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Potions Under Duress Letting Go
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Letting Go

1: Umbrage

2: Confession

3: Ablution

4: Release

5: Pleasure

6: Confiscation

7: Deliberation

8: Strategem

9: Retribution

10: Endurance

Letting Go

notsosaintly

220 Reviews   |   220 Ratings, 0 Likes, 256 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 34,893 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Saving someone from the savior of the wizarding world is not always easy.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: Umbrage

Chapter 2: Confession

Chapter 3: Ablution

Chapter 4: Release

Chapter 5: Pleasure

Chapter 6: Confiscation

Chapter 7: Deliberation

Chapter 8: Strategem

Chapter 9: Retribution

Chapter 10: Endurance


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notsosaintly

Member Since 2005  |  38 Stories  |  Favorited by 707  |  843 Reviews Written  |  2,009 Review Responses

Founder of The Petulant Poetess.  Editor and full-time mother.

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9/10

HogwartsHoney

Oh no you DIDN'T !!!

DAMMIT !!!!!   

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

*snicker*  Yup.  I believe I mentioned there'd be a spot of plot coming up...

0/10

nightqueen

OH!! YES!!!  Revenge is sweet!! What do you get when you put the brightest witch of her age together with the head of Slythrin?  Wicked Perfection is what you get!!  (grins evilly) Harry and Ron won't know what hit them!! I can't wait to watch them squirm!! Beautifully done! You have a wonderfully wicked imagination!! I can't wait to see My favorite couple's plan in action!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thanks,

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

!  I will most certainly put my wicked imagination to good use. 

9/10

HogwartsHoney

That was a 'pleasurable' read, NSS !   *takes notes* 

Looking forward to the confrontation with Harry, and I wish he wasn't such a prat. *sniff* 

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Yeah, the really good stuff with Harry comes up in the following chapters.  Hope you enjoy my 'evilness'. 

10/10

HogwartsHoney

*cough* 

<i>Kicks Sunshine aside</i>  I'll take him! 

Fan-tas-tic, NSS.  I know I've read part of this before, but I haven't seen my reviews *quietly goes insane over possible senior moment* 

Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)

Too much html these days!!  *doh*!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

It's okay, dear... perhaps you are looking on the wrong archive (am posting it over on Ashwinder too). 

And if you want Severus, I guess you'll have to kick me aside too... and about half the female readership, possibly even a quarter of the male readership... 

Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)

LOL.. yes, I'm aware that our Sevvie is a hot commodity!

Ashwinder.. yeah, probably there!  *nods happily and goes back to reading* 

0/10

Anijade

oh god that was great although I want them to suffer I think you have a great plan in process and I want to see them grovel for being such arses

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Oh, yes.  I think grovelling is a necessity.  Would be fun to watch too. 

Response from Anijade (Reviewer)

quite. I can so see those two thinking they are in the right even though they know what they did was abomitable grrrr

10/10

ylang_two

Oooooh, I can't WAIT to see what CAn of Whoop-Ass Hermione and Snape intend to gift to Mssrs. Potty & Weasel.  I actually like to read those Tarnished Two as real gits & prats as you've got them.  (HG/SS all the way!!!)

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Wonderful!  I am so enjoying writing them as Top-Notch Prats.

10/10

Shdwcat27

Severus is so deliciously evil. The reaction to revenge should be entertaining.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Oh, yes.  I agree ... 'deliciously evil'.   

10/10

Melissa_Snape

If I were Hermione, I would have hexed them, and then had Severus go ahead with the potion to make them impotent. Give them a double whammy...They deserve it. Bastards...It's odd, but I was just thinking about re-reading this story. And then there was an update. That's been happening a lot lately. Anyway, I'm very glad you've updated! I do wish that Hermione could've hexed them, but I think the potion might make up for it. I do hope you update again soon.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thank you.  Believe me, Hermione wanted to hex them.  She really did!!

10/10

Miepje

Oooh, very, very nice! That potion sounds like a very good way to get revenge *evil grin* Great chapter, can't to see Harry and Ron's  reaction... ^^

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Me too!

10/10

karelia

Aaaahhhh! I love your devious mind! What a treat, to punish prat! Harry in such a way. LOL

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Well, like I said at the end, it was phoenix that suggested the potion.  I was going in a different direction for the end of this chapter (a more lemony direction, to be honest), and it just didn't feel right to me.  It ground all the gears to a halt. 

However, I have to admit that I can be very devious when pushed to be.  *snicker*  As I think I've proven now with this chapter. 

10/10

breastlady

You go girl!  Cannon is over rated.  Breastlady

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Hahahaha!  No kidding.

10/10

Bentwaters

This was a wonderful story of love, anger, revenge, and acceptance.  I like your a/n's at the end explaining about how "even smart girls don't always know when to let go of a relationship".  It's so true.  Hermione had every right to be angry and bitter, and some could possibly say she held onto it for a little too long, but you just can't dictate how long it'll take to get over large hurts and betrayals.I liked that Ron was the more "reasonable" one of the boys.  Ginny is a total hoot.  I loved her contributions to this immensely. ^.^But Severus is the icing on the cake.  He's so wonderful all through this.  Still very much "himself" but wonderful all the same.  All in all I just enjoyed this so very much and thank you many times over for gifting us with it.  ^.^

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Now that is an excellent review!  Thank you!  I love to see what people think about the different characters I portray.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

AUGH!!  I was gone for 12+ days, and that's all you posted??~Lotm*arming her ship with canon cannons stolen from the Pirates of the Carribean exhibit--hye, the exhibit was closed for remodelling, so they'll never miss a few in all the dust and confusion!*

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Don't you just hate it when they close the Pirates of the Carribean?  That is my favorite ride. 

