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Longing

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

Longing

livvy6

505 Reviews   |   505 Ratings, 0 Likes, 387 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 67,270 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Andromeda (Black) Tonks Argus Filch Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lavender Brown Lucius Malfoy Parvati Patil Peter Pettigrew Poppy Pomfrey Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Severus fails a test for his allegiance to Voldemort. The fallout from one night will change everything.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18


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livvy6

Member Since 2007  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 655  |  625 Reviews Written  |  6,131 Review Responses

I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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10/10

ylang_two

Boy I wish DH worked out like this.  Most everyone I like survived the final battle.  And, best of all, Hermione and Severus can be together (once he heals up, that is). 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Absolutely! This is my therapy *snerk* I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!Thanks,Livvy

10/10

ylang_two

Dark Magic is really fanged, a two-edged sword wounding the recipient and the wielder.  The sooner Hermione and Severus give to each other, the better.  Ginny's encounter with Tom is sickly seductive.  *ugh*  But give the girl major props, she pulled off the Nimue/Mata Hari thing and got the info!!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Yes she did, and she was right on! I'm glad you saw the seductiveness of Dark magic. It is so deceptive.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

ylang_two

Brava!!  That was a masterful performance on Ginny's part.  a 10!  Tom's ah, lust has been stoked to an all time high. . . . and what will Lucius' reaction (or punishment) be now that his precious charge has eluded him?!? 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thank you!As for Lucius, Voldemort's mind will begin to deteriorate, now that he has no way to get his daily potion. He will remain fixated on Ginny much to his downfall.Thanks,Livvy

10/10

ylang_two

Wormtail finally gets his comeuppance.  *sigh*  Too bad Tom never learned how to love.  He must be destroyed.  I hope Ginny can pull this off.  And the chappie ended in the best way for our girl Hermione.  You go girl!  Put your foot down and don't let Snapey force you into sex!!  Be that Gryffindor lioness.  R-E-S-P-E-C-T.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

It was vital to Hermione's development that she live her life on her own terms. THen she will happy with herself, because then she will be true to her soul.Thanks!Livvy

0/10

kimjo2

what a thoroughly delicious chapter.  she is going to knock his eyes out and his socks off!  i can hardly wait for the ball.  thanks so much

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! It's going to be wonderful. I hope you like how I have written it.Livvy

10/10

morgaine_dulac

I almost stopped reading at the roses. I hate roses. But I am very, very glad that I went on reading!This was an adorable chapter. And I even have a favourite line: Whenever you are ready, I will be waiting.Lovely!/M

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! I'm glad you carried on past the roses :) Hope you like the Ball scene. It's in the queue!Thanks,Livvy

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter...I liked the sense of anticipation and the other girls jealousy.  It's nice to see Hermione shine.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Yes, it's now Hermoine's day in the sun. I hope you enjoy the Ball scene.Thanks!Livvy

0/10

reets67

After so much angst it is a really lovely way to finish. I like how you have her reflecting on her previous behaviours and feelings it adds a reality and depth to it. Plus it also shows how far she has come emotionally. Boy is Snape sappy! While somewhat OOC I think that he had it in him and you bring it out well  - after all he stayed faithful to Lily for years even though she had passed on.Thankyou for this. Looking forward to more.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Yes, I was nervous about Snape being OOC, but after all he put Hermione through, he deserved to be held to the fire ;) He knew Hermione needed more than a regular engagement /proposal and to be shown and proven that she was the only witch he wanted. So I took the risk.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy

10/10

Nessa

Woow! I love this.And Severus oohh im loving him too, my heart melted when he said "This is only the beginning'' . I can't wait for the ball! I' glad Hermione is feeling better about herself now, maybe she will open up to Severus more now, i know i certainly would. hehe. x.x

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

LOL! Me too! I hope you enjoy the Ball!Thanks,Livvy

10/10

makaem

Together, Severus and Ginny make a pretty good Fairy Godmother. I find myself smiling as I write this,  in the beginning, I would have said that was impossible.  I didn't see how she was ever going to be okay. Well done.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Hermione is a smart girl. She really got off track, but with some help and also all of the work Severus did to make things right helped her along the way. I'm glad you liked how I wound this tale.Thanks,Livvy

10/10

FlittterKat

How romantic. I like how Hermione is feeling about herself now. Now, it's just the normal every day worries any girl has at the start of a relationship. Very romantic chapter, look forward to the ball.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! After all she's gone through, she deserves this attention and adoration.Livvy

10/10

Sampdoria

What a wonderful chapter! Both Hermione and Severus deserved this after all they have been through. Severus gets my most sincere compliments in knowing just how to make Hermione feel wonderful:-))

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

He's pulling out all the stops for this one! I hope you enjoy the Ball scene.Thanks,Livvy

10/10

Phoenix_Fire

"This is only the beginning. Love, Severus"Melted my heart as did the poem.  I loved the beginning with the flowers.  That was so romantic.  I am very much looking forward to the ball...especially Snape's reaction to her all dressed up for him.  Excellent chapter overall, and sitting on the edge of my chair until I get more. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

So glad you enjoyed it! They deserve this moment for romance. Next chapter is in the queue.Thanks,Livvy

10/10

Muggline

Ohh, things are definitely looking good here... Thank you for a _very_ nice chapter.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! Hope you enjoy the Ball!Livvy

