Wow. Just, wow.

Yikes! What a power play. Nice work.

Dark, but rather fitting for those two I think. It almost seems natural, at least to me, for Hermione to have an addiction to something given her nature as an overachiever (is that conclusion a little too far fetched?) and of course Snape is in the perfect position to provide her drug of choice given his profession. How easy it would be for him to transition from a run of the mill apothecary to a pharmacist of another sort. 

I cant' believe what I'm going to say; I hope they never end to gether. The realtionship between the two would be too weird.

Wow.  That tells a lot is so very few words. :)

Oh... that's kind of - deviant - isn't it? Are they long-term lovers so this is just something different - or does he not ever penetrate her at all? 

Wow, that's a serious mess of codependence.  This is not really my cup of tea, and yet for some reason, I liked this. Weird.  So nice job to you.

Fantastic and overshadowingly dark.  Thank you for sharing!

Dark, interesting.

Oh.Yes, that is the verbose response to your story. It rocked me to the core, taking me on a rollercoaster ride that was faster than the actual thing. Three twists in the end? Slave of sex, whore, drug addict, her sex slave. You are a genius! Wow. Very impressive.

It looks like there's a lot of inter-dependence between these two, and not a healthy relationship.

Ouuu this is delightfully dark and twisted. I do mean that as a compliment. I like it a lot. Severus as a drug dealer seems to be an easy side job when one is a potion master.

Mmmmm ! Quite the wicked and shocking little drabble. Very titillating in a disturbing way. 

I'm speechless. (Typeless?) Brava!