But Then
karelia11 Reviews | 11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
If only… he’d not been fooled by her ecstatic responses to his ministrations. Had he been more lucid, he’d have recognised it all as fake.
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Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
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*o* So, so pretty! I love how you played with the Lily issue, and I loved Eileen! I wish she was alive to see her son happy! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Eileen is underused in fandom. :D
=o) I love the interaction with Eileen. I really think she is underused in both cannon and fannon. And I still can't believe I inspired you to write this. It still has me grinning ear to ear.I am so happy he ended up with Hermione. Thank you for this.
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Your drabble was tremendously inspiring! And I have to say, if the space in my head weren't taken up with Lucius and Narcissa, I'm sure Eileen would enter sooner rather than later, lol. I really do think she needs more fandom love. :)I'm happy you like it!
Another wonderful story under your belt. Thank you for sharing your gift of story telling with us. This was beautiful. Love will alway be waiting for us no matter who we are. We just have to be patient.
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Thank you!
Cute and lovely. Happy endings for Severus make me smile :)
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Thanks!
Nice sequence of events. Just enough to tell the story. :)
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Thank you! :)
I think it's better for his state of mind that he ignores who his birth father is. After all, he is born out of love, if one sided. And that's the most important. That and finding love of course.
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
I absolutely agree! Knowing, in that case, would probably be far more upsetting. Thank you for your review! :D
Lovely story, thank you so much for sharing!
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
This was really sweet. I like the snippets and the flow of the piece.
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Thank you!
Awww! And thank you for not having him pining away for the dead. Although that is quite romantic in itself, it's nice to see him willing to move on from both Lily and Bella.
I'm always excited to see a new offering from you!
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
Your kind words brought a huge smile to my face, thank you!
I like the way he decided to see if love would find him. It was fun.
Response from karelia (Author of But Then)
:) Thank you!