Great story! I'm enjoying the style you're using to write this fic. On top of being different/refreshing, it flows nicely and highlights the characters well.

Looking forward to future chapters! Nice foreshadowing in that last chapter.

Really? He didn't mean a word of it? I'm a bit surprised but it's a pleasant surprise. Please keep up the good work.

Well, I suppose if you get those bad feelings of your chest first, you can move on. Pretty please?

I wonder if this is getting even worse before it can get better...

Ouch.Definitely curious to see how this breach heals up...

Just brutal--both of them.  Not sure how they can recover any kind feelings after that interaction.

Oh, that was great!Looking forward to more of this.

I love stories that start out with them 'hating' each other!The pay-off is always worth the wait.

NOW we know why he wears black!I have a feeling this is about to get very interesting ...

Very intriguing start.Looking forward to seeing this develop.

This is really interesting.  Are Ron and Hermione going to get divorced? 

Oh WOW.  Talk about tension.  Well done!

What happened to Snape's magic that he is in a muggle hospital? Who is paying the bills? Okay enough questions I'll just shut up and go to the next chapter.

I have save this for when I'll have time. I almost regret doing so. But it's never to late to repear a mistake, is it? ;)

I don't mind the wait.  Slow builds work for me.Story's still damn good.  Wish the chapters were a little longer, but hey, can't have everything...

Hooray for the long, slow build-up.  Gives me that much more time to enjoy the story!

well written.  be careful with your homophones, "wild mane of hair" instead of "main".

Please don't make these so short, I just get into the story and bam, it's done.  This is so good!

A slwo building-up is actually better with such premises as yours. I admit I would have liked to read the entire meeting in this chapter. I'm eagerly waiting for more.

Good new chapter! I only wish they'd be a little longer... ;o)

LOL, Sheryl must be wondering what on earth is going on!

Bouhouhou!! Now I must wait to read the next. *sniffing loudly* Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon.

*wild grin spread on my face* Hope the "meeting" is for next chapter.

I have save this for when I'll have time. I almost regret doing so. But it's never to late to repear a mistake, is it? ;)

Love this story! I hope that you will continue