Hmm... I would have loved to have  been a fly on the wall when Severus confronted Lucius. Sev's comments to Hermione lead me to believe that there is more going on than just that book! We know that Lucius is up to something because of what he's already done to her. Draco knows something too. I wonder what Harry will do with the info!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

so much to say....

Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)

So little time? ;D

10/10

ladyluv

Interesting chapter- I am dying to know what Severus and Lucius talked about. I also think that Lucius was scheming more than just giving Severus's life back when he did this but to what I do not know yet - cannot wait to read more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

We'll see more about that in the next one! HOpe you like

9/10

velvetkiss

I love this story and look forward for the next chapter.....but I'm a little confused on a small detail.  “Please, come to bed. I’ll get you something to drink and eat.”“I do not thirst, nor do I hunger.”then later.....After many moments had passed, Hermione said, “I had Bozzy bring us a tray of lunch. Are you hungry?”“I am,” he replied, moving off of her to lie on his back.I'm just a little confused on whether he gets hungry or not.  Probably not relivant to the story. Sorry to nitpick.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He was too distraught/weak to eat when she first asked. Later, he worked up an appetite / was in better frame of mind and was hungry. It's just the way he worded it.

10/10

blue artemis

I'm glad that Severus is angry on Hermione's behalf. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely.

10/10

mia madwyn

Okay, so the book isn't causing all these bad things to happen--it's Lucius doing it all and making it look like the book did it?


What a tangled mess, but I'm so glad Severus is in looooove.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Your questions will be answered soon! :) Hope you like it

10/10

hgelman

Interesting chap - poor Hermione - she has really been played and she (and we) doesn't know to what extent yet.  I look forward to the next chap - I can't wait to see what you write about Draco.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. hope you like

10/10

BrenaMarie

Wow, I am totally loving all the history and flashbacks that are happening here.  I'm just anxious to find out how Hermione and Severus work things out.  I'm totally impatient!  But this was really, really good.  Thanks for the update.  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks so much for reading! :) I've started on the next one, but this week is hectic for me. However, I'll have it done by the weekend. :) xoxooxox

10/10

pyjamapants

Oh, I love that way that you've woven this alternate storyline back into canon. Brilliant!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. It's so much fun.

10/10

Zigflorian

Very cool, great fic!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! More up soon

9/10

sinbad

I found it a bit confusing at first to be honest, but I still enjoyed it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Okay, which part? Maybe I can explain something better for you.

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I think it was the transition from ch 23 to 24.  If that makes any sense.  Don't feel bad however as I have been running around all day and am tired.  That makes a difference too.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Ah, the fact that she was in the past. :) I thought putting the date in italics would do the trick. Sorry about that. :)

0/10

strickland5000

Whoah!!! That was very intense! Phew! I can breathe again. Oh I hope that she's able to get back at Lucius a little for the deception. And I hope that although he mislead Hermione he did have good intentions. But if he didn't, Severus will surely make him pay! Can't wait for an update. Wonderful story!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! I'll have more up for you soon. Hope you like it and maybe some answers.

10/10

BrenaMarie

OmG. She's gonna remember! Woo-Hoo. I almost started to cry during the dream sequence though. How much he's hurting and she just wants to play 20 questions. I can't wait for the next chapter! Much Love ~ Brena

Response from BrenaMarie (Reviewer)

Sorry about the double review here... I've been reviewing stories from my cell phone so I don't forget and I guess there was a glitch while the review was posting and it posted twice. Whoops.

Response from BrenaMarie (Reviewer)

Sorry about the double review here... I've been reviewing stories from my cell phone so I don't forget and I guess there was a glitch while the review was posting and it posted twice. Whoops.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Don't worry about the double review! That's easily fixed. :) I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)

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