Oh my, I'm  breathless. I did so enjoy that immensely.  I really loved reading his thoughts and then hers.  A very entertaining romp indeed.

I've read this before, and I have to say, this is my favorite part:

"And it’s the oddest thing, but I am certain that today almost all the seventh year Gryffindor girls and some of the Ravenclaws were staring at me like … well, like they wanted to devour me. How very strange…and even the more intelligent ones appeared to be having problems answering my questions. Never mind, it must be something going around…"

Nice set up.

Wow! I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke.  You have quite a gift.

Poor Severus!Hope Hermione lets him get some practice!!

lovin it please carry on with it

That was - as Ron would say - bloody brilliant!

That was - as Ron would say - bloody brilliant!

Very comical. I especially liked the Deflating Draught scenario...great idea. Keep up the wonderful work!~Jen

Way to weather the storm, Severus!  ;)

very nice....i love how this all plays out

I read this in the waiting room at the doctor's office.  *snicker*  I should know better than that.  Congratulations on expecting (your first?), and condolences on the morning sickness and general malaise. Feel better soon.

That was absolutely magnificent: great plot, hilarious twists, good  character voices. I loved it - Snape's Slytherin scheming was great and a wonderful twist to the challenge.

That was fantastic! Your flow is superb, stringing the action along slowly without falling into overly detailed descriptions. Fantastic! That is all I can say.

I?ve never laughed quite so much while reading a PWP. This was certainly a PWP comedy. Deflating Draught? Brilliant! I particularly love a Snape who is no sex god, but has the same insecurities and aspirations of any, normal man.

My favorite line? ?Ginny is a moron.? Honest inner dialogue, during the ?main event? no less. Again, brilliant!

One correction. ?Severus? breathing becomes more and more laboured until his movements suddenly lose all control and he is thrusting erratically inside of me, hitting places deep within me with is arousal.? I?m assuming it should be ?his?. The one and only error I found in the entire piece.

Thank you for sharing this! I will recommend it to anyone in search of a quick, amusing, and thoroughly satisfying read!

Loved the first person aspect of this.  Poor Hermione, she had no idea his hours of foreplay were due to that deflating potion.  LOL.And the end was great.  I like that he's totally oblivious to the fact that every girl knows he's a sex god!

Excellent. I particularly like the one on one relationship our couple enjoyed without Sirius and Remus getting under everyone's feet. LOL, I know, I'm in the minority. Mission: Sev series is very promising and I believe will be a lot better than Mission: Dobby! Hugs, warty (who is writing Mission: Buckbeak as you read this)xxx

Brilliant, love!  That was just too fucking brilliant!  The whole idea of Hermione ending up thinking Severus is a sex god because he had a little accident and had to improvise is just killing me.  I hope he's smart enough to keep up the foreplay, even without the Longbottom effect!  Loved it!  :)

::kisses your poor hand... offers a tissue for your nose... and makes peppermint tea for your morning sickness::  You definitely get votes for heroism for writing under such distressing conditions.This was very funny considering that despite all of his handicaps, Severus ends up being a sex-god after all! 

This just cracked me up, but then, your work usually does. Thanks so much for sharing! I don't know where to go to vote, but I'm sure you'll at least be in the top 10, if not the winner. Will vote when I know where...Gred and Forge sing a song in honor of you.

Here are a few more jellybeans--funny take on the challenge--poor Snape, a deflating potion *snicker*--but lucky Hermione. :)

This was the first in the series wasnt it? ((sighs happily))

:)