“He is enigmatic as always. I sometimes think he is waiting to see how the war plays out, so that he can take credit for the good and deny any knowledge of the bad.”Just like a politician.  Waiting to see how the cards fall.  I think this is what makes [SL]Dumbledore so sickening to me.  Well Lariope, you didn't let us down!  This chapter truly kicked ass--it lived up to my every expectation.  My favorite moment was when he asks her what her surname is.  I'm not even sure why, but that just really tugged at my emotions.  He wants to belong to someone and have someone belong to him.  Such a simple thing, so many people have and take for granted, but to him, it's everything!  Beautiful. 

Oh.. gah. Amazing. Some images just linger, like Hermione pressing her head against her hand as she rests it on Snape's scar. And some lines linger, like: "It would have… it would have been nice to work with someone. Someone bright. Someone organized. ... But that was not worth thinking about." Heck, I could just quote the whole chapter back at you, which would be stupid... you wrote the thing. So take a bow already while I go recover my wits.

This chapter leaves me without words. It was wonderful.

That was so gorgeously evocative that I found myself holding my breath whilst reading it. (Remember -breathe!) Also thankyou for updating so quickly as well as producing a chapter of wonderful quality. I really have loved this story, and how it sinuously interweaves and enriches the original story. I particularly liked the no-nonsense matter that you had Hermione deal with Snape's Patronus (as I was thinking she may be upset by the doe) - considering the dangers and what they had just faced you reminded me that it really was a small issue and should be put aside so they can revel in each other's company.  Also you have prompted me to re-read DH just to wonder where they can have a chance to contact each other. Psst...I like yours better. I look forward with interest to see if and where you deviate from canon.On giving Dumbledore a piece of her mind or a spell - why not just a good ol'fashioned Muggle solution - A punch to the nose. It has worked before...Cheers.

This is such a wonderful story, and I've been enjoying this thoroughly, even if I haven't been leaving reviews.One criticism however - you had Snape calling You-Know-Who "Lord Voldemort."  Wasn't there a Taboo against the name?  And for Snape, wouldn't that have been doubly cursed?  Would Snape have meant to call him The Dark Lord?I look forward to your updates.

Oh, the chapter we've all waited for.  The emotion you write between them is exquisite, and all the more intense because they share so few of these moments.

This was an amazingly beautiful chapter, and, considering how fantastic I have told you repeatidly I think this story is, that should tell you a whole lot!

I love that you let them see eachother, to be able to hold eachoter, that should give them some strength to go on. I also loved how they see through Dumbledorts lies and manipulations, not to mention seeing the faults of Dumbledorts plans. I really, truly hope that when we reach the end, you will let Hermione have her moment with Dumbledores portrait, if not to curse it, to at least give him a hefty dose of her mind. I have among my favourites, one special story as my top favourite version of how the last book should have been written. That one was written before DH, and though there have been several fantastic stories built on DH, they have not been able to outdo that one. This story however is on a fast track to be my number one favourite, it is absolutely truly fantastic! I am so looking forward to read more!!!

I read this chapter with the biggest smile on my face. The beginning and the end are so very well written. I'm utterly in love with the silent communication you've got going on here.And the love scene is utterly heart-breaking. I like it more with every re-read. Beautiful darkness and very subtly crafted.And thank you for the A/N mention, I've never got one of those before. I'm really glad I could help.

I'd been looking forward to this - the one time in DH where we know for sure that Snape was right there with them (and with Hermione suitably left on her own, heh!) - and this was every bit as wonderful as I'd expected! Thank you.Both of them have such heavy burdens to carry. As short as this time together was, I'm so glad they had it.

Both of them have their hands full.  You so a superb job blending canon into your story.

That was beautiful.  I could almost feel their emotions and I'll confess to welling up at the end of the chapter.Bravo!

Beautiful interlude.  I wonder if they conceived a child then.  It would be very fitting if they did.  I'm continually in awe of how you're reshaping canon.  Well done indeed.

Oh thank you for giving them some time together.  I think they will both be stronger for it!  I am glad they are disregarding Dumbledore's wishes and communicating for fully of their missions.Well done as always.  I would have held your hand.Irish

That chapter was so sweet, the brevity of their stolen time together, and the passion with which they made the most of it :)

I like the total trust they display in each other. It's certainly something that'll sustain both of them until the end.

Amazing chapter!I've never thought of what Snape must have felt like when he returned to Hogwarts as Headmaster. You wrote it brilliantly!You have a wonderful ability to play with  my heartstrings...this line was so moving: He had imagined himself revered, in charge of the formidable school, of raising Hogwarts to some vaunted new height. He had, and it shamed him now, imagined himself beloved.I think Severus needs a hug and I need a tissue!So well done my dear friend!

Interesting way to construct the chapter - a behind the scenes scene of DH - good writing. I can see him telling them they would be turned out into the street if they disagreed. Cannot wait to see what happens next.

It sounds horrible, but at the end of this chapter I had to laugh. I really like to know how Hermione will be dealing with her angry husband. Her husband! It's interesting that she thought of him as her husband. How will things develop? *is curious*Kisses

Love the tension in this chapter! Keep up the wonderful work!

Amazing ... a brilliant background story paired with authentic protagonists - and every chapter revealing new astounding aspects!! The idea of their direct communication through the portrait is just exciting! GREAT!! MORE!! Please... :-)

He yells when he's worried.  How cute if you aren't involved, and how amazingly annoying when you are.  Good chapter. 

Nothing but the best as usual.  You are really a talented writer.  I love the fact that it is following the DH book but in a even more dramatic way.  Don't get me wrong I liked the last book but it rang true at the end that it was a children's book.  Wraped up with a nice pretty bow around the trio.  Also needless to say that 90 % of the more interesting adults died.  Please continue on writing I am very proud to say that you have at least one very dedicated reader!!!!  

ooooooooooooo htis is good yeah you are really doing so wonderful with this story i cant tell youthank you for yet another wonderful chapter

You and your cliffies, Love the chapter, can't wait for what's coming!

Tee hee... Can't wait till he hears about the horcrux, irritable man. ;-)  Of course, he has every right to be irritable, poor, miserable Severus.  :-(  Another excellent chapter.  Looking forward to the next one!