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Potions Under Duress An Orphan For Christmas
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An Orphan For Christmas

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Chapter Eighteen

19: Chapter Nineteen

20: Chapter Twenty

An Orphan For Christmas

Bardsdaughter

193 Reviews   |   193 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 29,275 Words 20 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Original Character Poppy Pomfrey Minerva McGonagall Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy

Sometimes an unwanted gift becomes the most treasured possession.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty


About Bardsdaughter

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Bardsdaughter

Member Since 2012  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 52  |  23 Reviews Written  |  325 Review Responses

Old enough. I'm a writer by heart, using the wonderful HP universe (specifically Severus Snape and Hermione Granger) as a canvas for my imagination as I learn the craft and strive to be published one day. In real life, I am a professional with a doctorate in my chosen field.

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http://bardsdaughter1.livejournal.com
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Reviews for An Orphan For Christmas

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10/10

MsTree

Lovely name. Hermione's got her Rose. And Severus' compliment to Minerva was just grand. ^_^

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

0/10

draegon_fire

I love how you are showing the backstory of how Hermione and Severus got together. And the absolute love they have for Rose is amazing.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you!

10/10

Sampdoria

I love this story, absolutely love it. With such parents, Godparents and grandmothers, the little one will know love and feel safe (and probably be more than a little bit spoiled:-))

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

10/10

just harry

Oh what a beautiful way to show the back story of how the two got together.   Love the babies name, and Narcissa calling Lucius a troll I laughed out loud at that   a troll indeed 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

10/10

expected aberrance

This is great so far. I have questions about the some things, the backstory being hinted at, etc, and am very much looking forward to a next chapter. Cheers!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading!

10/10

phoenix

Talk about a convoluted plan. I can definitely see his misgivings, but something tells me a cute little baby will take car of that. Still curious about the Weasleys.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Hang in there. More answers are on the way. Thanks for reading

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Hang in there. More answers are on the way. Thanks for reading

0/10

draegon_fire

I'm glad Hermione came up with the idea to keep the baby. It has NOTHING to do with the Weasley's,  although they are a part of the problem. Hermione knew Severus loved the baby immediately, which is why she made the suggestion. I don't think Severus or even Hermione would've been able to give the baby up.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

You're right, they couldn't willingly give up the baby. Thanks for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

You're right, they couldn't willingly give up the baby. Thanks for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

10/10

deedeebug95

A really wonderful story so far I am glad to have something new to read!! Kudos~dee

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

10/10

mikimoto

The circumstances of conception are NEVER the baby's fault.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Amen! And Severus and Hermione will try their darnedest to help her overcome those circumstances. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Amen! And Severus and Hermione will try their darnedest to help her overcome those circumstances. Thanks for reading!

10/10

mick42

Love is a funny thing, once you are in it, you can't get out. Severus and Hermione love that little girl, and that's all there is to it.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

They surely do. That love may come in handy a little later in the story. Thanks for reading!

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Love always comes in handy, especially with babies.  

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

They surely do. That love may come in handy a little later in the story. Thanks for reading!

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Love always comes in handy, especially with babies.  

10/10

just harry

Oh he will be a great father.  Look how he holds her as if she is a great tresurer.  She will always be his first born no matter how many they have together.  Bravo great chapter'

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you for a fantastic update. You managed to make this perferctly emotional without being soppy, and I loved it!!!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

10/10

MsTree

Awwww! Sevvie's falling in LURVE!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

He sure is! And he may fall even deeper before the story's done. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

He sure is! And he may fall even deeper before the story's done. Thanks for reading!

10/10

luna_lovegood

I love the relationship between Minerva and Severus! It's always how I would have pictured it. Cannot wait to see more of this awesome story

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Me too. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Me too. Thanks for reading!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

So much that isn't apparent, the shifts from one time line to another, and even the way these familiar characters are now so foreign, make this an absolutely maddening read (the canon-loving OCD side of my brain is screaming "what??"), but at the same time I can't put it down for the same reasons, it's not predictable the way fanfiction often can be. (wow that's a giant run on sentence). Please update soon so we van figure more out of this strange tale.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading. I hope the story continues to intrigue.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading. I hope the story continues to intrigue.

0/10

phoenix

Nice job presenting us snippets of the past that parellel events in the present. It's really an engaging way to help us discover where the characters are and how they got there. And something tells me I know what Hermione's simple solution will be. Though simple may not mean easy.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you! 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you! 

0/10

phoenix

Oh, poor Severus on so many fronts. At least he's doing this to help someone, to help the little rosebud.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Yes, he is. I've always thought beneath his emotionless exterior, he's always tried to have the best interest for the most people at heartThanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Yes, he is. I've always thought beneath his emotionless exterior, he's always tried to have the best interest for the most people at heartThanks for reading!

0/10

phoenix

Hmmm... wonder what's up with the Weasley's that she's so determined to keep the baby from them? Other than Ron being a complete arse. Yay for the little one pulling through.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Time will tell about those Weasleys. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Time will tell about those Weasleys. Thanks for reading!

0/10

phoenix

Yay, Poppy. And I love how she has a second wand that she can use in this special circumstances.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Well, we all know the less the Ministry knows, the better. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Well, we all know the less the Ministry knows, the better. 

0/10

phoenix

Yup, kicking Ron's arse very high on the to do list. After saving the little on that is. Good thing Severus is more of a know it all than Hermione.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I had that exact same thought myself on several occasions.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I had that exact same thought myself on several occasions.

0/10

phoenix

I know I feel the overwhelming urge to kick Ron's arse at this point and Severus doesn't even know what Hermione found. Your descriptions are amazing. I can almost smell the filth.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

0/10

phoenix

That is really an amazing picture you paint of one of the worst places in a civilized world. And Ron's definitely an arse and I can't believe Seerus has gone along with protecting him given what he was going to do to Hermione.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Severus always has his reasons. I just hope I...he can make them good ones!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Severus always has his reasons. I just hope I...he can make them good ones!

10/10

mick42

What in the world drove Ron to such insanity, and how could Molly condone his behaviour? I'm hoping that Hermione and Severus will decide to keep the baby, and make sure that she is not tainted by her fathers sins.  

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

There is always a little push that sends someone over the edge. And for Ron and his mother, that push is...

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

In the next chapters right? evil author.

You know I love you really. offers flowers.  

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

There is always a little push that sends someone over the edge. And for Ron and his mother, that push is...

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

In the next chapters right? evil author.

You know I love you really. offers flowers.  

10/10

just harry

It is always hard to loose someone even if you did not know them when you know the horrible things they have been forced to endure.  It must bring back for Severus horrible memories when he had no control of the situations he was forced to be in.  I hope Hermiones decision is to adopt the baby and keep her safe with them.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I hope you won't be disappointed in the next chapter then. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I hope you won't be disappointed in the next chapter then. Thanks for reading!

10/10

braye27

“And the answer is among the simplest I’ve ever reached.”I think Hermione will want to adopt this little rosebud.  We don't yet know what Severus saw in the mind of the baby's mother... or what sent Ron into this spiral to hell... or what Molly Weasley has done to earn Poppy's and Severus' enmity.  I can't help but wonder if Molly's behavior might have been what drove Ron to addiction and ruin.  But I'm almost certain there will be a fight over this baby between Severus and the Weasleys, and I don't think Molly will like it when the allegations are made and the proof is provided.This is a whale of a tale you're telling here!!!  Thanks.Beth

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading. And I assure you, all those questions wil be answered...eventually.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading. And I assure you, all those questions wil be answered...eventually.

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