A Single Tear

Helena Rickman

4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst Smut Horror Psychological sshg_promptfest 1,940 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Antonin Dolohov Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Molly Weasley Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Dreams can haunt us.

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Chapter 1: A Single Tear

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10/10

braye27

You've written a whale of a story with a very clever twist. Well done!Beth

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

Thank you Beth! I'm glad you liked it. Helena

10/10

mick42

I really want to say " how horrible for Hermione " and it is but it is a double edged sword. On one hand Hermione is having to take dreamless sleep to escape Severus' worst memories, on the other hand she is getting to know him in a way no one else ever could, and she will also be able to tell his story so the world will know that he was a true hero.

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

Very true.My imagination hopes she will finish telling his story before she becomes too much of a strung-out junkie in a nasty alleyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Helena

0/10

JA Lowell

That was odd. Not bad, just -- as you warned us -- disjointed. Definitely some powerful imagery!

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

I've never understood stories with dream sequences and the dreams are told in a perfect order. Mine jump all over the place. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Helena

Response from JA Lowell (Reviewer)

Agreed; your dream sequences read as very visceral, it's definitely a nice touch!

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

I've never understood stories with dream sequences and the dreams are told in a perfect order. Mine jump all over the place. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Helena

Response from JA Lowell (Reviewer)

Agreed; your dream sequences read as very visceral, it's definitely a nice touch!

0/10

The Contessa

Dear Helena Rickman.I really loved this. The dream sequences were very well written and completely believable.Keep writing ... please.

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

Thank you! I am especially proud of this piece. I appreciate your letting me know you enjoyed it. Helena

Response from Helena Rickman (Author of A Single Tear)

Thank you! I am especially proud of this piece. I appreciate your letting me know you enjoyed it. Helena

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