Hope you had a wonderful time!! 

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Indeedy I did!  Flirted with a few fellows, got mistaken for a woman 8 years younger than my age, blistered my feet walking darn near everywhere, and had a lovely vacation!~Lotm

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I'm so glad.  A good vacation is a much-needed thing.  Isn't it great to be mistaken for someone younger?  I love it when someone asks for my ID.  I know that I look older than someone who NEEDS to be carded, but just someone having that doubt ... "Oh, we should card her just in case ..."  I love it!

0/10

ladyofthemasque

*kicks your computer chair*So where's the rest of it, hmm?~Lotm

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Dang it!  I'm having a writer's block.  I have the idea, but the words ... I have to squeeze them out one by one and it's driving me mad!!

10/10

Miepje

Argh!  I've got a sudden urge to throttle Harry and Ron. Or send them to Azkaban for kidnapping. Or hand them over to Filch with a carte blanche. Or let Severus hex their protruding bits of. Or... or... well, a Hermione who's really angry is probably even more scary!! *shudder*  It could be very therapeutic for her *lol*I really like the story so far (and hope for more soon, hint hint):  the thoughts and feelings of Hermione and Severus are sad, lovely and touching; the lemons are sweet and hot; Harry and Ron are deliciously irritating (if there is such a thing ^^); and this cliffie is absolutely evil! Makes me look forward to the next chapter...Thanks for the great read!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

You are very welcome.  The next chapter is about 50% done.  I'm still trying to decide exactly how terrible Harry and Ron will end up being.  LOL.  Okay, they're pretty terrible.

Response from Miepje (Reviewer)

The more terrible you make them, the more terrible you can get them hexed *evil grin*

10/10

Melissa_Snape

I hope Hermione gives them exactly what they deserve. Castration would be good...or hexing them until they can't get it up would also be good. Oooh, and then I hope Severus hexes them as well. They must pay! Please update soon!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I'm working diligently on the next chapter.  I'm not sure I've done Harry and his bad behavior justice though, so I may have to work on that before posting. 

  Harry's been a very bad boy.  Oh, and so has Ron.  I won't forget about him.

Response from Melissa_Snape (Reviewer)

Actually replying to the Author's reply is a bit new...but I promise not to ramble. I just wanted to say that they have been bad boys, and deserve punishment!  I'm glad you're working on the next chapter. You're one of my favorite authors...so thank you!

10/10

maegwen

Gah!

bastard!Harry makes me so frustrated, but he's definitely compelling to read. I agree that a bit of turmoil was needed, though -- Like Severus said, it's the combination of the sour and the sweet that makes something delicious. 

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Ah, yes.  The combination of sour and sweet, the essence of all relationships.  Right: without the turmoil, things would just be too happy and too ... boring.  It did need it.  Thanks for the review!

10/10

Shdwcat27

Excellent fic. I started it over at ashwinder, and couldn't wait for more. Please update soon.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

LOL  I guess that means the first chapter is up over there.  I didn't expect it to go up that quickly.   But that is an excellent sign that you couldn't wait for more.  I am working on the next chapter.  Trying to decide how much of Harry's BS I'm going to put in the next chapter.

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

are there a lot of chapters left.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Believe it or not, I do not have this all outlined (like a good author should) so I'm not sure how many chapters are left.  If I had to guess, I'd say about two or three.  It depends on what I want to do with it.  I am working on the next chapter, though.  Of that you can be assured. 

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

ahaha.. i figured it was ronnie boy... (hears "Let's get it on" playing in the background). Oh, i can't wait for the next bit now. .muahaha

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Can you imagine walking in on that one? And I was so kind to my readers to not describe the memory in full detail, don't you think? (*eeheehee*)

southern_witch_69's response: I'm thinking I'm a wicked little girl. I don't mind a bit of Harry slash (giggle)

10/10

Kismet

Aww, Snape wants to be the hero for once. I hope Hermione lets him. Will Harry & Ron be dragged out of the closet or will Hermione keep quiet? If I was her, I'd drop a quiet word with Molly. :)

10/10

alicat

Oh! I do hope you update this one really soon, I love Harry is an asshole fic's lol...Poor old 'mione, hope our Sev' can make her feel better ;) Please feed us more soon. xox

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Yes, I think our Severus is going to be making Hermione feel a hell of a lot better...soon.

10/10

magicmistress

Oh... I don't know who those boys should be more afraid of, Severus or Hermione.  Should be fun...  --  B

10/10

HBAR

And everyone got what they deserved.  The end. This was a nice, quick, fun read.  I really enjoyed it.

8/10

TheBloody

I hope you have Severus hex both their sorry arses so thoroughly that they won't be able to buggar each other. And Severus, of course being the gentleman that he is, lets Hermione have a go at the rest of their pathetic selves.  Well whatever you have planned it should be entertaining Evil

 

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I sincerely hope it will be entertaining.  Though, all these wonderful reviews are giving me good ideas. 

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