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Potions Under Duress Letting Go
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Letting Go

1: Umbrage

2: Confession

3: Ablution

4: Release

5: Pleasure

6: Confiscation

7: Deliberation

8: Strategem

9: Retribution

10: Endurance

Letting Go

notsosaintly

220 Reviews   |   220 Ratings, 0 Likes, 256 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 34,893 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Saving someone from the savior of the wizarding world is not always easy.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: Umbrage

Chapter 2: Confession

Chapter 3: Ablution

Chapter 4: Release

Chapter 5: Pleasure

Chapter 6: Confiscation

Chapter 7: Deliberation

Chapter 8: Strategem

Chapter 9: Retribution

Chapter 10: Endurance


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notsosaintly

Member Since 2005  |  38 Stories  |  Favorited by 707  |  843 Reviews Written  |  2,009 Review Responses

Founder of The Petulant Poetess.  Editor and full-time mother.

Reviews for Letting Go

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10/10

karelia

I'm glad it's not the end of the story, but to leave such a cliffhanger? *glares* LOL, excellent chapter, I really enjoyed reading it!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I am still shaking my head at the cliffhanger bit.  I don't think I've ever written one as terrible as this one before.  Something stole over me while driving my daughter to school ... maybe it was evil!Mom who hadn't had enough coffee.  Whatever it was, the thought certainly woke me right up.

10/10

MagicAlly

Brilliant that you updated and are continuing with this even if it is with an evil cliffy!  Hopefully Severus will ride to the rescue but maybe not before Hermione has given them what for.  Fantastic writing as always and can't wait for the next chapter.

8/10

mekareami

Oh I do hope she opens up a can of whoop ass on them! Great story, look forward to more :) Thank you for writing

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Happy that you are liking it, regardless of the boys being a tad evil.  I'm enjoying playing up their nastiness.

0/10

alicat

Wow, I havnt seen an update for this in an AAAAge...I'm so happy to see it continued!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Hey there!  How are you doing?  I haven't seen you around lately.  Thanks for reading and thanks for the review!!

Response from alicat (Reviewer)

*eep* Iknow! ..I've been MIA for a bit, had a baby girl 10 mnths ago, so my own updates are sadly lacking at the moment :DI've been doin really well though, a bit tired but its to be expected lol. Everytime I get a chance at time to myself on the PC i'm to interested in speed reading through everyone elses updates before i even think of my own lol.It was really good to se this updated though and I cant wait for more :D Alicia xox

9/10

Shanastay

Well done.  I have to admit that a secret indulgence of mine is reading fics that paint Harry in an other-than-perfect-hero light.  Love the interaction between Severus and Hermione.  There's that sex-god I love.  Can't wait to read more!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thank you.  I'm trying really hard to keep Snape as in-character as possible while giving him a romantic side.  And just wait... Harry will be even less of a hero in the next chapter.

10/10

HBAR

Ah, sweet revenge. Now Severus and Hermione can live happily ever after.

10/10

HBAR

How very frustrating!  But I have confidence in their revenge abilities.

10/10

HBAR

Oh, the poor dear is worried about what Severus will think of her.  He must be beside himself with worry.  Stil hoping for that ass-kickin!

10/10

HBAR

Wow, real classy, boys.  Suddenly they care about her well being?  I hope Severus kicks some ass!

10/10

HBAR

My goodness, he is good to her!  And it appears he is reaping some benefit as well.  Is it bad that I look forward to the Harry confrontation?

0/10

Darque Hart

Great decision, to continue. ;-) You can't just say HG finds HP & RW doin' it and she leaves in a mad huff and that SS rescues her from her heartbroken flight into the dark and rainy night and later they spend one great night together ... what is that?? Heck, that can be said in one sentence! More, YES!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

*LOL*  Yes, it can be said in one sentence.  I had to twist the plot a little--or put some plot in rather.  Makes things more interesting.  It should increase the summary to at least three sentences.

 

10/10

Shishkeberry

Those jerks!  Who do they think they are?  They both need an arse kicking of the highest order.  And I will take great pleasure reading about it!  Nice lemons, by the way.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thanks.  The boys do deserve an arse-kicking.  I plan on giving it to them, but they'll earn it even more before they get it.

10/10

Miari

You are an evil evil author, to leave us hanging from this cliff as you have.  Do, please, rescue us soon.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I will do my best to "rescue" both the readers and Hermione.  We'll have to wait and see what those prat boys get up to...

10/10

siriusluv

so so evil....By the way great lemons.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thanks ... for both comments. 

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

i love this story update soon please

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Thank you!  I'm glad you are liking it.  I plan on working on this one and putting the other WIP aside until this is finished.  Hopefully it won't be too long until the next update.

10/10

nightqueen

OMG!!  What a truly evil ending!!! Well done! I knew we hadn't heard the last of dumb and dumber.  It was to perfect, oh, but now I'm hoping we see a very pissed off Severus! Hmmmmm, Angry, possessive and worried Severus to the rescue! (melting just thinking about it) As always this was a fabulous chapter.  So hot, sexy and just the right amount of humor! It is a pleasure to read anything you post! Thanks for making my night!!!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I think Harry and Ron really earned their 'dumb and dumber' titles this time.  I don't know if they'll be sorrier once Hermione gives them an earful or once Severus turns them into eunuchs. 

But I wouldn't really do that ... or would I?

Response from nightqueen (Reviewer)

 But I wouldn't really do that ... or would I? I certainly hope you do!! They deserve it after that little stunt!!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

*snicker*  I'll keep that in mind.  I've been in an evil mood lately, so I wouldn't be surprised.

10/10

HBAR

That was great!  I hope there are no regrets tomorrow.  There will certainly be hangovers and achy muscles.

10/10

HBAR

I have complete faith that Severus' skills will put Harry to shame several times over.  And I can't wait to read all about it!

10/10

HBAR

Well, that went better than expected.  Let's see if he can get the girl home before she passes out.  It seems the staff may soon have new fodder for gossip!

10/10

HBAR

It seems wrong to pass up an opportunity to accept kindness from a man who doesn't hand it out freely.  So yes, Hermione, you should just spill it.  I'd give Harry a piece of my mind, but now that these two are together, I've almost forgotten he exists. :)

10/10

themistresssnape

Obsolutely evil cliffie! But I loved it anyway! You are amazing!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Yup.  Thought it was about time I started writing evil cliffies.  This one was a doozie. 

 

10/10

Bjornsdotter

Yes, you ARE evil.....but I love it! I agree, a neat, clean ending wouldn't work with this story. As always i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers! 

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

You're right.  It didn't work.   I always wanted this story to have a bit of a plot, and if I had ended it there with a happy ending ... well, it would have been another 6-chapter PWP.  When I thought of this ending for the chapter it started out as "Wouldn't it be hilarious if..." (wicked NSS was out that day) and became "Oooh, I like that"!

10/10

PlaidPooka

Oh!  That was completely wicked!  If I didn't absolutely trust that you'll have Severus ride to rescue the damsel, I'd be right miffed!  Fabulous chapter, love.  I do hope you won't keep us waiting to long for the next! :)

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

*heh*  Yeah, I suppose it wouldn't be right of me to have the boys kill Hermione off or kill Severus off or brainwash Hermione to hate Severus ... Worried yet?

Response from PlaidPooka (Reviewer)

With your wicked mind?  I'm always worried!  Strange that I trust you so much...   All I can say is that you better send me a great big heads up if you plan to write anything that's going to make me cry uncontrolably!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

Nah, no tears.  It might get you a little angry at the prat-duo, but no tears. 

0/10

ladyofthemasque

--Can I kill the Boy Who Lived?  I'll kidnap Ron and throw him into a cell, so he can't sacrifice himself to allow the Boy Who Is An Utter Arsehole to be the Boy Who Lived Twice, I promise!~Lotm

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

They both deserve to be hogtied and whipped to within an inch of their lives.  They're nasty little blighters, and I plan on playing it up right.

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

YAYYYY!!  *does happy-jiggly-privateer dance*  My ship, my crew, and my canonballs are at your service, should you need them in this endeavor!  *mwah*  ~Lotm

0/10

cocoachristy

 Oh Harry and Ron!! Gits!! Now, you have got to update this faster than you have been!!! Please? LOL Loved it---Snape to the rescue!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Letting Go)

I already have half an idea ready on where it is going to go from here, and I'm thinking of finishing this before continuing with Tutoring.  I just can't keep up two stories at once.

Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)

I know what you mean! I have ideas for others, but refuse to start them until I finish the one I have going now. LOL I would likely confuse them!

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