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An Orphan For Christmas

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Chapter Eighteen

19: Chapter Nineteen

20: Chapter Twenty

An Orphan For Christmas

Bardsdaughter

193 Reviews   |   193 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 29,275 Words 20 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Original Character Poppy Pomfrey Minerva McGonagall Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy

Sometimes an unwanted gift becomes the most treasured possession.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty


About Bardsdaughter

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Bardsdaughter

Member Since 2012  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 52  |  23 Reviews Written  |  325 Review Responses

Old enough. I'm a writer by heart, using the wonderful HP universe (specifically Severus Snape and Hermione Granger) as a canvas for my imagination as I learn the craft and strive to be published one day. In real life, I am a professional with a doctorate in my chosen field.

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http://bardsdaughter1.livejournal.com
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Reviews for An Orphan For Christmas

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QuarterBloodedWitch

Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to updates! ;)

10/10

braye27

A name.  A name...  Severus keeps referring to her as "rosebud," so I'll go out on a limb and guess that they'll name her Rose.Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!!!Beth

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

10/10

braye27

Hermione wants to keep the baby as their own!  It's clear to me that Severus already loves the child, too, but the pitfalls and logistics of carrying out this ruse will be difficult.  However, with Poppy and Minerva already on board it will be much easier than without their help.I was scanning the reviews and saw the one draegon_fire wrote where she remarked, "I don't think Severus or even Hermione would've been able to give the baby up."  And you replied, "You're right, they couldn't willingly give up the baby."  That tells me that at some point they are going to have to fight for this child.I still have tons of questions!  Where is Ron and what is he doing?  Just how much do Harry and Ginny know?  Why would Arthur demand the return of the baby to his family?  What did Molly do?  And who else knows about it?  And why was something not done about Molly's shenanigans earlier?And now I'm off to the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work.Beth

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I'm hoping to answer all those questions and more! Keep enjoying the story. And thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I'm hoping to answer all those questions and more! Keep enjoying the story. And thanks for reading!

0/10

jectex

Wonderfully touching story. I Can't wait to see how it all ends.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

10/10

June W

Yes!!  Even Minerva has a chance at a grandchild of her own, despite the sadness of her own family history. Everyone gets a second chance thanks to the baby. I am hoping that Ronald never finds out, but he's bound to, so I hope he never gets his hands on the baby. Thank you for updating!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

You're welcome. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

You're welcome. Thanks for reading!

0/10

phoenix

Now that the plan is being executed, lets see how flawlessly it goes. At least the little girl didn't get her father's ginger hair, that will make the deception simpler.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

The genes are definitely working in her favor at this point. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

The genes are definitely working in her favor at this point. Thanks for reading!

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pearl city princess

Love, love, love this story, so happy I found it and gave it a chance.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

So am I! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

So am I! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

10/10

deedeebug95

I really like this story, I do hope that you will give us a little more back ground. I want to knw more about Severus anf Hermione's relationship and Ron's addiction maybe I have forgotten some and need to re-read previous chapters. I am really bad about forgtting details while reading WIP's! I love your writing style and really am glad to have found you!!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you!

0/10

pearl city princess

Wonderful chapter update, love the interaction between Severus and Minerva, it was heart warming without being sickly sweet. Can't wait to see what the problem is with Molly.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

10/10

mick42

A lovely chapter, so gentle and honest, I Hope Molly isn't going to be the fly in the ointment.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

10/10

just harry

What a beautiful chapter, so much love between them.  The little one is so lucky to have them for her family, she will trive and grow in to a real beauty. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

10/10

Bettina

Insecurity, thy name is Severus... I loves Hermione's rasoning! They'll have to decide what to tell the girl herself--and when. I'll hope she develops some academic traits, too. Not quite from Percy, but a bit of Bill's or Charly's gene pool isn't too much to ask for, is it? Like the other reviewers I'm confused what Molly's role will be. As a mother she should at least concur that stability is key in a child's development. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

And there is just something so...alluring about that insecurity, isn't there? Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

And there is just something so...alluring about that insecurity, isn't there? Thanks for reading!

10/10

Sampdoria

Oh how I love this story:-))

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you did! Thanks for reading.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you did! Thanks for reading.

10/10

MsTree

Hmmmm. If they're adopting the baby, what's Molly got to do with it? Basically, the baby was abandoned by its birth parents and, while Molly might have some rights as Ron's mother, what she doesn't know won't hurt the baby. However, I have the feeling that Molly will put her two knuts in. ^_^

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Two knuts and then some, I bet. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Two knuts and then some, I bet. Thanks for reading!

10/10

mikimoto

I am so curious about what the issue is with Molly and what will they do if she proves to be a red-head.  Will she be the cuckoo in the nest with all of their future black haired children?

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Never fear, there won't be a ginger thread among the black tresses. As for Molly... give it a few chapters and see if your question is answered. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Never fear, there won't be a ginger thread among the black tresses. As for Molly... give it a few chapters and see if your question is answered. Thanks for reading!

10/10

snitchette

It's very different from what I've read until now and I've read a lot. And I simply LOVE it despite the délicate subject. I hope to read more soon.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you've liked it so far. Thanks for reading.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Glad you've liked it so far. Thanks for reading.

10/10

Jinxie

Ooh, wasn't expecting him to do that!  Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy the chapters to come.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy the chapters to come.

10/10

Jinxie

Glad to see baby survive!  Looking forward to seeing what's going on with the Weasleys!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading!

10/10

Jinxie

Ooh, more implications!  Keeping the baby out of Molly Weasley's clutches souds rather ominous.  And, just how many babies were there before this?Off to read the next chapter!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

All will be revealed. Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

All will be revealed. Thanks for reading!

9/10

Jinxie

Oh, my assumption was right.  Is Ron going to walk in on them any minute now?  Off to read the next chapter!

9/10

Jinxie

Wow.  What a chapter.  Off to read the next one to see if your implications and my assumptions are correct!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thanks for reading!

0/10

anoesis

The poor girl. I'm dreading finding out what Severus will find in her mind. The idea of him and Hermione as guardians to the baby is sweet.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of An Orphan For Christmas)

Thank you for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

0/10

anoesis

Even more intriguing! Just what is Severus hiding from Hermione about the Weasleys?

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anoesis

Yay for Poppy! Although why dies the baby need to be kept from Molly? The plot thickens!

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anoesis

The poor wee thing! Still, it sounds like she may have a very capable set of rescuers!

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