The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Potter Place Fun Shoes, Glorious Shoes
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for Shoes, Glorious Shoes

Shoes, Glorious Shoes

1: -

Shoes, Glorious Shoes

sunny33

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Potter Place Fun 637 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy

Lucius has lost his memory. He finds himself in a strange place when it returns.

Start Reading

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: -


About sunny33

Validated
Author

sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

Author Website
http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

Reviews for Shoes, Glorious Shoes

Displaying all 18 Review
10/10

Anonymous

Poor Lucius.  At lesat he woke up in a place he understood.

Author's Response: Yes.  He can relate to fine footwear. :)

0/10

salvamea

THE surrounding for a Luscious Malfoy to return to his magical self.wow.And he takes the new status quo very much like a man who is used to do the right decision at the right time. or to align himself to the not so very bad situation he has been living in for six months now.you made a really nice nest for him, he has no reason to grumble. which he definitely doesn't do.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Lucius may be a snob, but he knows what side his bread is buttered on!  :)

0/10

elsolel

Did the spell just wear off, or did something trigger the return of everything? 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

You know. I have no idea.  Perhaps it was the shoes.  Theres a lot of power in a good shoe, you know! :)

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

I agree.  Sometimes, you just have to wear the right shoe to make yourself feel right. 

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is lovely! Mmmmh, Lucius and shoes *happy sigh* Will there be more of this? *bats eyelashes*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

It's definitely a bunny waiting to be fed, isn't it? :)

0/10

kimjo2

i can see lucius in a shoe store like that! great stuff! abr forever! (anybody but ron) thanks so much

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

LOL Glad you explalined abr! :)

10/10

luvsev

At least he has a good end with Hermione at his side.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Yep! :)

10/10

MollysSister

What a facinating premise!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

LOL. Thanks! :)

10/10

lyn_f

Lovely piece!  I loved the way you integrated the Italian shoemakers in the beginning ... loved the interaction between the two - it's like a fragile thing, with a blossom of hope stuck in the mix.  Of course, time would only tell if Lucius is genuine about wanting to change his ingrained ways and beliefs ... but of course, one cannot do that overnight ...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Where there are shoes, there is hope! :)

0/10

mock_turtle

you should expand this.  the possibilities are dazzling me.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

That thought had occurred to me! :)

0/10

Mooncat

LOL And here we all thought it was Narcissa with the passion for shoe-shopping! (G) Thanks for the giggle, ma'am - much appreciated. Cat

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

We know Lucius is the perfect consumer! :)

10/10

debjunk

Great job!  Glad to see he's not letting his old prejudices affect his possible chance at a relationship.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Thanks, deb! :)

10/10

braye27

Lucius is clever and mentally quick on his feet... the Slytherin knows a good thing when he sees it, and I not talking about shoes!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Yes, he's no fool!)

0/10

Alexial

Very nice :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

thanks! :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Amazing shoes, sexy wizard?? What a lucky girl!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

What else could you want? :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, I really like how Hermione handled the situation, first agreeing to teach him how to be Muggle and having the patience to go with him shopping for shoes! And Lucius, realizing that in fact things are looking up, the possibilities, if he only allow it to be. I mean, he seemed so much nicer than before: no raging, demanding, scowling, or throwing a fit. Definately some hope here...Good job.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Hopefully he can truly abandon those ingrained prejudices. :)

10/10

snitchette

That doesn't surprise me one bit that Lucius loves shoes. After all he's always been a fashion victim. Well done my dear.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

! :)

10/10

FlittterKat

Very Slytherin of Lucius, it's a brave new world out there and he's quick to capitalize on it. Good for them. Wonderful story, I enjoyed it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Shoes, Glorious Shoes)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Anonymous

Did you just call Draco a pansy for being cowardly?  What about all the innocent flowers who will take offense at this careless, derogatory use of the word.  Yeesh.  Your beta must have sucked.



I mean, just look at it.  Does it look like a coward to you?

Author's Response: It is mainly yellow... :P

Displaying all 18 Review

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules