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Phantom of Hogwarts
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*NOW COMPLETE* How in the world does Hogwarts come to be doing a performance of The Phantom of the Opera? And just why is Snape so pissed about it?
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I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY
Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts
I'm glad Hermione was able to get Ginny to keep her secret quiet. It would be quite troublesome indeed if Ginny told someone. And that scene in the hall between Sev and Hermione was delicious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I like to think that it shows Ginny as a true friend, one who really cares about her friend's well-being more than what society dictates. Glad you enjoyed the final scene in the corridor. LOL Snape did too. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Ohhh. I wasn't expecting Ginny to confront Hermione so soon. Damn, that girl's brilliant. I just wonder if Hermione will be able to slither out of this.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Hmm, well, Ginny's not known to be the retiring type, eh? Something of a calamity... Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I just love how sweet you have Hermione and Severus together. They really are incredible.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Awww, thank you! I'm sickeningly sweet and hopelessly romantic with the pair of them, I know. LOL Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Good to see that she was successful with all of her sneaking about. Now I can't wait to see Sev's reactions to what she got him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Of course, part of the fun is seeing everyone's reactions to what people got each other, but Snape and Hermione will certainly have the most interesting ones, I think. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Whew! Damn, I knew Severus would turn on the heat with his letter. I liked that it was a mixture of hot and sweet. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL She was a fool to try to out-Sltyherin Snape, eh? Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
So clever of Hermione to think of invisible ink as a means of communications to Sev. And that letter she penned to Sev, no wonder he had to put it down. She's quite devilish! Oh, but I know Sev has something up his sleeve. If she thought her letter was something, he is going to give her more than she expected. I just know it!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Too right! No matter how much she tries to learn, she can't out-Slytherin a Slytherin. LOL Thanks again for reviewing! ;)
It took a lot of self-restraint for Sev not to get Harry into a lot of trouble, which he would have had every right to do. This is going to sound a bit odd, but I think it did him some good to discover Harry and Ginny because it helped to ease his mind and let him accept that Hermione really does feel something for him instead of Harry. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*nods* I totally hear ya. It was a horrifically awkward and angsty moment, but I agree that it left him with something worth knowing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Sev will love that leather bound copy of Phantom of the Opera if she can get it. It's such a thoughtful gift!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* I just thought of what I would like most if I could get my hands on a copy with everything I wanted, and that was it! LOL Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Tee hee, it was quite crafty of him to pull that little trick on her. All in an effort to sneak a few words to her. I can't help but wonder what they are going to get each other for secret santa as well as their private gifts. And also, what's with Colin? Could he have a crush on our Hermione?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*evil author grin* Hmmm, problems with Colin? *whistles innocently again* LOL Glad you enjoyed Snape's Slytherin wiles. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Hermione really acted her part (in the classroom) around Sev so well, enough so that it made him doubtful of her true feelings. Poor guy. He's just been though so much that he feels as though he don't deserve her. He needs to stop thinking like that... srsly. He is a great catch for her.
I love how you have Hermione thinking that she wants to be the one screaming "Severus." I am sure he is more than willing to oblige her when time comes. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pets poor Severus* Yeah, he's still uber-insecure. As for screaming his name... *whistles innocently* LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I wonder what Sev is going to come up with to find a way for them to spend some time together. And wow, Ginny is as sharp as a tack!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I'm sure they'll work something out. ;) Thanks again for reviewing! :)
oh. my. god. i think my heart just stopped. I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! :DD
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*grabs defibrillator and rushes toward
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
* Clear! *zaps* Keep that heart pumping! ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Hehe, I did not see that coming. It is hilarious that Hermione's mum has a fangirl crush on Sev. Hermione must be totally mortified.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Cool, so I managed to keep you on your toes, eh? LOL Yeah, writing Dione is way too much fun. *snerk* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
That you did. It was such a pleasant surprise, too!
