The Sunshine of Kindness

MMADfan

4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Humor Drama Hogwarts Castle 1,113 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Early one summer’s morning in the Grimmauld Place kitchen, Remus tries to sway Sirius. Flashfic written in response to the CR Pick Three Challenge #6. (Challenge prompts at the end of the story.) *Rating increased due to proliferation of spam 'reviews'.*

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Chapter 1: The Sunshine of Kindness

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Note 10 December 2015: I've been unable to write fanfic the last couple years, but I haven't abandoned my works-in-progress!

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10/10

Anonymous

Cute! :o) I loved the red boxers!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alcina! Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

This was a fun little way to end my day. The interactions between Remus and Sirius were perfect. I am with Remus about Kreacher. If he'd only been nicer to hte little elf, there's no telling how things would have ended. Great job with the challenge!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of The Sunshine of Kindness)

Thanks very much! I'm glad you found the characters on target. :-)Thanks for the review!

10/10

Riposto

You almost got them all in! And did it unobtrusively. I didn't realize you were trying to build the story around certain words until the A/N. Harry's image of Sirius never quite reconciled with the reality of his behavior, and Kreacher's betrayal of him made for a certain amount of poetic justice. Too bad he never took Dumbledore's advice a little more seriously.

Response from MMADfan (Author of The Sunshine of Kindness)

I'm glad it was unobtrusive! I thought it was a tough challenge. :-)Glad you enjoyed it! I agree about your assessment of Harry's image of Sirius -- but he was just a kid. I'm sure as he got older, he got a more balanced view of the man. Thanks for the review!

10/10

Anonymous

LOL!

What a pleasant, engaging read! Fine job with the prompts! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you found it diverting!

The prompts were toughies, I thought -- quite a true challenge.

Thanks for your review! :-)

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