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GrangerSnape100 Beautiful Bird
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Beautiful Bird

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

Beautiful Bird

sshg316

51 Reviews   |   51 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )

Drama Angst Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? GrangerSnape100 3,421 Words 4 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Even the bravest of men can be brought to his knees, especially when faced with his worst nightmare.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four


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sshg316

Member Since 2006  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 376  |  199 Reviews Written  |  1,365 Review Responses

Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction.  I read and sometimes, I write.


 

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9/10

MsTree

Okaaay? And maybe not so clear. It's still a good story. I hope we get an explanation soon. ^_^

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

*grins*  It's slowly be revealed, little by little, but the full story isn't known until the last drabble of the last installment is read. ;)  Thanks so much!

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh, I'm so glad that the baby is all right. Potion, what potion?

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

All will be explained by the end ... promise. :)  Thank you!

10/10

Becky

Awww man, how sad..I'm crying now..Poor Severus, why can't it be known that the baby is his?? Oh I hope they will be together in the end...Well done!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Thank you so much!  I promise all your quesitons will be answered by the end!  :)

10/10

JoKK2

So now my question turns to why -- Is the war still ongoing? Does he feel unworthy of love? or Was she already married and this was "for the best"?  I look forward to seeing if I am anywhere near the mark.  Thanks for posting such an excellent story, JoAnne

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Why is definitely the question.  As to your other questions ... i can only answer one.  The war is over.  as for the other ones ... answers are coming.  Um.  Eventually.  ;)Thanks so much!

0/10

FruGal

Was the baby given something so it would look like a Weasley instead of a Snape? I can hardly wait for your update.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

The answer to your question is in the installment I just posted! :)Thanks so much!

0/10

kimbee73

They gave the baby Polyjuice wow.....this is interesting....

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

The did.  The question is why.  *waggles eyebrows*  More on that later!  :D   Thank you!

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

Oh, dear, what have they done?!  I love his tenderness, and her fear is alarming.  What's happening here?  With just a few carefully chosen words, you've made me long for so much more!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Thank you so much, my friend!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!

10/10

Anonymous

Wow. Very moving and nice.

Fine work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! More tomorrow!

0/10

sara lady dalian

This is very interesting.  I like the inclusion of the lullaby and wonder at it's meaning to the story as a whole.  I look forward to the continuation.  Sara

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Thank you so much!  The lullaby was a fabulous find -- totally by accident.  But it fit the story so well, I just had to use it.  It definitely does have meaning -- the next verse, especially.  (We'll see it again in the third installment.) ;)Thanks again!

0/10

pookah

Oooh, that's interesting!  was that baby a redhead when she was born?  Hmmm?  Looking forward to  more.  Thanks

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

That is the question! The answer is in tomorrow's installment. ;)  Thank so much!

9/10

JoKK2

This is a very interesting story.  I am not sure what it is about this that makes it feel so different.  Maybe it is the last exchange that tells me that something else is going on.  I look forward to seeing just what that is. Thanks, JoAnne 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

This one is a slow build, I think.  Some answers with each installment, until all is revealed in the final one.  Thanks so much!

10/10

makaem

Oh, I can't wait. 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Thank you!  More tomorrow! :)

10/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Red curls? Don't tell me they kidnapped her baby with Ron!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Maybe ... maybe not!  LOL  ;)  The answer to that will come in the next installment! Thanks so much!

10/10

Becky

OH MY, Is the baby Severus's??  This is excellent and I can't wait to see what happens next..

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Very good question.  The answer comes in the installment! :)Thank you very much!

10/10

MsTree

What a beautiful beginning. I am looking forward to seeing the rest of the story.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Beautiful Bird)

Thank you very much!  More tomorrow!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Severus' singing is so sweet, but surprisingly in character the way you write it. Yay for all the support and love.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Thank goodness for potions, it is Severus' baby! But you raised more questions than you answered, fiend.

10/10

Jinxie

Ah, nicely resolved and loved the story title's meaning.  Well done!

10/10

Jinxie

Interesting twist that everyone's in on it, but whom are they hiding her from (and why)?

10/10

Jinxie

Hmm, trying to disguise the baby...  Smart baby - doesn't want to be disguised does she?

10/10

Jinxie

Very intriguing start.  What have they done??

0/10

sunny33

Aha, so it was Greyback!  Very clever. :)

0/10

sunny33

Does Voldemort want the baby?

0/10

sunny33

She is his! :)

0/10

sunny33

Hmm, a mystery. I like mysteries! :)

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