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Beth

1: Beth

Beth

Becky

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )

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Severus Snape

Severus and his daughter share a moment...

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Chapter 1: Beth


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Becky

Member Since 2005  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 7  |  424 Reviews Written  |  109 Review Responses

Married, 55, LOVE ALAN RICKMAN, Severus&Hermione Ship, Art Major, draw, and paint...Love to read...And also love to cook!

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0/10

kimjo2

awww.  i can just imagin him as putty in his daughter's hands.  thanks and smoochies

0/10

sunny33

Very cute! :)

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you!

0/10

astopperindeath

this was lovely to read! thank you for posting!

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed it..

10/10

snitchette

LOL! That's so cute. Beth IS so cute. THe people aorund may have not laughed but I did.I wonder what he'll when she'll be his student...

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thannk you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it...Yes indeed, he will be the ever doting daddy and watching her like a hawk! LOL

10/10

Homunculus

You conjured a big smile on my face with this little story! Isn't Beth just the sweetest little thing? I love how she is persistent enough to get daddy's hugs and kisses right there and then...!!

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Well she does have a few of his traits...and she has him tied around her little finger....Thank you for reviewing...

0/10

Clairvoyant

So sweet with a dash of funny.  'Dunderheads'.  She learned from the best.

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you for reviewing, OH YEAH she sure did!! LOL!! Isn't she sweet!

10/10

sregner

As a "daddy's girl" I can relate to Beth...so sweet

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you for reviewing,  she most definately is a daddy's girl...

10/10

poopotter

You know what being Snape's daughter she can take on the Formidable wizard head-on.....i love baby talk too....especially liked her saying...."dundheads"....Guess she gave Severus another sarcastic name for his students....hehehe.......love this little story....thank u for sharing this Plot Bunny!!.......

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you for reviewing, Yes she most certian;y can take him on...seeing as she has him wrapped around her little finger!! LOL!!!

10/10

Sampdoria

Oh, what a beautiful image you make of Severus with a daugther so very much her fathers child:-)) If only JKR had had such a marvellous idea:-))

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Wow, THANK YOU!!  I really appreciate your review...Yes I'm afraid Beth is a chip off the old block...LOL!!!!  Very much her fathers child!!!

10/10

Anonymous

YAY! Daddy!Sev is the best! *o* Do you imagine how he'd act then Beth is 16! :O I pity the guy who dares to ask her out! ;)

Author's Response: ROFL...Yes, really...Poor Boy, but I quite imagine Beth would set her Father straight...LOL!!!!  *Plot Bunny* Runs to nearest room to hide...Arrgghh!!   LOLOL!!!!! Thank You for your kind review!!!

10/10

debjunk

Oh! So sweet! I love baby talk.

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you for reviewing, I love baby talk too....and can't you just see Severus's Scowl...LOL...bless him!!

10/10

braye27

This is a delightful glimpse into the lives of Daddy!Snape and his precious little girl.“Bye, bye Daddy, teach dundheads now.”   How sweet it is!Beth

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you very much for your review..I so enjoyed writing this, It was a plot bunny that wouldn't go away!!

10/10

beaweasley2

Yes, Beth, Daddy funny. This is so adorabley cute. Beth could be an entire story all on her own. He owuld be the bestest Daddy in the whole world. LOL Just like this drabble proves he is.

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you Bea, I really appreciate your comments..Wow I'm humbled!!!

0/10

dword324

Well the 'dunderheads' were totally terrified... Snape was SMILING!!!Very sweet and amusing,Thanks for sharing,  Donna

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

10/10

Jinxie

LOL, too cute!  “Bye, bye Daddy, teach dundheads now” - love it!

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you so much for the review...I'm glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing it!

9/10

moiramountain

Out of the mouths of babes.....  Your gentle story touches a soft spot with me because my eldest daughter's middle name is Elizabeth and when she was small we called her Katie Beth.  She could wrap her papa right around her little finger, too !!

Response from Becky (Author of Beth)

Thank you so much for your kind review, I have always loved the name Beth..and yes she has her daddy wrapped around her finger. Thanks Again

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