0/10

rhiannon113

Fluffy, girlie stuff, lemons and shopping, you are too kind! Even a die-hard smart-ass has to sigh! Very nicely done.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

I figured after all the crap I put her through, she deserved a bit of fluffy girl stuff :)Thanks,Livvy

10/10

debjunk

Oh, I can't wait to see his reaction to her in that dress!  It's nice to see Hermione see some of what others can see in her now.  Oh, he's so romantic!  Everything he's done in this chapter has just been so... wonderful.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Oh, yes! Our Severus has a lot to make up for, and I hope the next chapter will be to your liking!Thanks,Livvy

0/10

soccermom

I loved this chapter. Looking forward to the ball.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! I hope you enjoy it :)Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! I hope you enjoy it :)Livvy

10/10

blue artemis

Every girl should have a princess moment.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Absolutely! Hermione especially deserves one.Thanks,Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Absolutely! Hermione especially deserves one.Thanks,Livvy

0/10

snapefan2007

EEE!  I love it!  I can't wait for the next chapter to see severus's reaction!  EEE!  can't wait!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! It's going to be a hot night, for sure!Thanks,Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! It's going to be a hot night, for sure!Thanks,Livvy

0/10

kimjo2

wow...great update.  i think severus was right about harry.  glad to see he came to his senses, too.  bless hermione's strength.  thanks so much.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Yes, Harry is really being strong and understanding. Hermione will have to stay strong and brave through all this.Thanks,Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Yes, Harry is really being strong and understanding. Hermione will have to stay strong and brave through all this.Thanks,Livvy

0/10

draegon_fire

What a way for Voldemort to be brought to his knees, so to speak. I think he has more in common with Severus right now than he would ever think. They both long for someone so strongly, that it's making them crazy. I hope Severus doesn't muck things up again. He almost lost Hermione again, and so soon after his confession to her.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Voldemort and Severus are opposites in their relationships, Voldemort doesn't care for Ginny's well-being while Severus cares deeply for Hermione and wants the best for her. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Voldemort and Severus are opposites in their relationships, Voldemort doesn't care for Ginny's well-being while Severus cares deeply for Hermione and wants the best for her. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy

0/10

sunny33

She is frustrating and frustrated!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

LOL! Yes, she still has some sorting out to do.Thanks!Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

LOL! Yes, she still has some sorting out to do.Thanks!Livvy

0/10

snapefan2007

that was a great chapter!  I can't wait to read the next one and see what happens with voldydork and Ginny. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

I just put the next chapter in the queue. It is going to be good. I think it is at least. I hope you enjoy the "meeting" of these two!Thanks,Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

I just put the next chapter in the queue. It is going to be good. I think it is at least. I hope you enjoy the "meeting" of these two!Thanks,Livvy

10/10

Nessa

OH this is great! He really does love Hermione, and i'm glad he repects her wishes. Can't wait to find out wHAT happens between them two and of course Ginny's encounter with The Dark Lord!.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

The next chapter will be the showdown between Voldemort and Ginny. I hope you like it!Thanks,Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

The next chapter will be the showdown between Voldemort and Ginny. I hope you like it!Thanks,Livvy

10/10

braye27

I could imagine Severus' revulsion to having to be Polyjuiced into Wormtail.  But it worked out very well.  In the end, Wormtail ended up dead, his body changed into a stone, and placed into a pickling jar in Snape's laboratory.  Just deserts, I say!Voldemort will soon be under the full effects of the Amortentia Potion, and it is of some small comfort to know that Ginny will hold the balance of power when she is brought before the Dark Lord.  Still, I feel sorry for Ginny.  Her thoughts must be full of fear.  She will have to be very brave to pull this off.Hermione is regaining her self-respect, and she and Severus handled their interlude in his private room very well.  When he realized that she was not ready, he  "grabbed her by the waist and pulled her to him. “Now, that’s my sweet one. You are right. No man or wizard should try to make you feel less because they can’t have their way. It isn’t right for you, Hermione. That makes it wrong for us to continue,” he whispered softly.He took her back to Gryffindor tower and kissed her hand. I can't wait to find out what happens next.  Ginny's encounter with Voldemort will be intense, and I can't help but wonder about how all of this will effect Harry, Hermione, Severus, and Minerva.  Great chapter!Beth

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! Things are going to happen fast and furious now. Ginny will rise to the occasion, as will Harry, and I just hope everyone likes how I resolve the relationship between Hermione and Severus.Thanks,Livvy

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

You hope everyone likes how I resolve the relationship between Hermione and Severus?  Now you have me worried, Livvy... what do you have up your sleeve now?  Hummmmm........Beth

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

I am concerned people will think I have made him too fluffy in the end when the moment arrives. I worked hard at it, but it still nags me. Don't worry. I give my readers a lot of angst, but it just makes the happy ending all the more sweeter ;)Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

Thanks! Things are going to happen fast and furious now. Ginny will rise to the occasion, as will Harry, and I just hope everyone likes how I resolve the relationship between Hermione and Severus.Thanks,Livvy

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

You hope everyone likes how I resolve the relationship between Hermione and Severus?  Now you have me worried, Livvy... what do you have up your sleeve now?  Hummmmm........Beth

Response from livvy6 (Author of Longing)

I am concerned people will think I have made him too fluffy in the end when the moment arrives. I worked hard at it, but it still nags me. Don't worry. I give my readers a lot of angst, but it just makes the happy ending all the more sweeter ;)Thanks!

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