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Hogwarts Castle The Dunnest Smoke of Hell
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The Dunnest Smoke of Hell

1: I.One.

The Dunnest Smoke of Hell

Scarlet Crystal

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Drama Angst Epilogue What Epilogue? Hogwarts Castle 2,766 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Bellatrix Lestrange Blaise Zabini Dean Thomas Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lavender Brown Lucius Malfoy Luna Lovegood Neville Longbottom Ronald Weasley Scorpius Malfoy

Harry Potter lies face down in the dirt, surrounded by a ring of Death Eaters in the Forbidden Forest. Narcissa Malfoy approaches, lowering hand to the boy's chest to see if he yet lives. Everyone knows what happens next: Narcissa announces Lord Voldemort's triumph as Harry plays dead. What if, in this crucial moment, Bellatrix did not trust her feckless sister? What if she strode past her celebratory comrades and knelt by the Dark Lord's fallen enemy, wishing to feel for herself the absence of the boy's heartbeat? This is the story of that tragic turn of events.

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Member Since 2006  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 3  |  0 Reviews Written  |  0 Review Responses

Hello! My name is Scarlet. I have been writing for as long as I could remember, though admittedly my first writing impliment was a bright red marker. I amĀ a retiredĀ beta at PI, the Perfect Imagination HP Beta directory.

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Stella Stargazer

Excellent beginning. You've apparently set the world on end quite neatly. I also like the reference in your title. Are you implying that Bellatrix will become a Lady McBeth-like character? (I just finished up a run as Lady M for a production at Halloween).

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MajesticJester

Oh, wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. I hate it when I'm rendered speechless, but you seem to have done so. Oh do please continue this tale!

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Southern_Witch_69

This is very interesting. Good start. I love the characterization of Bella in the beginning. Perfect.

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