Hmmm, he let it slip. It's sweet that he could let his guard down enough to rest with her - it bespeaks of an immense amount of trust, especially for him since he has higher walls around himself than the Great Wall of China.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Too true. Oh! You should totally see the commission art pennswoods did of the scene in this chapter: http://s4.photobucket.com/albums/y116/Good_Witch/Awesome%20Snape%20art/?action=view¤t=IMG_0650.jpg and http://s4.photobucket.com/albums/y116/Good_Witch/Awesome%20Snape%20art/?action=view¤t=IMG_0649.jpgI was over the moon when I got it. *squees* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
I did see the art commission pennswoods did; it was amazing. :)
It was really sweet of Hermione to touch his hand to get the point across, letting him know that she truly wanted him. Oh, he wants a taste alright... a taste of her. Sev's humour and that delightfully naughty kiss made this chapter as good as one that would have a lemon in it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces and squees* This chapter... I doubt I could have had more fun with it. It was a blast to write! I love innuendo, and I've been told that my superpower is to be able to take anything anyone says and somehow turn it into something naughty. LOL I think it's fun as all get out, so I had to do it here. Glad you enjoyed it so much, and thanks again for reviewing! :)
You certainly write one hell of a sexy Snape.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wicked grin* Glad you like it! LOL I write what I would certainly find appealing, so I'm glad others do too. ;) Thanks again for reviewing! :)
*tugs at collar on shirt* Whew! That was an almost indescribably hot scene between Hermione and Sev. A little bit of indulgence can go a long way.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL *cough* Affecting, was it? *cough* ;) Glad you *ahem* enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wonder what Hermione will come up with to prove to the others how extraordinary Sev is. But if you ask me, they should already think so. I mean, look at how talented that man is, and not just with his voice.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*nods* Yes, this. It'll be a hard row to hoe, since Snape himself has been cultivating their enmity for so long. But, Hermione's up to the challenge! Thanls so much for reviewing! :)
Hmm... Perhaps I am reading something into this that isn't really there, but it seems as though Dumbledore was a little too eager to send Hermione and Sev off alone. And for overnight stay with her parents as well. I can't help but wonder if Albus already has an inkling of what's going on between them. (Pardon me for rambling a bit.) The overnight stay is going to be an awful temptation for both of them, and poor Sev. He's going to be meeting her parents - I can only imagine how difficult/awkward that is going to be for him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, you have no idea how right you are about temptation and awkward... ROFL!!! I had SO much fun writing these next few chapters. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Amazingly beautiful. The tension and power between Hermine and Severus is incredible - I can feel it as though I am in the same room as them, witnessing the scene first hand. Oh, and Sev is definately right. Hermione will have to be warned about Ginny. I get the distinct feeling that as much as Sev and Hermione try to hide what they mean to each other, Ginny will be the first to figure them out. That girl is right perceptive.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I have to admit: Ginny is my shameless self-insertion. Not in that I want to have Harry (NOOOO, Snape for me, please!) but in that she does what I would do and thinks the way I would think. LOL I love that you feel like you're in the story with them. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
I had wondered if you had perhaps created her to be something like yourself or someone you knew. I could just tell because she has a sort of familiarity about her that extends beyond the hp world.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! Yup, she's my shameless self-insertion and Neville (later) is my guilty pleasure. :) And you just made me all warm and fuzzy inside. *hugs*
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
:) You know, not enough is done with Neville as a character (not in your story, but within the books as well as the fandom). He has so much untapped potential that many just don't see because he is portrayed as bumbling and forgetful, but he really is powerful. I look forward to seeing what you do with him.
That was quick thinking on Hermione's part by asking Dumbledore to allow her to continue styling Sev's hair for the show. It made for an excellent excuse for her and Severus to see each other and no one would suspect anything.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*ding ding ding* Got it in one! LOL One doesn't have to be a Slytherin to come up with stuff like that... it just helps. *snerk* Thanks again for reviewing! :)
So glad to see the change of events between Hermione and Sev.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, it was nice to get away from the angst and have some happy. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
The situation that happened with Hermione and Harry certainly wasn't pretty, but it took something major to make her realise she didn't care for Harry the same way he does her.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Indeed. Not pretty at all. Which is why she's so miserable about it. *knows that gut-wrenching feeling all too well* :( But, like you said, it does help her know her own mind! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Very sexy kiss between Hermione and Sev. I just knew they'd give in sooner or later. I am now wondering what she hit in her room that made her fall.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wicked grin* Oh, there will definitely be giving in. *waggles eyebrows* LOL!! Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Evil! But a perfect place to leave the chapter. I love how he prosposed!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL I know it was evil, but it was indeed a necessary one. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)